Wizards are mighty.

Chapter 231

"After asking for details, Sean offered to support him and helped him advance to the trainee level. His friend was very grateful and set off soon after he completed the promotion. (Exchanged for soul collectors and potions, rented a staff, and got ready)"

"Hehe, Sean's kindness and willingness to help others are reflected here, and it also shows his rich resources and powerful abilities. In the process of helping friends to advance and prepare, the functions and methods of obtaining various items can be described in more detail."

"Soon after, I went to the kingdom, described the kingdom and its people, and went to the house of the maid's friend. Her family was shocked by the maid, and Sean revealed his identity and aura. Not long after, the second official level arrived. Sean talked to him, revealed his identity and thoughts, and the second official level agreed after thinking about it, and signed the Abyss Contract. (The contract contains descriptions such as "try to avoid us". Resist, repel, injure, and kill different rewards) (Sean's side was originally weaker, and the other side also added a new official level)"

“This section shows Sean’s ability to cope with the new environment and his wisdom. The description of the kingdom and its people could be more detailed to highlight the social environment against the backdrop of war.”

"By the way, the process of signing the contract and the description of the contract content must be clear so that high-dimensional observers can understand the interests involved."

"Then there was the decisive battle outside the imperial city (the maids and others did not participate in the battle). Sean hid in the crowd. At the beginning, he took advantage of the enemy's unpreparedness (being held back) and defeated an army of 5. The enemy's level 20 warriors chased after him, and Sean was ready (shield, flying, drinking medicine, slowing down when facing them). Then he avoided the battle, defeated the army, and fought with them. The description of the chaotic battle situation and Sean's mood."

“This is a description of an intense battle, showing Sean’s great strength and combat skills. In the description process, attention should be paid to highlighting the tension and excitement of the battle, while also describing Sean’s psychological activities so that high-dimensional observers can better understand the motivations of his behavior.”

"Defeat the army of 100,000 again, condense the blood cloud giant, and turn to confront it head-on, while defeating the army as a supplement. (Sean knocks the target away, and the blood cloud giant defeats the army)"

“The plot here further demonstrates Sean’s combat ability and his spell skills, and the description of the Blood Cloud Giant can be more detailed to highlight its powerful combat power.”

"Defeat the 5-man army again, fight against it, become more courageous as the battle goes on (Sion has 5 mana left, the other side has 5), defeat the 3-man army again, the Blood Cloud Giant is at its peak, and Sion's Imprisonment Spell hits it ( mana left), the giant strikes with all his strength several times, severely injuring the other side, and the other side escapes with injuries."

The opponent intended to escape, so the protagonist used the spell in the staff to imprison the opponent and used the blood cloud explosion technique to successfully kill him.

The two opponents were frightened and fled. The protagonist used the Blood Cloud Technique to kill 30 enemy troops again and collected the energy and souls of the full Blood Cloud potion bottle. During this period, he had a conflict with his teammates, but forced them back and continued to slaughter them. He stopped after the collection was completed.

Describes the post-war scene, the protagonist talks to two teammates. (The two of them offered a lot of wealth and materials because they were afraid of the protagonist's murderous nature, background, strength, etc. After the protagonist returned to the city, he frightened the maid and others and found that he had a problem with his mentality, but it was difficult to adjust in a short time. (Showing the maid's absolute loyalty and trust in the protagonist)
An excited look appeared on Q version of Vic's face.

"Daily life in the academy includes learning knowledge, trying alchemy, practicing spells, etc. These activities are in line with Sean's growth path in the academy environment. At the same time, introducing the academy from the perspective of a maid also enriches the perspective, but care should be taken to avoid repetition, and try to show different aspects and details from the maid's perspective." "The description of 50 years of daily life needs to grasp the rhythm well. Some important events or nodes can be selected for key descriptions, such as important festivals every year, large-scale activities of the academy, etc., so that high-dimensional observers can feel the passage of time and Sean's growth and changes."

“It makes sense to establish the research direction starting from hunting formal-level monsters. It can show Sean’s improved abilities and the improvement of his relationship with the dean. This process can describe in detail the difficulty of hunting, the details of teamwork, and Sean’s role in it. The plot of refining and upgrading the blood cloud potion bottle is in line with the logic of the story development, and the difficulties and breakthroughs in the refining process can be described in detail.”

“The conversation between the maid and her friend and the subsequent plot are consistent with the character’s personality and the logic of the story development. The maid friend is anxious to be promoted because of the war, which arouses Sean’s attention and action, reflecting Sean’s kindness and sense of justice. The process of Sean helping his friend to be promoted to the apprentice level can be more detailed, such as how to use the soul collector and potion, the process of renting a staff, etc.”

"After going to the kingdom, the description of the kingdom and its people can be more vivid, so as to highlight the tense atmosphere of the war and the complexity of the social environment. The process of signing the contract with the two official levels should be clear, including a detailed explanation of the terms of the contract and the psychological activities of both parties, etc."

"Of course, the decisive battle outside the imperial city is an important plot, and the battle process needs to be described in detail, including Sean's use of tactics, the release of skills, and the opponent's response strategy."

“For example, the description of Sean defeating the army by surprise can be more detailed to highlight the suddenness and cruelty of the battle; in the process of fighting with the level 20 warriors, Sean’s flexibility and psychological pressure should be shown; the description of the battle after the blood cloud giant condensed should highlight the powerful power of the giant and Sean’s ability to cooperate in combat.”

"Also, after the battle, the conversation between Sean and his teammates and the plot of gaining wealth should be reasonable, showing the change in Sean's mentality and his teammates' fear of him."

"Let's put it this way. It makes sense to describe the change in people's attitudes after the war. It can reflect Sean's influence in the war. When he returns to daily life, he can continue with the previous style, but he should pay attention to changes and development to avoid monotony."

“Why describe it from the maid’s perspective? Because describing the daily life from the maid’s perspective can further explore the maid’s personality and growth, such as the maid’s academic progress in the academy, the expansion of social relationships, etc.”

"Another very important point is that Sean's first class is an important plot. The content of the class, the students' reactions, and Sean's performance during the teaching process should be described in detail. Through these descriptions, the setting and Sean's abilities can be further explained."

"In addition, the plot of the maid's promotion to the apprentice level can be more detailed, such as the changes and feelings during the promotion process, as well as the reactions of the people around her. The plot of the noble heir becoming a disciple is reasonable, which can show Sean's appeal and influence. In this process, the arduous process of the nobles collecting materials and Sean's emphasis on the materials can be described in detail."

(End of this chapter)