Wizards are mighty.

Chapter 229

Q version of Vic calmly read the contents of the Book of the World, and then gave his own opinion.

The miner went to beg the nobles, but was ruthlessly driven away and threatened. He was extremely angry and returned to the laboratory, wanting to obtain the alchemical tools that could save his daughter. He discovered the Mirror of Love, activated it, and saw his daughter's body. He felt extremely desperate.

"The miner's actions are consistent with his character and moral values."

"The plot of going to the nobles to beg for mercy and being threatened with expulsion can describe the miner's humiliation and anger in more detail, allowing higher-dimensional observers to sympathize with his experience more."

"The process of discovering the love mirror in the laboratory can add some suspense and exploration elements, such as the peculiarities of the mirror and the conditions for its activation."

“The description of the despair after seeing his daughter’s body should be profound, highlighting the character’s pain and helplessness.”

"(Before finding the mirror, his first thought was to hand it over to the noble in exchange for his daughter) He found scattered materials and the summoning array, which is the ritual description. After studying it, he activated it and sacrificed himself and the materials to open the gate of the abyss. The gate of the abyss was opened, demons appeared, and the hunting of intermediate and advanced demons caused the miners to disappear."

"The miner's decision was an extreme act of desperation and was consistent with the character's emotional logic."

"In describing the process of his research on materials and summoning arrays, we can describe him in more detail, such as his thought process and operation steps, so that high-dimensional observers can understand how he gradually moved to extremes."

"The plot after the demons appear can describe the demons' appearance, abilities and behaviors in more detail, as well as the threats they pose to the city."

"The nobles learned that someone was missing and sent an apprentice to investigate, but he was also missing. The nobles were terrified and spent a lot of money to mobilize all the trainee professionals in the city to go to the mines."

"This part of the plot shows the selfishness and incompetence of the nobility."

“The nobles’ reactions after learning of the situation could be described in more detail, such as their deliberation process and the basis for their decision, highlighting their disregard for the lives of civilians.”

"The plot about apprentice-level and trainee-level professionals going down into the mines can add some descriptions of the dangers of the mines, as well as the psychological activities of the professionals, so that high-dimensional observers can feel the dangers they face."

"The protagonist follows him there, describing the journey, the mines, and other scenes, explaining the settings, such as dwarves, human slaves, etc."

“The plot in which the protagonist is involved is consistent with the logical development of the story.”

“The description of the road and the scenes in the mine should be detailed, such as the hardships of the journey and the environment of the mine, so that high-dimensional observers can feel as if they are there.”

“The explanation of the settings of dwarves and human slaves can be more detailed, such as their living conditions and interactions with the protagonist, to increase the richness of the story.”

"The protagonist's emotions should be natural and reasonable, reflecting his thoughts and sympathy for social reality."

The protagonist discovered a recording room halfway through the journey and broke into the room through the wall. They found a recorder that could only be read by an official-level wizard or above. The protagonist and another wizard returned to the city to decipher the device (the device was located in another wizard's home).

“This plot adds to the mystery and exploration element of the story.”

"The process of discovering the recording room and the recorder can be described in more detail, such as the layout of the recording room, the appearance of the recorder, etc."

“The plot where the protagonist and another mage return to the city to decipher the information can add some descriptions of the difficulties and breakthroughs in the deciphering process, allowing high-dimensional observers to understand how they obtained the information in the recorder.”

After several hours, the decoding was completed and it was discovered that the content was official and master-level advanced knowledge. Considering the unknown dangers in the mine, they hurriedly sent a message, but there was no response.

"By the way, this part of the plot is very tense, from gaining knowledge to realizing the danger and communicating to no avail, it makes high-dimensional observers sweat for the characters in the story."

“When describing the reaction after discovering advanced knowledge, the shock and worry of the protagonist and the other wizard can be described in more detail.” “When the summons are fruitless, their anxiety and helplessness can be described in more detail.”

The whole city is shrouded in darkness, and it is identified as a formal-level Vagus. In panic, a large number of monsters enter the city to kill. Black smoke is found coming out of the residence from a distance, and he jumps out of the window to go there. The film describes the reactions of the crowd along the way and the psychology of the sprint. On the way, he reaches level 20 and the protagonist is ecstatic.

Q version of Vic continued to look at the contents appearing in the Book of the World and commented on it.

“This part of the plot is the climax of the story, full of tension and excitement.”

"The whole city must be shrouded in darkness and slaughtered by monsters, which should be terrifying and shocking, so that high-dimensional observers can feel the despair of the city."

"The process of identifying the vagaries could add some new insights into their characteristics and abilities."

“When the protagonist dashes through a crowd, his psychological activities and the reactions of the people around him should be described in detail, so that high-dimensional observers can be more involved in the story.”

“The plot of the protagonist’s upgrade should be reasonable, reflecting his growth and breakthrough in the crisis.”

"I found out that the maid survived, so I was thankful and then I killed the Fire Demon."

“This part of the plot shows the protagonist’s concern for the maid and his strength.”

“The description of discovering that the maid has survived should reflect the protagonist’s surprise and relief.”

"The plot of killing the Balrog can describe the battle process and the characteristics of the Balrog in more detail, allowing high-dimensional observers to understand the protagonist's combat capabilities."

"Another wizard came and gave advice to the protagonist to leave the city. The protagonist thought about it and decided to abandon the city and escape. He learned the spells in the recorder and successfully left the city. (In order to prevent the secret from being leaked, he was left to die without help.)"

“This part of the plot shows the protagonist’s decisiveness and selfishness.”

“The other mage’s performance could be described in more detail, such as his demeanor and language, to highlight his dependence on the protagonist.”

“The protagonist’s thought process when deciding to abandon the city and flee should be described in detail to reflect his weighing and decision making.”

"The plot of learning the spells in the recorder and leaving the city can be described in more detail, such as the process of learning the spells, the difficulties of leaving the city, etc."

"The plot of cursing the count can add some descriptions of the protagonist's revenge psychology, allowing high-dimensional observers to understand his hatred for the nobles."

"After thinking, I went to the mine, opened the tomb, discovered the secret, obtained the ring and materials, was ecstatic and full of thoughts, left, and went to the enrollment point of the Kingdom affiliated to the Hartley Empire."

"This part of the plot is the subsequent development of the story, which is in line with the character of the protagonist and the logic of the story."

“The protagonist’s thought process before heading to the mine should be described in detail to show his purpose and determination.”

"The process of opening the tomb and discovering the secrets can be described in more detail, such as the structure of the tomb, the contents of the secrets, etc."

"The protagonist's ecstasy after obtaining the ring and materials should be vividly described to show the importance the protagonist attaches to these items."

"The plot of going to the enrollment point can briefly mention some of his expectations and plans, laying the groundwork for the subsequent story."

(End of this chapter)