My Cartoonist Girlfriend

So in the end, I chose this manga, which also left a deep impression on Asakura Kaede, and made some changes to the setting and plot arrangement according to my own ideas.

Listening to Asakura Feng's words, Eriri pouted and said with a blushing face: "If I reject your invitation to cooperate, will you be sad?"

"Eri, are you really going to refuse?"

Ying Lili quickly shook her head and said, "No, no, no, I'm just a little scared. Because Fengjun, you have done so many things for me, I don't know how to thank you... Does this make me seem a little greedy? We just started dating, but you did all these things for me."

"That's not necessary."

Asakura Feng understood Eriri's feelings at the moment, so she stroked her face with both hands, looked at her and said, "Although we have just started dating, I feel that our future will not be just about dating. Isn't it your goal to become a cartoonist? I am naturally very happy that I have the ability to help you a little. This is also a challenge for me. I am also very interested in the script and storyboard of the comics. It's not all for you, Eriri!"

"This is not a bit of help. I was almost speechless just now."

After pinching Asakura Kaede's cheek with her backhand, Eriri rubbed her eyes and said, "I'm about to cry..."

"So, do you want this script, Eriri?"

"No matter how bad what you write for me is, Feng-kun, I will draw it into a comic!"

Asakura Feng couldn't help laughing: "I don't think my script is bad. Come, let's take a look. I have already written the main plot to the end. But I haven't written much of the specific plot."

"Uh-huh".

Eriri nodded vigorously, then kissed Asakura Kaede on the corner of her mouth, then turned around and started looking at the contents of the document together.

"Maple, why did you choose Nura as the protagonist? And he is only one-quarter demon, while Inuyasha is a half-demon with half demon blood!"

"If I choose Nura, it's mainly because this monster is very interesting. Didn't I just say it? He likes to go into other people's homes to cheat for food and drinks, but no one can see it. And although Nura is cunning by nature in the legend, he will not harm anyone. You can't let me choose a monster that can do evil as the protagonist, right? This kind of monster with a somewhat unruly personality is pretty good, isn't it?"

"It seems to be true." Eriri nodded and said thoughtfully, "A protagonist with his own characteristics!"

"That's right. And if Nura is the protagonist, the combat ability can be set well."

As she spoke, Asakura Kaede also called up the character settings.

"You see, because of the ability to make others ignore their own existence, a lot of abilities can be set for expansion."

Ying Lili looked at the mark above and nodded repeatedly: "Oh! Ming Jing Zhi Shui, Jing Hua Shui Yue. Hmm? Jing Hua Shui Yue? When did you have the illusion that I didn't use Jing Hua Shui Yue? Ah!"

As soon as he finished speaking, Asakura Feng patted his little head.

"When did you get the illusion that I didn't know you were using Mirror Flower and Water Moon?"

"Hey hey hey~~~ Stop nesting dolls, my head hurts!"

After a few jokes, Asakura continued, "However, relying solely on the ability of this Nura demon itself is not enough, and it is a bit monotonous, so there must be other things to enrich the battle system, which is what I wrote here. Based on the characteristic of the demon's ability, "fear", it was developed by the protagonist's father, the second generation of the Nura group in the story, and only half-demon can use this special ability. "

"Emm~~~"

Eriri looked at the cool and mysterious names written on it and couldn't help but suddenly thought, "It feels a bit like the reinforced armor of Kamen Rider ZIO's predecessors?"

"..."

Asakura Kaede hadn't thought of it at first, but after Eriri said that, she found that it was indeed somewhat similar, and couldn't help laughing: "It seems a bit similar? But in essence, they are two different things. The basic ghost entanglement can't achieve that. I expect it to be shown in the middle of the comics, showing the ability of a monster attached to the protagonist."

Clicking on a setting picture, it is the only setting picture of the enhanced ghost entanglement drawn by Asakura Kaede. It is the ghost entanglement of the protagonist and the snow girl Yoshikawa Hyori - Red Plum Under the Moon.

"This painting is great! Is this snow woman the heroine?"

"Hmm~~~ According to the setting, she is one of the heroines? Because there must be a human heroine, after all, the protagonist is a half-demon."

Eriri nodded to show that she understood.

"However, Feng Jun, you haven't told me why you have only one-quarter monster bloodline!"

"This is the main plot of the story. I will tell you next."

They stopped playing the two-person game and just talked about the content of this comic bit by bit.

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After talking for nearly an hour, Asakura Kaede had basically explained the general outline of the story, as well as the character settings and relationships to Eriri.

After finishing his speech, he saved and closed the documents one by one. Asakura looked at Eriri, who sat next to him because she had something to say, and asked, "How is this script? Is it to your taste?"

"It's great! It not only talks about the relationship between humans and monsters, but also about the battles, and the main plot is very clear. More importantly, there really haven't been any monster-centric comics in the past two years!"

Eriri was naturally very satisfied, especially since this was prepared for her by Asakura Kaede, how could she not be satisfied?

"But Fengjun, if I really said something I was not satisfied with, what would you do?"

"Are you really going to say that?" Looking at the smile on Eriri's face, Asakura Feng thought for a moment and said, "Then I'll put you on my legs and spank you, and then I'll prepare a new script for you."

After hearing this, Eriri quickly put her hand on her butt and looked at Asakura Kaede with a nervous expression.

"Hahaha, don't worry, I won't bear to hit Eriri."

"Hehe, who knows."

After muttering to herself, Ying Lili felt a little greedy, so she took the snacks she hadn't finished in the morning, opened a bag of gummy candies and started eating.

After putting one into Asakura Kaede's mouth, Eriri asked, "Kaede-kun, when are we going to start drawing this comic?"

"It's up to you, Eriri."

After stretching, Asakura Kaede compressed all the current information about Nura: Rise of the Yokai Clan and sent it to Eriri's email address. He then said, "But I think, Eriri, you should prepare first and redefine the character design. Draw it in your own style and set the tone. Otherwise, if you follow mine, you will definitely have a hard time drawing it later."

"makes sense."

Eriri nodded, but she thought to herself that no matter what, she couldn't change everything to her own style. The current character settings were pretty good, and she could just modify them a little and add some of her own style. She had never drawn a monster comic or fan art, so if she followed her own style, it might not look right.

But there is no need to talk about this now. I can discuss it with Asakura Kaede after I finish drawing it when I get back.

Looking at Eriri who was enjoying eating gummy candy, Asakura asked a question that had been bothering him for a long time: "By the way, Eriri, what exactly was that comic you submitted before? Can you show it to me?"

Ying Lili's expression froze, and she immediately shook her head and said, "No, that thing is purely a dark history, and cannot be shown to anyone! I originally thought it was okay, but compared to Feng Jun's, it's really not good, and cannot be shown to anyone!"

"...Is it that serious?"

"Of course that's all!"

Okay, I won’t watch it then.

Asakura Feng did not force it. After all, although a lot of the script he had now was written based on his own memory, there were also many parts that were the result of his accumulation over the years, plus some ideas. The similarity between it and the Nura: Rise of the Yokai Clan in his memory was only about 60% at most.

After all, he is not Superman, and 60% is already the limit for him to recreate the memories that remain.

"I'm finally going to start drawing comics again." Eriri suddenly sighed and said, "I originally thought that it would take me a long time to take that step, but I didn't expect that it was Feng-kun who pushed me from behind. Am I useless?"

"No." Patting her head and letting Eriri lean on his shoulder, Asakura Feng said, "Everyone has their own strengths. Eriri, you are an excellent painter, but you are a little bit lacking in story and character creation. As for me, my ability to make up stories is OK, but I can't compare with you in painting. To be honest, we complement each other, it's destined!"

"There's no such thing as destiny. I think you've been targeting me for a long time."

"Hahaha, you can say that if you want."

Eriri also smiled, hugged Asakura Kaede's arm and said, "Kaede-kun, I will definitely try my best this time. This comic must be serialized successfully!"

"Yes, it will definitely succeed. After all, this is one plus one, and the effect achieved is definitely more than just two."

"That's right!"

Ying Lili nodded repeatedly, looked at the computer screen and said: "Wow...my hands are itching, how about I start drawing now?"

"You don't have to do that now. It doesn't matter what day you spend. You didn't come to my place for work today."

As he spoke, Asakura Feng picked up Eriri and put her on his lap, hugging her slender waist: "Eriri, you just said thank you to me, but now I feel that this is not enough!"

"No...isn't that enough?"

"Of course!" Asakura Kaede nodded seriously.

"Ugh...H, H is not allowed!"

Asakura Feng laughed dumbly: "I didn't say it has to be like that."

"Other substitutes...are not acceptable!"

"Eri, you really need to tone down your fanartist mentality. I'm not the type to lust after your body all the time."

Although I'm really greedy.

After saying that, he pointed to his lips and said, "My request is not that complicated!"

After seeing this, Eriri blushed and slapped Asakura Kaede's chest with both hands: "You, it's your actions that made me think differently? No way!"

Asakura Feng did not resist. He smiled and let Eriri hit him gently again and again. To him, Eriri did not seem to be angry at all, but rather acted like a spoiled child.

After fighting for a while, Eriri felt a little tired and gave up the trick. It had no effect on Asakura Feng. She pouted and looked at the door and said, "Auntie and the others won't come in, right?"

"Don't worry, it's our world of two. My parents won't come to disturb us casually. Even if they come, they will knock on the door."

Listening to Asakura Kaede's explanation, Eriri could only move closer under his expectant gaze.

Although Asakura Kaede's request was a bit shameless, Eriri didn't hate this action at all. On the contrary, she felt a little happy.

Although Asakura Kaede had all kinds of thoughts in her mind, she did not act on them casually. Her hands were very honest and she just held Eriri.

Although Eriri noticed some changes in Asakura Kaede during this period, she also saw what Asakura Kaede was thinking. She didn't point it out but didn't avoid it either. The two of them just stayed in the room like this.

In the evening, Eriri, who had originally planned to go home, was forced to stay for dinner by Asakura Reiko. After dinner, she personally drove Eriri and sent her back home with Asakura Kaede.

When we arrived at the Sawamura family villa, Sayuri Sawamura also came out to greet us.

The two wives talked to each other for a while, and Sayuri Sawamura also formally met Asakura Kaede after her daughter started dating.

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Because it was already late, Asakura mother and son did not accept Sayuri Sawamura's invitation to sit at home for a while, and went back directly.

After entering the house, Sayuri Sawamura went to the bedroom with Eriri.

"Eri, did you have fun today?"

"Ok!"

Eriri smiled and nodded, "My uncle and aunt are very kind to me. Aunt Reiko also dotes on me. She even prepared a large table of food for me at noon, and the same for dinner."

"I also listened to Lingzi. Just be happy."

After touching Eriri's little head, Sayuri Sawamura also breathed a sigh of relief.

"Then...what about between you and Xiao Feng-kun?"

"Ok?"

"Between you..."

Sayuri Sawamura gestured with her hands with a teasing smile.

Ying Lili understood immediately and shouted with a red face, "No! Mom, why are you telling your daughter this?"

"Ah, isn't this normal? After all, I noticed when we were at the door just now that your eyes were always on Xiao Feng-kun."

"Wow... Anyway, no, don't think too much about it!"

After explaining it again, Eriri said, "We didn't do anything weird!"

"Oh~really not?"

"Why are you so disappointed!!!"

"Pfft~~Okay, okay, I won't tease you anymore." Sayuri Sawamura waved her hand and said, "So, have you explained everything that needs to be explained?"

"Well, after the explanation, Feng-jun gave me a big surprise. Well, it was really a big surprise."

Eriri nodded, then under the gaze of Sayuri Sawamura, she turned on the computer, logged into her email, and downloaded the file that was sent to her.

Watching Eriri unzip the files, Sayuri Sawamura asked, "What is this?"

"Didn't I fail in submitting my comic book before?" As she spoke, a smile appeared on Eriri's face. "And Feng-kun has been secretly helping me prepare the script for the comic book. When I first saw him in the club, I thought he was preparing a new book. But today I found out that he was preparing it for me!"

Next, Sayuri Sawamura also saw the script, character design and storyboard files one by one, and showed a surprised expression.

"Are these all prepared for you by Xiao Fengjun?"

"Yeah." Eriri nodded. Now that Asakura Kaede was not around, she was beginning to lose control of her emotions. "Kaede-kun is really amazing. He prepared the script for a long comic with a clear main plot in such a short time. He even wrote part of the detailed plot and learned storyboarding by himself. When I first saw it, I was almost speechless."

After reacting, Sayuri Sawamura looked at her daughter, gently took her into her arms, and said with a smile: "Feng-kun treats you very well."