Tokyo, everyone is drawing comics, who still wants to fall in love?.

Chapter 168: The problem that smart people can't figure out, fools have the answer
Hua Hua Hua Hua——

Oda Shingo kept flipping through the drawings, scanning them quickly with his eyes like a scanner.

From the moment Izumi Shinichi rushed to the beach, to the moment he watched the parasite decay and the remains of his mother, there must be something wrong with this part!

This is an intuition, but I just can't see where the problem is!

It's just a weird feeling. Even though the plot is exciting, it doesn't feel right.

Oda Shingo sent the new manuscript to Saburo Mikami and assistant Okita.

The feedback came back quickly.

[Oda-sensei’s works are always of high quality!] Assistant Okita is already a little fan.

Saburo Mikami also made it clear: [Shingo, you may surpass the first place of "notouch" in the previous issue! ]
Even though Oda Shingo said there seemed to be a problem, the two still felt that the storyline flowed smoothly and there were enough exciting parts, so there were no problems.

Despite hearing these experienced people say this, Oda Nobuo still felt a knot in his heart.

From the afternoon until around eight o'clock, he was stuck on the part where the protagonist, Izumi Shinichi, exploded and killed the parasitic beast killer.

But the more impatient Oda Nobuo was, the less likely he was to find any problems!

Namikaze Yuzuru and Todou Kacheng each glanced at him secretly.

Oda Shingo scratched his hair in annoyance.

I can clearly see that there are problems with the original work, but why do I still vaguely feel that there are problems after the adaptation?
Oda Shingo trusted his intuition.

This is the experience gained from many years of work. If you intuitively feel that there is a problem somewhere, there must be a problem, but it is just obscured by something and cannot be discovered for the time being.

As it grew darker, and after Mrs. Yukino left, he gradually became impatient.

Hey.

The sound of the teacup making a gentle sound was from Namikaze Youkaku.

"Have a glass of watermelon juice." Namikaze Youhe took advantage of the brief time when Fujido Kaoru went to the bathroom to open a glass of fruit drink for Oda Shingo. "I heard from my father that in China, watermelon is known as a cold melon, which can calm the mind and focus the spirit."

"Ah, thank you." Oda Shingo felt much better when he heard the Japanese people's respect for China.

This is a sense of pride that comes from the glory of the motherland.

"I have finished my detailed drawing work today, let me take a look too." Namikaze Yuzuru sat next to Oda Shingo, "I have been looking at this part of the plot, is there really a problem?"

"I feel like something is wrong, but I don't know where." Oda Shingo sighed.

Namikaze Youhe didn't say anything and read the manuscript again.

Oda Nobuo drank watermelon juice quietly, closed his eyes and calmed his mind.

Combining his feelings after reading comics over the years, Namikaze Yuzuru still didn't feel there was any problem after revisiting the manuscript.

The protagonist is decisive in killing. After making a mistake and nearly losing his life, he is always able to protect his father with a firm will, and his revenge for his mother is even more clean and neat. He is a typical perfect protagonist.

Namikaze Youzuru thought for a moment and said seriously, "I don't see any problem either. I think both the picture and the character's personality are well portrayed. And when his new friend was hurt, he looked quite handsome when he got angry about it."

At this time, the sound of the faucet in the bathroom was heard faintly, and Namikaze Youhe stood up and returned to his seat.

Nearing nine o'clock, Oda Shingo announced that that was all for the day.

He stood up and went back to his room.

At nine o'clock, he took out his cell phone and started calling Mrs. Yukino.

This was what Mrs. Yukino hinted to him before she left.

"Oda-kun is so punctual. Were you counting the clock waiting to call me?" Mrs. Yukino's gentle voice came from the phone.

Oda Shingo did not answer, but just said: "Madam, you answered the phone very quickly."

Mrs. Yukino burst out laughing and also did not explain, but asked Oda Shingo: "First, pull open the curtains and open the window to see if there is anyone on the wall outside the window?" Oda Shingo: "?"

He quickly understood what Mrs. Yukino meant.

"Namikaze Yuzuru is not here." Oda Shingo said to the phone, then he took the initiative to go to the door, gently pushed the door, and looked outside and there was no one, "Toudou Kaoru is not at the door either."

The possible situations of a female ninja climbing through windows or a female warrior eavesdropping by sticking a cup against the door do not exist.

"Haha, Oda-kun is very quick-witted." Mrs. Yukino said briskly, "What is Oda-kun wearing now? He still has the same pajamas as during the day."

Oda Shingo said anxiously, "Hey, Mrs. Yukino, please stop beating around the bush. You have figured out what I was worried about during the day, right?"

Mrs. Yukino said slowly, "Your manuscript is due the day after tomorrow, why are you in such a hurry?"

Her voice was pleasant to the core, and when she spoke so slowly and softly, there was an inexplicable coquettish tone to it that made one's bones go numb.

"Please, tell me quickly. I'm impatient."

"But I'm not in a hurry. Forget it. I won't tease you anymore. But I can't be completely sure either. I can only give you a hint." Mrs. Yukino knows how to judge the scale very well. She began to speak seriously: "As a senior comic fan who has read many comic works, the problems I can't see are probably related to my lack of expertise."

"Hmm? What is Mrs. Yukino not good at?"

"There are many things I am not good at, but the one that is relevant to this matter is probably... human emotions."

"Ah?" Oda Nobuo was stunned.

This part of my plot doesn't involve love, right?
"This is a hint. Oda-kun, think about it yourself. I'm going to hang up now." Mrs. Yukino's voice became cheerful again.

"Hey, hey, this is not a hint." Oda Shingo tried to persuade him.

Mrs. Yukino was silent for a few seconds, then suddenly said, "Oda-kun, have you ever heard of a Kansai proverb? [A problem that a wise man cannot figure out usually has the answer from a fool.]"

"Hey?"

"I'm going to take a shower."

"Drink more hot water... No, good night, Mrs. Yukino." Oda Shingo habitually responded to the conversation between the dog and the goddess.

After hanging up the phone, Oda Shingo was stunned for a while.

[The problems that smart people can't figure out usually have answers from fools.]
Mrs. Yukino means that she is a smart person, and I am also a smart person, Oda Shingo thought.

So the fool is...

Thinking of this, Oda Shingo touched his chin, opened the door, and looked at Fujido Kaoru's room door.

No, Mrs. Yukino was just reminding me to be on guard against Namikaze Yukaku eavesdropping.

He closed the door softly again.

He took out his cell phone and called Fujido Kacheng.

Fujido Kaoru quickly answered the phone, obviously playing with her phone: "What the hell? Mr. Oda, is there any urgent public opinion? I'll send 100,000 navy troops to handle it!"

She spoke in a loud and powerful voice.

Oda Shingo naturally couldn't ask a fool for advice: "Um...are you free? Can I come over and talk?"

"..."Toudou Xiangcheng's phone suddenly went quiet.

But Oda Shingo could clearly hear the nervous breathing in the microphone.

After a long while, Fujido Xiangcheng's voice, as weak as a mosquito's, came from the microphone: "You have to sign the marriage agreement before you can..."

The marriage registration is when Japanese citizens submit documents to the Civil Affairs Bureau to apply for marriage.

Oda Shingo: “…”

(End of this chapter)