Speaking of finishing this.
I don't like to drag out the ending too much, so I will speed up the update process when it comes to the end.
Naturally, too much plot will be compressed into it.
As you can tell from the title, it actually contains content that would normally take three or four chapters.
The story of the Demon Ancestor and the Outer God could have been written in 5,000 words. The original plan was to fight from the dead of winter to the Shadow Kingdom, and then both sides would use their demon god forms to fight in space and wrestle on Mercury;
The Judgment of the Stars could also fill a chapter;
The white elm can also expand a little by walking on the long river of time...
If it is written, the reading experience should be better.
However, once I was rushing to finish it, my mind was no longer able to accommodate those complicated things.
The battle scenes are simply impossible to conceive; the Judgment of the Stars also lacks emotional buildup due to the lack of the previous life-and-death battle, and becomes a straightforward narrative.
As for the part where Bai Yu walks through the long river of time, I originally intended to write some memories about other characters.
However, after finishing it, I deleted another thousand or two thousand words. I personally feel that it is better to be shorter. If I have to review my life, it would be too long.
I still need emotions to pave the way for writing a book.
When fighting Tai Sui, many scenes were used to build up the emotions.
So by the time it ends, all the emotions have been consumed, and only the settings remain.
In addition to throwing out the setting, the tone of the ending is set on a simple "going home".
I was struggling with whether I should focus on more characters. It doesn't necessarily have to be a party, a simple conclusion would be fine.
However, after finishing writing about Su Ruoli, I didn’t really feel like writing again.
Because it's just right to stop here.
It corresponds to the scene where Bai Yu meets Su Ruoli for the first time. The plot completes the beginning and the end. Adding another one would be a bit superfluous.
But there is no doubt that everyone will be happy... You all know me, I have always been an absolute supporter of pure love harem!
I even had the main character lose her virginity in this book!
Isn’t this a huge breakthrough?! (Shocking sound)
Well...it's mainly because Qidian's review is relatively lenient. Although I was blocked many times, it was all thanks to the editor Ludou for his help.
A year seemed like a long time for Bai Yu and Su Ruoli, who could not see each other.
It was a long journey for me as well. I finished another book and felt so many emotions in my heart.
We talked for more than a thousand words, all about writing books, because I felt there was nothing much to talk about myself.
I am a very Buddhist person, and my temper is neither good nor bad.
I just write books and don’t like to do anything weird. I don’t even ask for votes or rewards. I’m too lazy to manage the business.
I have always felt that for someone like me, being able to write books to make a living and having people like to read them is already a very good thing. So I am not pretentious or play the victim, and I do not share my life and emotions with readers in my books so as not to ruin the readers' reading experience.
But sometimes I still want to compete with my past self and see if I can write another good book.
This is the worst book I have ever written, but I still finished it from beginning to end. I think the next one will be better than this one no matter what.
As for the new book, I wanted to write it half a year ago, but I never got around to it. I didn’t have a good subject matter or good inspiration, and I was worried that I wouldn’t be able to achieve the desired effect. I was limited by my talent and therefore stopped here.
I have reflected and reflected a lot, and realized that weaknesses always exist. The world view structure, the use of golden fingers... are not what I am good at. If I can't make up for the weaknesses, I can only play to my strengths and avoid my weaknesses.
Change the subject, change the type, change the track.
I hope there will be a different flower on the path ahead.
Finally, thank you readers for your company along the way.
If anyone can follow this all the way to this point, I would be deeply honored.
Please be my reader for life (kneel)!
I'm Apple Coffee.
If we’re lucky, we’ll see you in the next book.
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