Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 1455: Commentary on "Becoming a True Immortal in a Low-level Martial Arts World"

Hello everyone, I am Cang Yiwei.

Today I would like to recommend a new book by a great author to you.

"Becoming a True Immortal in a Low-Martial Arts World", Huanyu, a great writer.

Category: Fantasy-Eastern Fantasy.

Summary:
Other people’s systems are considerate and professional, turning weaklings into immortal emperors.

My system is just a boaster. Its promises of moving mountains and seas, and immortality, are all just tricks to trick people into traveling through time. If you ask it too much, it'll just play dead.

What? Is the system playing a big game?
What? This world is a forbidden place sealed by ancient powerful beings, and it holds countless secrets!

What? Even though I didn't become invincible just by traveling through time, after the system's blessing, I'm as handsome as a banished immortal?

How can it be called bullying when a cultivator like me goes up against a martial artist? That's called a dimensionality reduction attack. That's called giving them a chance to experience the scenery and secrets of the higher-dimensional world.

【Brief Comment】

He has five books under his name: "A Hundred Refinements to Become an Immortal", "The Immortal Shatters the Void", "The Path to Immortality in the Kitchen", "Searching for the Path to Immortality", and "Signing in at the Beginning to Become a Sage".

Except for the first book which is a masterpiece with 981 million words, the word count of the other books ranges from 100 to 300 million. What is relatively consistent is that no other masterpieces have been written.

It's strange, he reached the peak right after debuting, and then went downhill all the way. But there is still one thing that is admirable, that is, he was able to finish well from the beginning.

It's been nine days since my new book was published, and it's nearly 40,000 words, averaging 4,000 words per day, but the collections haven't even reached 500. The website's recommended spot has been there for several days, but the effect is mediocre. It's even only ranked 49th on the fantasy new book list, and it's nowhere to be found on the overall new book list.

The fanbase is equally dismal, with only five active followers. As a renowned author, the performance of his new book is surprisingly comparable to that of a newbie. I've also read the story, and honestly, it's still worth reading, though the plot could be a bit better. The protagonist travels through time, and the system offers different choices. He ultimately chooses to go to a low-level martial arts world and become an invincible wall-hanger. Better to be the head of a chicken than the tail of a phoenix!

It's time for the low-level warriors to feel the love of the higher-dimensional world. The idea is good, but the action is somewhat taken for granted. On the surface, he is just an ordinary person, thrown into the mountains, and any mountain spirits and bandits can take him away.

In order to survive, he actually learned to touch corpses, but he did not realize the dangers of the jungle. If a female hero had not rescued him, he would not even live to the second chapter.

By accident, he stumbled into a fight scene and unexpectedly became a mysterious master, obtaining a treasure from a sect. He seemed to have done nothing, but it seemed that he had performed many key actions, which created a sense of mystery.

However, this book also has some issues, such as the rather haphazard writing style. The cheerful protagonist, seemingly dangling around like a fool, seems to have no sense of danger. If the system weren't so buggy, he would have been killed long ago. Despite being called a fantasy, the fight scenes are few and far between, with only a few quick gestures. Those looking for a high-energy immortal cultivation adventure might want to miss out.

So the book's main selling points are not obvious, and the excitement is not strong enough, making it difficult to arouse readers' emotions. Although it's still early for the first order, it will be very difficult to make it a hit. I hope he can hold on this time and not let his reputation be tarnished again.

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment.

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”.

Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

There isn't much I want to say. I'm still trying to adjust my mindset, get better as soon as possible, and act more serious sooner.

(End of this chapter)