Wizards are mighty.

Chapter 228

"Then, it's daily life."

Q version of Vic continued.

"For example, helping the nobles look after the shops, practicing spells and alchemy, which took a month. Now it is February."

“These daily activities can show the protagonist’s life under the influence of the nobility, while practicing spells and alchemy is also in line with his career development.”

“When describing the story, you can add some interesting events or difficulties, such as troubles encountered in the store, breakthroughs and setbacks in spells and alchemy practice, etc., to make the story more vivid.”

"Afterwards, Sean started upgrading his staff. He succeeded and reached level 13. It took one month, and his combat power increased significantly. He explained the settings and started the battle. It took three months."

"Upgrading the staff is an important part of improving the protagonist's strength. You can describe in detail the difficulties and breakthroughs in the upgrade process, as well as the specific manifestations of the improved combat power after the upgrade."

“Battle scenes can increase tension and excitement. Remember to describe the battle process and the strategies of both sides.”

"Continue alchemy and sell alchemical items for 6 months, and level up 14. During this period, you can describe the fights between nobles. September"

This part continues the growth path of the protagonist. The alchemy upgrade is reasonable, and the description of the noble struggle can enrich the background of the story and show the complex relationship of the aristocratic class.

Of course, you can also describe in detail the causes, processes and results of the struggle, as well as the role and influence of the protagonist.

The son of a nobleman gets into trouble and takes refuge with the protagonist. The hostile noble uses this as an excuse to come and test him (you can write that one of the soldiers has seen the protagonist).

Two apprentices came and attacked forcefully, but were repelled by the protagonist. Then the noble arrived and the shock of both the other party and the noble was described. After the other party left, the noble thanked the protagonist and gave him wealth, etc. Describe the protagonist's reaction. You can also write about the reaction of the maid behind the house.

“The plot is full of drama, and the series of events triggered by the nobleman’s misfortune can drive the story forward.”

“The process of the trainee-level enemies attacking and the protagonist repelling them can be described in detail to show the protagonist’s strength.”

“The shock of the other party and the nobles, as well as the reactions of the protagonist and the maid, should also be carefully portrayed to add to the emotional level of the story.”

"It describes the daily life of the protagonist and the maid. Together with the previous plot, it takes a total of 12 months. The protagonist reaches level 15 and 16. During this period, the hostile forces come to test him several times. The time is September 4626842719."

“The daily descriptions of the protagonist and the maid can deepen their relationship, and the protagonist’s upgrades also reflect his growth.”

"Of course, the temptations of hostile forces can increase the tension of the story, and the process of each temptation and the protagonist's response can be described in detail."

Then we continue with the main storyline.

"Accept the invitation of the nobles to go to the elves to trade, describe what you see and hear on the way to the elves' land, as well as the elves' culture, situation, etc., and conduct trade, which should involve slave trade and transactions, various settings, etc."

“It’s a new adventure that enriches the story.”

"The description of what you see and hear on the road, as well as the culture and situation of the elves, should be detailed, so that high-dimensional observers can understand this mysterious race."

"The trading settings such as the slave trade also need to be described in detail to show the social reality in the story."

"After the transaction is completed, they return and are intercepted by four apprentices on the way. The dialogue and psychology are described, and battles and negotiations take place. (It can be seen from the perspective of the sons of nobles) The contradictions and conflicts between nobles are emphasized. At the same time, the four apprentices kill many ordinary people, emphasizing the gap between classes."

"The encounters on the way back increase the tension and conflict of the story." "The description of the trainee interception can be expanded in detail from the aspects of dialogue, psychology and combat process, highlighting the class gap and the contradictions of the nobility."

“After leaving, describe the conversation between the protagonist and the maid, advance their relationship, and explain future plans and routes, etc.”

“This part can deepen the relationship between the protagonist and the maid, and at the same time pave the way for the subsequent story development.”

"The content of the conversation should be reasonable and reflect the emotions of the two people and their plans for the future."

"Go to Theresa City and trick the carriage and slaves, then go to Hogel City. You can describe the daily life of traveling with the maid, such as the lap pillow on the carriage, etc. On the way, you pass a cliff, make the maid jump off the cliff, and then jump off yourself. Level up 17."

“This travel description can add interest and romance to the story.”

“The daily interactions with the maids should be vivid, and the cliffhanger plot can describe in detail the protagonist’s motivations and psychological activities, as well as the reasons and process of escalation.”

Q version of Vic nodded with satisfaction and continued.

"Go to Hogel City (half a month on the way), open a small shop, make alchemy and sell potions, etc. Describe daily life, and add various small episodes, such as celebration days, etc., half of March, the time is January."

“The plot of the protagonist going to Hogle City and opening a small shop is well-set and opens up new scenes for the story.”

"The description of the half-month journey can briefly mention some of the experiences during the journey to increase the coherence of the story."

“Daily alchemy and potion selling activities in Hogle City are an important part of the protagonist’s life. When describing daily life, you can add some interesting episodes, such as special requests from customers, small frictions with competitors, etc., to make the story more vivid.”

“The addition of festivals such as the Celebration Day can also enrich the cultural atmosphere of the city and allow high-dimensional observers to better understand the life of the city.”

"The Ice and Snow Festival is coming. Describe the festival customs and ice and snow rituals to advance the relationship line and upgrade to level 19. (Describe the favor of the nobles to girls and young ladies at the Ice and Snow Festival)"

“The Snow Festival plot is a good opportunity for emotional and level improvement.”

"The description of festival customs and ice and snow rituals can be more detailed, such as the ritual process of the rituals and how people participate, so that high-dimensional observers can feel the unique atmosphere of the festival."

“The progression of the emotional line should be natural and reasonable, and some detailed descriptions should be used to show the emotional changes between the protagonist and related characters.”

"The plot of the nobles' preference for girls and young ladies can add complexity and interest to the story, and may also lay the groundwork for subsequent plots."

Then we continue to advance the main line.

"Five years and one month later, a miner dug up an ancient master's laboratory whose defense facilities had been damaged. He was overjoyed to get money and described his vision of future life. When he returned home, he found that his daughter had been kidnapped. He learned from the neighbors that it was done by a noble."

"The plot twist in this part is very impactful, from the miners' joy at finding the laboratory to their despair at discovering their daughter was captured, forming a strong emotional contrast."

“When describing the miner’s vision of his future life, his plans and dreams can be described in more detail, allowing higher-dimensional observers to better empathize with his pain.”

"The plot of the noble kidnapping the daughter could be further developed, such as the noble's motives and methods, to increase the tension of the story and the criticism of the aristocracy."

(End of this chapter)