My sampan can be upgraded

"My Sampan Can Be Upgraded" has finally been completed successfully. Thank you all for accompanying me all the way. I will remember those who gave you rewards, and those who silently supported subscribing and voting. You are the source of strength for me to keep writing. Thank you very much for your company.

At the beginning of this book, my writing skills were obviously very stiff, and many friends also pointed out in their comments that it was the flaws in the plot and characters, which were my weaknesses. Especially the role of Ling Qiaoqiao, which can be said to be the protagonist's only family support after time travel, but it was still criticized by many friends, so I didn't dare to write more scenes and deleted many of them.

Regarding the protagonist's behavior when he met Angelino, some friends thought he was too weak. In fact, I just wanted to reduce the protagonist's violence as much as possible and retain some gentleness. After all, he has killed a lot of people and will kill a lot more in the future. I don't want him to be portrayed as a complete murderous maniac. Moreover, Angio's way of dealing with him is normal and reasonable, in line with the character, and the protagonist's performance is also in demand.

The lack of detail in the plot is also a shortcoming, but there are friends who like it and like fast pace. It is really difficult to grasp. I can only continue to practice more and I will try my best to make up for it in new works.

I choose to end it when the protagonist ascends the dimension and returns to the original world. Some friends may feel that the ending of this book is a bit abrupt. I can only say sorry here, because the original setting is written until the dimension ascends. There is no Regarding the subsequent outline and concept, I was afraid that if I forcibly added a plot, the writing would collapse. If you are interested in the follow-up plot, you may wish to read it yourself, or wait until I open another book to practice my writing skills before writing a sequel.

The new book has been transferred to the supernatural channel. After it is officially released, I will post a single chapter notice at the end of the book. I hope that all friends will take notice and support a wave of collection recommendations!

In the past two days, many friends have expressed in the comments that they are still unfinished. Some friends have clearly finished watching it on the ending day, and they still come to reward it, which really makes me feel touched and guilty. During this period, I am carefully writing the outline of the new book, and I hope that I will not disappoint you all.

Thank you again and wish you all a happy day! ! !

(Okay, don’t laugh at me. I really didn’t want to write a speech, but I was asked to write it anyway...)