Chapter 232

After saying this, Q version of Vic finally breathed a sigh of relief.

"How is it going? How long will it take to finish?"

He looked at the illusory Vic and Vic and asked.

"Um……"

Vic pondered for a moment, closed his eyes and began to sense the response from a higher narrative level.

"The 'author' told me that there are only two days left before the end."

"Just keep reading. If everything goes well, we should soon be able to escape the prying eyes of the higher narrative."

After hearing this, Q version of Vic showed a satisfied smile.

"Very good, let's continue."

"Well, it's still Sean's business."

"But I'll still read what's in the Book of the World."

……

"After the war, everyone's attitudes change significantly, they take stock of their gains, and return to their daily lives. This can also be described from the maid's perspective, etc."

“The change in everyone’s attitude here is a logical extension of the story’s development, and it reflects Sean’s influence in the war. Entering the daily life again and describing it from the maid’s perspective is a good way to enrich the story, showing Sean and the maid’s life more comprehensively, and digging deeper into the maid’s personality and emotions.”

"This is Sean's first class, teaching how to make the Blood Cloud Potion (low-profile version) and other things. There are a lot of people coming to take the class, so I can explain the settings accordingly."

"The plot of Sean teaching is very meaningful. In addition to showing Sean's knowledge and teaching ability, teaching how to make blood cloud potions can also delve deeper into the field of magic knowledge and attract the interest of high-dimensional observers."

“We can even use students to demonstrate the importance of this knowledge and Sean’s prestige.”

“You can also describe in detail the potion-making process, ingredients, precautions, etc., as well as students’ reactions and classroom interactions.”

"Daily life with the maid, 10 years, exchanging gold essence, preparing potions, the maid was promoted to the apprentice level, which caused a lot of sensation, and countless people wanted to become Sean's students."

"The description of daily life during these 10 years is very important. The process of exchanging gold essence and preparing medicine should be elaborated in detail."

“It includes the method of obtaining gold essence and the difficulty of preparing potions. In addition, the maid’s promotion to the apprentice level caused a sensation, which is in line with the logic of the story and also highlights the maid’s growth and Sean’s influence.”

“At the same time, it can also show the reactions of people around, further demonstrating the impact of this event.”

"A noble son has excellent talent. His father took great pains to collect a material that Sean needed (he learned it by chance and snatched it from a lucky person), and gave it to Sean. Sean wanted to reward him, but the father declined and wanted his son to become his apprentice. After thinking about it, Sean agreed, accepted the material, accepted a student, and gave him many treasures." This shows the nobles' pursuit of Sean. The process of the nobles collecting materials can be described in detail, reflecting the preciousness of the materials and the difficulty of obtaining them, etc. Moreover, the plot of Sean accepting students is reasonable, showing Sean's attractiveness and generosity, and also laying the groundwork for the follow-up. "

"The routine lasted for 10 years. Sean's student was promoted to level 9. He went out to show off in Sean's name. After forcing someone to buy a material, he found that it was a companion product of the material mentioned above. So he followed him and tried to rob him, but was caught. After modifying his memory, he gave him the material and let him go. (He thought he could hide it from Sean)"

"Well... the growth and behavior of Sean's students in these 10 years are consistent with their personality traits, highlighting the students' youthful recklessness and dependence on Sean. The forced purchase of materials and the subsequent robbery plots add interest and complexity to the story."

"Also, the modification of memory after being captured shows the opponent's cunningness, and also hints at Sean's deterrent power."

The Q version of Vic spoke a long speech in one breath, then picked up the water cup beside him and took a big gulp.

"By the way, this nobleman recently obtained a stone ring that can open a portal to a small plane. He was promoted to the apprentice level through this ring, and then he continued to obtain materials from the small plane and sell them (there is no professional system in the small plane)."

"The story of the nobles obtaining the stone ring is very novel. We can describe in detail the origin of the stone ring, the principle of the portal, and the situation of the small plane, including the distribution of resources and the activities of the nobles, to increase the fantasy and appeal of this matter."

"After Sean discovered it and cracked it, he became suspicious and went out in the name of recruiting students (write a conversation with the dean, which can be used to describe the cruelty of the world), went to capture the nobles, learned the whole story (which can be accompanied by some twists and turns), and found that most of the energy in the ring had been wasted, so he came up with the idea of ​​sending a maid in."

"Sean's behavior reflects his wisdom and sense of justice. The dialogue with the dean can deeply describe the cruelty of the world, such as the fierce competition among professionals and the consequences of violations. The process of capturing the nobles can be unfolded in detail, adding twists and turns and tension. It can also give rise to the idea of ​​sending a maid into the small plane and pave the way for subsequent plots, which may arouse the curiosity of high-dimensional observers."

"Continue recruiting students, daily life on the road, Sean's students using Sean's name to coerce the other party into submission, and the maid's attitude towards this, and the scenery and treatment of the various places where recruiting students are carried out, etc. You can describe daily life, such as skiing, etc."

"This part of the description enriches the story and shows the atmosphere of life during the admissions process. The student's coercion is consistent with his character, and the maid's attitude reflects her loyalty."

“At the same time, descriptions of the scenery and treatment of various places can enable high-dimensional observers to better understand the story world, and everyday activities such as skiing can increase interest.”

"After returning to the city, the freshmen were shocked to see the city. They continued to write about their daily life and material collection, etc., describing Sean's plans for the future."

“The reactions of the new students here are reasonable, and the magnificence and uniqueness of the city can be described in detail. Continuing with daily life and collecting materials is in line with the development of the story. Sean’s description of future plans can also allow high-dimensional observers to more clearly understand Sean’s goals and directions.”

"Everyday, for 100 years."

Q version of Vic smiled and continued reading.

"100 years of daily life is a long time span, and it is necessary to select key nodes for detailed description to avoid monotony and reflect the passage of time and the growth of everyone."

"Sien has been upgraded to level 22, the maid has been upgraded to level 19, the material collection has been completed, and Sean has purchased various supplies."

"By the way, leveling up and collecting materials are important achievements during this period. You can describe in detail your insights and breakthroughs during the upgrade process, as well as the difficulties and uses of collecting materials. When purchasing supplies, you can briefly mention the types and uses of the supplies to prepare for the follow-up."

"He and the maid attended the funeral of her friend and lamented the passing of time. The maid was sad and revealed her feelings to Sean. After the funeral, Sean had a heart-to-heart talk with the maid and Sean asked the maid to get ready."

"The funeral plot adds a lot of emotional depth, and allows for detailed descriptions of the atmosphere of the funeral, the sadness of the crowd, and the emotional exchange between Sean and the maid. The maid's expression of her feelings is an important node in the development of the relationship, and allows for in-depth observation of the emotional changes between the two."

(End of this chapter)

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