There is no way the Liberian girl could lay eggs!

The book is already more than halfway through, and I have basically covered half of the plot in my outline. There are still "Long Night of Light", "The Garden of Troublemakers", "Cui Lintelme", ​​and twelve main chapters to come.

These are the current settings, and the possibility of adding plots is not ruled out...

I was very satisfied with the performance of this book at the beginning. The first order was 500, the daily revenue was 1,500, and the average order was 880. As a newcomer, I was very satisfied.

However, under my decision, the book's chapter size has dropped to around 100 per chapter...

The previous story about Viviana and the story about being taken away at the beginning of the Ursus chapter received the most feedback, so I plan to modify them.

After all, people will only give feedback if they are not satisfied with what they read. Most of my friends read books in silence. This is what other seniors have told me. If they are not satisfied with what they read, they will just leave silently.

Therefore, if you have any questions, please be sure to give me feedback. I have been reading the backstage comments, plot design, character creation, and interweaving. These are all areas that need careful consideration.

Finally, let’s talk about the water issue mentioned by the two friends above.

I admit this. There are indeed some unnecessary descriptions of scenery. More emphasis should be placed on character creation and dialogue. This is also something I paid attention to when reading the novel before.

Appropriate scenery creation can adjust the atmosphere and enhance the scene, but too much of it will just be useless clutter, just like the character's inner drama.

I will reduce the description of this part later.

There is another important reason.

That is, the number of words in each chapter is reduced. The previous chapters are basically around 2,500 or 3,000 words each, so the descriptions of characters and scenes are included, which is normal to read.

In addition, there were three updates a day before, so it seemed to be connected, but after it became two updates a day, it became disjointed.

Once the word count is reduced, the deletion of the plot will make the description of the scenery appear very abrupt. I will increase the word count in the future to ensure that each chapter is between two thousand five hundred and three thousand words.

I'm not trying to be pitiful. I did have some health problems during this period. My heart would feel inexplicably anxious, and I had difficulty breathing for about four days. I had to use my mouth to breathe to feel better every time.

Later it changed back, but I always felt something was wrong, maybe it was going to the second dimension ()

Well, having said so much, it’s getting late, so I won’t stay up late anymore ()

I would like to thank all the friends who have always supported me. Thank you very much. Thank you for watching and watching Talina walk across this land step by step.

Of course, I haven't forgotten the updates I owed. I still have fifteen more to go...

I'll do my best to make up for it...

That’s all!

But I still have to say one last thing!

Great! Kalia!

Volume 5: Chapter 1: Wrong one?

Longmen, a city full of fantasy.

It originally belonged to a Duke of Ursus named Kosice, but was later taken away by Wei Yanwu, the current ruler of Longmen, in a struggle and assigned to the Yan Kingdom.

After successfully taking power in Longmen, Wei Yanwu divided Longmen into several areas and developed it vigorously, allowing Longmen to quickly grow from a small border town to the world trade center it is today.

The currency promoted by Longmen has now become the most commonly used currency among the world's recognized currencies.

Even though Longmen's origins were murky, due to its rapid growth, Yan State had no choice but to accept this "adopted son" with unlimited potential.

Now, decades have passed, and the people living in Longmen have long forgotten the ownership of the land under their feet. In their view, as long as they can survive, the ownership of the land under their feet is not important.

It doesn’t matter who is in power or who stands above them. As long as they have a home and a house of their own, that’s enough.

This is an obsession engraved in the bones of the Yan people, and it also subtly influences other people who move here.

When the morning drum bell rang, Talina officially set foot on this land.

"Is this...Yan Country?"

After the train stopped, Talina slowly jumped off.

Compared with Tremon in Colombia, the train station in Longmen, Yan Country is much newer, but it is also new to a limited extent. The architectural style in all aspects is also very different from the cities and countries that Talina has seen before.

Compared with the modular construction methods of other countries, Longmen's architectural style is more like building blocks. Each piece of wood and brick is stacked together layer by layer, and there is no trace of repairs visible from the outside.

At least Talina couldn't see it.

"Let me see...where is Penguin Logistics...?"

After getting off the train, Talina did not rush out of the train station. Instead, she took out her mobile phone, opened the map, and looked for the address of Penguin Logistics.

That's right, she planned to go find Texas and the others first.

Having not seen each other for a few years, Talina felt that she still needed to meet the kind sister Rupert.

When she was in Ursus, she also learned from Black Snake and Aburana that Texas was among those looking for her.

In addition to the "favor" he had shown her by bringing her out of Casimir, Talina felt that she should go and see him, or at least say thank you in person.

Maybe it was because Penguin Logistics was too famous, so Talina found their location without much effort.

but...

"Why are you so far from here? Did you run to the city center?"

Looking at the distance on the map that was almost a straight line, Talina felt a headache.

She never expected that Longmen's train station was actually in the suburbs, and it would take a long walk to get from here to the inner city.

If she were to walk, it would probably take her a whole day to finish the journey. Moreover, the buildings in Longmen were tall and the streets were complicated. Talina was a newcomer and if she didn't have anyone around, she would definitely get lost.

But there was nothing that could be done. This was the result of Talina's own recklessness. She was only thinking about finding someone and didn't consider investigating the situation inside first.

Looking around as she walked, Talina headed towards the exit.

As soon as she walked out of the exit, the drivers who were waiting to pick up passengers came up and tried to promote themselves to Talina.

"Little sister! Shall we go?"

"Sister, come to me!"

"Little sister, where are you going?"

"What's the point?"

All kinds of words mixed together, making Talina dizzy and dazzled.

In the end, Talina chose an older sister who looked relatively kind, carried her luggage and got into her car.

Seeing that there was no business, the drivers nearby gradually retreated and stopped pestering him.

The driver was a certain Vaifan, who was wearing a short-sleeved shirt and had muscular arms that were as thick as Talina's waist. She looked very safe.

No wonder those drivers didn't make trouble just now...

"Sister, take my car, it's guaranteed to be very affordable!"

After helping Talina put her luggage in the trunk, the driver considerately put Talina in the back seat, closed the door for her, and sat in the driver's seat herself.

As soon as the driver got in, Talina could feel the car shaking.

"Really? Then I'll trouble you, sister."

Talina, who was sitting in the back seat, smiled sweetly, and called the driver "sister" which made him unable to hold back his smile and laugh widely.

"Don't worry, sister. I'm here. No one will dare to cause you any trouble. If you get bullied while taking a taxi next time, just mention my name."

The driver patted her chest and made a promise.

Perhaps because it was new to her, Talina was looking at the buildings outside the whole way, and the driver also answered her questions in a timely manner, just like a tour guide.

From the driver's sister's explanation of Longmen's suburbs to the outer ring, and from the outer ring to the inner city, Talina learned a lot of information about Longmen.

Including but not limited to which restaurant is delicious, which restaurant’s dishes are overpriced, where to find a compliant hotel, and which hotel is likely to be inspected by the police.

She told Talina good things to help her plant seeds of hope, and told her bad things to help her avoid danger. The driver's good intentions were clearly conveyed to Talina's heart.

Smiling and agreeing, Talina arrived at her destination amid the noisy voice of the driver.

The headquarters of Penguin Logistics.

"Thank you, sister. I've saved your phone number and will call you if I need you!"

After getting off the car, Talina took the luggage from the driver and paid the fare before saying goodbye to the enthusiastic driver.

At first, the driver wanted to give Talina a discount, but after Talina insisted, he still paid according to the meter.

"These kids nowadays, they really are..."

Looking at the brand new Longmen coin in her hand, the driver smiled helplessly, got in the car and took out her phone.

"Hey girl? I made another hundred bucks today, let's have something nice to eat tonight..."

Walking to the door of Penguin Logistics marked on the map, Talina compared the address on her mobile phone with the empty shop in front of her, comparing it over and over again.

"Strange... moved?"

After confirming that the address was correct, Talina became confused.

Longmen is such a big place, so it stands to reason that there shouldn't be such a situation where the map is not updated in a timely manner, especially in the city center where every inch of land is valuable. Every merchant is eager to put the name of his store on the map as soon as possible so that he can get his money back as soon as possible.

But this undecorated store was nothing like what Talina had imagined. It didn't even have the Penguin Logistics pill logo.

"Ah... I should have asked Mom to check the phone number of Penguin Logistics!"

With a sad face, Talina squatted down and rubbed her sore ankles to relieve the tiredness from the long journey.

Just then, footsteps were heard from behind her.

A lively and cheerful voice also sounded, making people feel relaxed just by listening to it.

"Hello! Boss? We're closed these few days!"

Volume 5: Chapter 2: Sir! There’s no room left!

"Archangel?"

Following the sound, Talina stood up from the ground and looked at the man wearing a Penguin Logistics uniform and an LED bulb on his head.

The red hair, the hard flat... ahem!, the slightly heaving chest, and the trademark short hair, the identity of the visitor was obvious.

"Eh? Boss, do you know me?"

Walking up the stairs, Archangel walked around Talina, took out the key and opened the iron chain on the door.

Hanging the chain on the door handle, Exiah narrowed his eyes as he looked at the girl who was a head shorter than him.

It feels so familiar...I feel like I've seen it somewhere before?

With her chin supported by her right hand, Angel looked at Talina and compared her with the boss in her memory, but no matter how hard she looked, none of the bosses in her head matched Talina.

"Boss, can you give me some tips?"

Stroking his smooth chin, Archangel gave up the search.

"Casimir's."

"more specific."

"aphrodisiac."

"Ahem! I remember now! Talina? Come in and sit down first."

Almost choked to death by Talina's words, Archangel quickly went around behind Talina, picked up her luggage and pushed her into the store.

Smiling awkwardly, Angel looked around at the door with a guilty conscience. After making sure that no one heard their conversation, she slammed the door shut.

That bottle of medicine almost killed her, and it became one of the few pain points in her life. The only people who knew about it were her, Texas, and Talina.

Texas is not the kind of person who likes to find fault with others and laugh at them, so over the years, she has almost forgotten about it.

Now that Talina brought up the past again, the memories of her death began to attack her and dealt a critical blow.

"By the way, where have you been these past few years? We couldn't contact you no matter what. After we got news about you, Texas went looking for you, but couldn't find you."

After pouring a glass of water for Talina, Angelus moved two stools and took Talina to sit in the living room. The two began to chat.

She simplified what she had encountered at that time and told Archangel Nero. It was a rare opportunity to meet an acquaintance, so Talina also opened up.

"Is that so? Then leave me your phone number. Texas should be available today. She's in the dorm right now. I'll send her a message and then take you over."

After hearing that Talina had deleted their contact information, Angel took out her cell phone and enthusiastically told Talina her number.

Talina wrote it down carefully, not only in her mobile phone, but also in her mind.

She also tried to call Penguin Logistics to find the contact information of Texas and others, but for some reason, once Texas and others were involved, the person who answered the phone started practicing Tai Chi.

No matter what Talina said, she refused to reveal anything.