Tokyo, everyone is drawing comics, who still wants to fall in love?.

Chapter 167 What's the problem? Oda Shingo is worried for the first time
Seeing that "Parasyte" ranked seventh on the dating list, countless netizens began to mock it crazily.

[What happened? I think the new Makiko is really good, but why is she on the dating list?]
[Is there still justice? Is there still law? How can such a bloody manga make it to the list of romance anime?]
[Yahoo Comics is over. This is a shameful scene that will go down in history!]
[Is Parasyte too good, or are its peers too disappointing?]
[How bad are the romance comics on the market now?]
There are also many netizens who continue to vote for "Parasyte" for fear of chaos in the world, to ensure that it does not fall off the romance list.

At this time, Oda Shingo was still in the workshop, looking at the countless abandoned drafts and sighing.

After several months of comic drawing, he has combined his previous life experience with the level of the original comic, and even made significant deletions and revisions based on market conditions.

I dare not say that "Parasyte" in this world is perfect, but it has indeed achieved excellence and made significant corrections to the plot of the original work that was delayed due to the rush to finish the manuscript.

Namikaze Youzuru helped to organize the manuscript, paused lightly on the table, and asked with great regret: "Teacher Oda, the storyline of Gundam with nearly a hundred pages is just abandoned like this?"

"This is to ensure the fast pace of the plot. Although it can be published, the pace will not be tight enough." Oda Shingo also felt distressed.

He started by drawing hundreds of pages of drafts based on the original work, and then felt that the hospital stage was too long-winded and only 20 pages were needed to complete it.

After checking the part about setting up the characters' emotions thoroughly, he decided that it was ok to simplify it.

I guess the original work is so "watery" in this part because the author has not yet figured out how to deal with the parasitic beast mother.

Therefore, the original author, Mr. Iwaaki, used about two chapters of daily life to give himself about half a month of buffer time for thinking.

He knew that the original author's treatment here was that the plot needed time to buffer. However, this kind of daily life is no longer suitable for the current market tastes in the face of increasingly picky comic fans.

Although one or two chapters of Mizukami is not a problem given the popularity of Parasyte, and it is also the daily routine of many comic authors, Oda Shingo does not allow himself to do so.

"Oh, is there anyone in the world who wastes storyboards like me?" Oda Nobuo was in tears.

Not only did he feel sorry for the time, he also felt sorry for the money. The fee paid by Qunyingsha was very high, calculated by the number of pages, so these dozens of pages would cost 200,000 or 300,000 yen.

Fortunately, Oda Shingo only drew a rough storyboard and then made some cuts, and it did not affect Namikaze Yukaku's painting.

Namikaze Youhe had been quietly watching his expression, and now understood that Oda Shingo was still reluctant to let him go.

"Oda-kun, these manuscripts are like... you also feel it's a pity, right? How about making them into a special chapter?" asked Namikaze Yukaku.

These manuscripts are like our children, we can't bear to abandon them, right? Bofeng Youhe almost said this just now.

She felt embarrassed and opened her mouth but didn't continue. Let's not talk about sensitive topics like children, just the paintings. After all, these were only drawn by Oda Shingo, and she didn't help much.

"Huh? What a good idea!" Oda Shingo simply put the edited draft in the writer's column.

If Oda Shingo knew about Namikaze Yukaku's little trick, he would probably laugh: The child who is the only one I am busy with is called Cao Chong, not Cao Pi.

At this time, Mrs. Yukino was already optimistic about the manuscript for the next issue and felt that there was nothing left to change. She couldn't help but sigh: "Mr. Oda, the number one on the list you're looking forward to may be achieved in one or two issues!"

"No, I'm a very low-key person. I'm not in a hurry to be number one on the list." Oda Shingo lied with his lips curled, acting as a crooked-mouthed god of war.

Mrs. Yukino just looked at him and smiled without pointing anything out.

At this time, Fujido Kaoru suddenly pointed at the screen and shouted, "Oh, Mr. Oda, Parasyte is on the Yahoo Comics romance list! This is not an official evaluation from Yahoo, but a result of netizens' voting!"

Oda Shingo: “Ah?”

He walked over and looked at the screen, and Fujido Kaoru pointed at it.

But when Oda Shingo came over, he felt that the white flowers were too dazzling...

I decided not to watch it. Oda Shingo came back soon.

Girl, the temperature in the air-conditioned room is not high, why is she wearing clothes with such a big open collar... This is your workplace.

Oda Shingo muttered to himself.

Look at Mrs. Yukino. Even in the hot summer, she is always wearing a kimono, as if she is not afraid of the heat.

In fact, he didn't know that Fujido Kaoru only dressed like at home when she was at his place. And Mrs. Yukino was also a special case. With her physique, the less she wore in the summer, the hotter she would feel.

"Oda-kun, when I was watching this plot, I felt that you are very good at writing about love." Namikaze Yukaku suddenly said.

Fujido Kaoru agreed: "Yes, I had the same feeling when I was drawing the background. Oda-sensei also told me not to draw a too clear background, so as not to overshadow the main character and affect the look of the female character. I didn't expect he was quite understanding."

Mrs. Yukino took a sip of the teacup and said quietly, "It's strange that he understands love!"

"..."After hearing this, Namikaze Yuzuru and Fujido Kaoru both stared at Oda Shingo for a long time.

then……

"snort--!"

The two women turned their heads away from him at the same time.

Oda Shingo: “???”

What's wrong with you? Why are you angry?

Did I not pay you wages or did I take advantage of you in some other way?

Oda Nobuo wished he could hum as well.

No matter what, women will be unhappy for a few days every month. Oda Shingo found a reason to numb himself and still concentrate on drawing comics.

What follows is not a climax, but it is of profound significance to the protagonist.

Even though Mrs. Yukino could not find any faults after reading the comic as a fan, Oda Shingo still worked very seriously and continued to polish the new chapters of the comic.

But now, he was in some kind of trouble.

In the adapted and soon-to-be-released comic plot, Izumi Shinichi decisively killed the parasitic beast that killed his mother by relying on the strong physical fitness of the fused parasitic beast.

In order to get into the plot as quickly as possible, he deleted a lot of scenes between the protagonist and supporting characters.

The advantage of doing this is that it is in line with the fast pace of the market, but the experienced Shingo Oda always feels that something is wrong!
He read the manuscript over and over again, wondering what the problem was.

Speed ​​is the mainstream in the current market. Why did I feel uneasy after I sped up the pace and cut out a lot of daily content from the original work?
He flipped through the manuscript again and again but couldn't find the problem.

"Mrs. Yukino, I think there are flaws in this part of the drawing. Do you feel that?"

Mrs. Yukino was stunned: "There are defects? I didn't notice it."

In the current revised version, the protagonist's behavior is smooth and natural, and his performance is also quite handsome.

Even Mrs. Yukino didn't see the problem.

"Am I too allergic?"

Mrs. Yukino looked at him quietly for a long time, looking a little impatient.

Then, Mrs. Yukino looked out the window.

It's getting dark.

She stood up and took a glance, and after confirming that the two women were facing away from her, she made the number nine to Oda Shingo with both hands, and then raised her thumb and little finger to make a telephone gesture.

Oda Shingo was stunned for a moment.

Mrs. Yukino gave a suggestive smile and left gracefully.

(End of this chapter)