If I don't capture the girl, I will die

It was not until an hour later that he exited the Word interface of the novel.

When I opened my phone, there were five or six unread text messages displayed on it.

"It's been an hour already. You didn't say nice things to me, but you actually went fishing secretly? I won't forgive you if that's the case!"

So much information is conveying similar meanings.

Ji Qi drank the remaining half of the cold coffee in one gulp, and then sent a text message: "Do you think I'm that kind of person? I read it more seriously than a professional editor!"

After a pause, he didn't give the girl a chance to reply, and spoke out his thoughts.

"I won't talk too much nonsense. Let's start with the plot. First of all, the rhythm of the plot is a bit messy compared to before. The roles of the three important characters are not well planned. It seems that Kasumigaoka-san is a bit overwhelmed in handling the relationships between the three people. Then, have you forgotten the foreshadowing at the beginning of the article? I don't think you have any intention of recovering it. Finally, the characterization of the characters is not as delicate as it seemed to me at the beginning."

Ji Qi: "In short, the more you write, the better the article should be, but Kasumigaoka-san gives me a feeling that it starts high but ends low. PS: Don't be angry, even so, I think "Love Metronome" is a rare masterpiece, it's just that I am a little too demanding."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu: "..."

"Are you here to attack people?"

Ji Qi looked at the screen, feeling a little helpless.

His opinions were so pertinent, but I didn't expect the girl still wouldn't accept them!

"That's not the case at all. I've already said it before. As a fan and as an author, if I find that your writing is not good or has regressed, I will definitely criticize you harshly! There's no need to thank me, because I think that although Kasumigaoka appears to be cold on the surface, she has always been a very strong girl and will not be crushed by this little blow."

Kasumigaoka Utaha: "...Even so, you're still abominable! Is this the tone you use when talking to girls online?!"

"I am simply stating the truth. I think this is the best thing to do for Kasumigaoka, no, Kasumi Shiko, even if you will hate me for it."

Ji Qi's text message seemed very sincere. As for the name Kasumi Shiko, he said it because he saw it in the girl's document.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu: "..."

Kasumigaoka Utaha: "Ahh, really, I lost to you. I get it, I get it. I will change it."

This kind of tone is rare for Kasumigaoka Utaha.

It seemed that she was a little moved by Ji Qi.

In less than a minute, another text message came in.

"But as a punishment for using such a rude tone towards a girl, Junior-kun, you have until tomorrow morning to help me pick out all the problematic parts. No refusal allowed! If you don't mind, it would be even better if you could help me outline the general plot framework~"

Shiyu-san made a coquettish request.

I really can't refuse it!!

Ji Qi laughed in silence and replied in a joking tone: "No problem, I'm trying so hard to help you, isn't there any benefit?"

After a pause, Kasumigaoka Utaha actually sent her a voice message.

"You are a single junior who likes me so much, do you want me to be your girlfriend?"

The sound is sultry and pleasant.

It is very consistent with the personality of Utaha Kasumigaoka herself.

Ji Qi's heart moved, this is possible!

Opening the system panel, he looked at Kasumigaoka Utaha's current favorability.

Name: Kasumigaoka Utaha.

Favorability: 80 (Why are you so skilled? Your strategy speed is incredible!)

Next to each other?

It seems that although what Kasumigaoka Utaha said was a joke, it's not completely hopeless, right?

Ji Qi rubbed his cheeks and finally felt that he had temporarily escaped from the shadow of death.

Then again, he really didn't expect it to develop so quickly.

Rather than having the idea of ​​conquering her, he treated Kasumigaoka Utaha more like a good friend.

He didn't really have much feelings for Shiyu at the beginning, but they slowly grew stronger as they got to know each other better.

Ji Qi still has a little persistence that is unknown to others.

His personality prevents him from pursuing strategy just for the sake of pursuing strategy.

Even if it is forced by the system, even if the consequences of failure are serious.

Perhaps it is because of this that a tree has grown into a beautiful forest without any intention?

After all, considering Shiyu's personality and popularity, if the utilitarianism is too obvious, she will definitely hate it.

Ji Qi really enjoys the young and ignorant relationship between the two of them, which is like that of ordinary high school students.

……

Sorry, I was too sleepy at 12 o'clock... I slept for a while, and then I remembered that I had promised to update it at night, so I hurriedly got up to update it ORZ

This isn't really a missed date, but thanks to this, I'm totally jet lagged again... I can't sleep now!

Chapter 46 Forgive me!

In the exquisite yet childish bedroom, a young girl breathed a sigh of relief.

Utaha Kasumigaoka rolled over on the big pink bed. Her sky blue pajamas highlighted her hot figure. Her bare feet were on the sheets under her long, white legs.

She raised the phone above her head, looked at the last message on the screen, and her cherry lips curled up in a happy arc.

Kasumigaoka Utaha's calves were dangling in the air. Ji Qi was really an ordinary person. If there was anything special about her, it was probably that she gave her an inexplicable feeling of security.

Whenever I encounter any problems, he will help me solve them.

This time, too, she has to submit the manuscript to the editor tomorrow. If Ji Qi hadn't pointed out so many problems, she really wouldn't have noticed them.

The first impression is extremely important, not only when people meet each other, but also when editors read manuscripts.

She will stay up all night with Ji Qi today, and try to finish revising the manuscript before tomorrow!

Kasumigaoka Utaha smiled and said, "Please forgive my willfulness, junior~"

But tomorrow...

Does this count as a date for two people?

When a young man and woman go out together on Sunday, it's a date, right?

This is her first time dating a boy...

Speaking of this, Kasumigaoka Utaha felt an indescribable impulse in her heart that she had never felt before.

Throwing her cell phone onto the bed, she stood up and rummaged through the closet.

There are many clothes scattered in the closet, including girls' underwear, panties, coats and shirts. Kasumigaoka Utaha is choosing what to wear for tomorrow.

In fact, Kasumigaoka Utaha seldom goes out, which means she doesn’t have many clothes compared to other girls of the same age.

She frowned, picking and choosing but still not satisfied. She now regretted not buying more clothes.

'Besides, why would I dress up for that guy?'

She muttered a little. After all, Kasumigaoka Utaha is a high school girl, and she still has her own little thoughts about the days when the two of them go out alone.

After picking out a set of clothes that she was barely satisfied with and throwing them on the big pink bed, Kasumigaoka Utaha nodded in satisfaction and sat down in front of the desk.

A red laptop was placed in the center of the table, and next to it were snacks, milk, and apples that Kasumigaoka Utaha had specially prepared for nutritional supplements.

With one hand on her cheek, she stared at her novel on the computer screen, a little absent-minded.

Unconsciously moving the mouse, Kasumigaoka Utaha yawned and felt a little sleepy...

Let’s take a short nap and wait for Ji Qi’s news.

With someone as reliable as Ji Qi around, the sleepy Kasumigaoka Utaha didn't want to bother with the revisions now...

She is a typical inspirational writer.

After I get some sleep and regain my energy, I will make some revisions based on the issues pointed out by Ji Qi!

Although she knew that she was being lazy, Ji Qi gave her a sense of reliability.

Throwing her cute slippers on the ground, Kasumigaoka Utaha threw herself directly onto the big bed which was piled with messy clothes.

Staring at the ceiling, she thought about Ji Qi reading her novel and writing furiously at this moment, and she felt satisfied and touched in her heart.

I'm just taking a short break, not being lazy, junior. Even if you knew, you would choose to forgive me...

She found a good reason to suppress the slight sense of guilt in her heart, and Kasumigaoka Utaha closed her beautiful eyes. Soon, the sound of steady breathing could be heard in the room.

If Ji Qi knew that he was working hard for her, but Kasumigaoka Utaha was secretly doing something, he would be speechless...

……

Kasumigaoka Utaha was awakened by the shrill ringing of her cell phone.

Since there are no contacts in her phone, there won't be frequent text messages or phone calls, so she has always set it to the default sound.

Opening her eyes dazedly, Kasumigaoka Utaha looked at the time on her cell phone and suddenly came to her senses.

Oh no, it’s almost five o’clock…

The article was supposed to be shown to the editor today, but she hasn't made any changes yet!

"I have written down all the problems I think there are and listed them in a framework. I think it should be much better after improvement. Of course, if you think there is something wrong, you can point it out to me at any time and we can discuss it together. After all, it is your novel."

"Kasumigaoka-san? Are you there? Why don't you reply to me?"

"Hey, you didn't fall asleep, did you? We agreed to stay up all night together, Miss Kasumigaoka Utaha?"

Kasumigaoka Utaha rarely showed an embarrassed expression.

It's true that she is a little willful and unreasonable, but it hasn't reached this point!

"Oh, sorry, sorry, I fell asleep accidentally... Don't be angry! As compensation, I will do my best to fulfill my responsibilities as a girlfriend on today's date!"

Filled with guilt, Kasumigaoka Utaha sent this text message impulsively.

Even though she was the only one in the room, her face still blushed a little after saying such bold words.

She randomly grabbed her messy black hair, turned on the light with her bare feet, sat directly in front of the computer, and logged into her email.

There was an attachment inside that had been sent half an hour ago.

After the download was completed, Kasumigaoka Utaha’s beautiful eyes widened slightly.

There are so many words?

It seems like everything Ji Qi said was true?

If you don’t read it 10 or 20 times, you won’t be able to write that many words in a novel of only 50,000 words!

Ji Qi is indeed more serious than the editor...

The bedroom window was open.

There was already a little light outside the window.

For the time being, I consider myself a writer. I like to communicate through words because words alone are enough to express my feelings and thoughts without the need for other means of communication.

Looking at the words on the screen, she felt that Ji Qi was also such a person.

With a silent smile, Kasumigaoka Utaha threw away all these random thoughts and focused on reading the opinion letter written by Ji Qi.

If she still holds a casual and perfunctory attitude, she will be so sorry for Ji Qi's kindness.

……

(>▽<) Let’s play a game of idioms. I’ll go first.

Gou...

Chapter 47 Call Me Shiyu