My Cartoonist Girlfriend

But after catching her husband cheating, she was shocked to find out that the person he was cheating with was actually a man!

"puff!!!"

Eriri couldn't hold back her breath and burst out laughing: "Ahahaha, how dare you put in a plot like this?"

"Very interesting, isn't it?"

Kasumigaoka Utaha also laughed.

Chapter 548: Honoka Wants to Come and Play (2/2)

This plot was inspired by a video that Asakura and Eriri showed her. The producer of this drama suggested that she should include more emotional issues, so she modified it and turned it into a tearful side story.

This actor...maybe he's not easy to find.

Similar things actually happen in reality, and there may even be quite a lot of them. After all, there must be a certain number of bisexual people.

Watching Eriri turn the page to continue reading, Asakura Feng smiled and said, "Of course, I'm just writing it now to try it out. If it can't be filmed, I'll continue to revise it later. As a screenwriter, this kind of thing is very common. Even when I was writing a novel, Sonoko asked me to modify the plot."

"Hey, is it because you wanted to give me stomach medicine that Sister Yuanzi disagreed?"

"Yes, she told me that my readers buy my books not because they want to take stomach medicine, so she advised me not to write about me now, and try some other fields in the future. Now I have the opportunity."

Shaking her head, Eriri said with emotion: "If a TV series is made in the future and the plot is 90% similar to your script, then I'm sure the popularity of this drama will explode."

Ying Lili has been watching a lot of TV dramas recently, including all kinds of pure love dramas, ethical disputes, and even weird ones.

As for this script by Utaha Kasumigaoka, although I only read the beginning, I am a veteran otaku who has studied many galgames, so it is easy for me to judge whether a script is good or not.

While they were reading the script and discussing, Asakura Kaede was leisurely making dinner outside.

Although he is not like Hikigaya Hachiman who aspires to be a professional househusband, Asakura Kaede is still quite capable in housework, especially cooking.

With the "family recipes" sent by their mother, Asakura Kaede and Eriri's cooking skills are improving significantly every day. Now, when they make dinner, no matter what ingredients they use, as long as they are not rare, they can cook it easily.

After the ribs were thawed and blanched, Asakura Kaede began to prepare the vegetables brought by Kasumigaoka Utaha.

"Well... no need to make it too complicated, just stir-fry some seasonal vegetables. These tomatoes are pretty good too, so make some scrambled eggs with tomatoes. We've already had a heavy meal of oil and meat for lunch, so it's better to have something a little lighter for dinner."

At this moment, the cell phone happened to ring.

Now the phone was finally not on silent mode, and Asakura Kaede could easily hear the ringtone.

I went over to pick up the phone and found it was Honoka calling.

"Honoka?"

"Uh-huh, Brother Feng! What are you doing?" Honoka's energetic voice came from the other end of the phone. In addition, there was also faint sound of TV. It seemed that Honoka was now in her room.

"I'm making dinner." After putting on the wireless headphones, Asakura Kaede put his phone aside and chatted with Honoka while processing the vegetables.

"Oh~~~Dinner."

Hearing about dinner, Honoka couldn't help swallowing her saliva. This girl had just had a big meal at noon, and now she was craving for it again.

Given her foodie nature, if it weren't for Sonoda Umi and Ayase Eri supervising her training, her weight would have gone up a long time ago, instead of being below the safety line as shown in today's physical examination.

Asakura Feng smiled and said, "Don't swallow your saliva. It's not a big dinner tonight. It's just a sweet and sour pork ribs, a stir-fried vegetable, a tomato scrambled egg and a soup."

"That's already a lot, after all, it's just you and Eriri-nee!"

"Not today. Senior Kasumigaoka just came and brought some vegetables grown by her relatives in her hometown."

"Sister Shiyu."

Honoka nodded. She knew that Kasumigaoka Utaha had bought a house in the apartment building where Asakura Kaede and her family lived. They became neighbors, so it was normal for them to have meals together.

But this girl's little brain can't think of anything too in-depth.

After knowing the dinner menu at Asakura Kaede's house today, Honoka asked, "Brother Kaede, we don't have training tomorrow, can I come over to your place and play?"

Asakura Feng smiled and agreed: "Hmm? Sure, you can come anytime if you want. Are you alone? Umi and Kotonari are not coming?"

"Well, they're not coming. I just asked. Umi is going to practice dancing at home, and Kotoori is going to stay at home with the chairman. Now that school affairs have finally settled down, the chairman can take a rare break, so of course Kotoori will accompany her."

"Oh, I see." Asakura Kaede nodded and understood. Both Umi and Kotonari had a lot of things to do at home, and none of them were as leisurely as Honoka.

"Okay, then you can come tomorrow, in the morning or afternoon."

"Morning!!!" Honoka was shaking happily while sitting on the cushion in the bedroom.

"Okay, but not too early. By the way, why don't you ask Yukiho to come over and play too? I haven't seen her for a while."

"Okay, I'll go downstairs and talk to Xuehui later!"

Honoka knew that her sister was also very close to Asakura Kaede, and if she asked her to go play together, Yukiho would definitely be very happy.

After confirming that they would come and play tomorrow, Honoka did not continue to disturb Asakura Kaede from making dinner. After saying goodbye obediently, she went downstairs to look for Yukiho.

At this moment, Kousaka Yukiho was in the kitchen, cooking with her mother. She was not at all like her older sister Honoka, who was always thinking about being lazy.

But her family also knew that Honoka was very tired from training because of the school idol videos, so they didn't always complain about her like they used to.

When they came to the kitchen, Honoka walked up to Yukiho and said to her, "Yukiho, Yukiho, let's go out and play together tomorrow!"

Xuehui, who was cutting vegetables, was stunned for a moment and asked, "Huh? Where are you going?"

"Let's go to Brother Feng's house! I just asked him and he said we can go and play, and he also asked me to ask you to come along!"

"Going to Brother Feng's house?"

Xuehui was somewhat tempted, but she did not agree immediately. Instead, she looked at her mother. After all, if she had time on weekends, she would still be at home looking after the store.

Mrs. Kosaka smiled and looked at her daughter: "Of course you can, you don't have to come to look after the store, just follow Honoka to Xiaofeng's place to play tomorrow. By the way, remember to bring some snacks before you go out in the morning."

Kousaka Yukiho nodded happily: "Okay~~~Sister, is it just the two of us? Where are Umi and Kotori?"

"They have something going on at home, so it's just the two of us tomorrow."

"Okay, I got it." Xuehui squinted her eyes happily and continued to cut vegetables. "Okay, sister, you should go out first. I have to continue to be busy."

"Shall I help too?"

"Get out! You can't do it, don't ruin the dishes like last time!"

“Ah~~~~~”

Chapter 549 Discussion (1/2)

Dinner was ready. Asakura Kaede brought all the dishes to the table. Then he went to the study and called out Eriri and Kasumigaoka Utaha who were still discussing the script.

"Hey? Is dinner ready?"

After realizing it belatedly, Ying Lili looked at the time and found that it was almost six o'clock.

Kasumigaoka Utaha smiled and said, "I didn't expect time to pass so quickly. I didn't even notice it."

Before dinner, Kasumigaoka Utaha went out for a while and brought the little leopard cat who was alone at home, and let her eat with the other three big cats.

After washing their hands, they sat down in the restaurant and started eating.

After happily chewing some spareribs, Ying Lili said, "Feng Jun, why don't you read the script with us later? Shiyu's script is very well written. If it goes well, the ratings will definitely be good!"

"Really?" Asakura Feng was also very curious about Kasumigaoka Utaha's work, and nodded with a smile, "Okay, let's take a look together later. Oh, by the way, when I was cooking before, Honoka called and said she wanted to come over tomorrow. I agreed and asked her to come with Yukiho in the morning. Eriri, don't sleep in tomorrow, okay?"

"Honoka and Yukiho are coming, I know!"

Eriri nodded. She was very welcome to have the Kousaka sisters come over to visit. She had been to the Kousaka family before, and both the Kousaka sisters and their parents were very welcoming.

Kasumigaoka Utaha asked nearby, "Is Yukiho coming too? It seems like we rarely see that girl."

Asakura Feng said, "Yes, that girl is not like her sister. She is usually very lazy. When Yukiho is at home, she always helps with the housework and also helps to look after the store. In addition, she also has to study, so she rarely comes with us when we go out to play. Sometimes I think, why not just switch their roles and let Yukiho be the older sister, she will be more qualified."

Eriri and Kasumigaoka Utaha agreed with this.

After dinner, the three of them left the dishes to the dishwasher. They made some tea and read the script in the living room.

Since Eriri finished reading it quickly, Kasumigaoka Utaha made another copy for Asakura Kaede, and the three of them started reading it in the living room with their laptops.

I have to say that for this kind of emotional story, Kasumigaoka Utaha is indeed better than Asakura Kaede, after all, she has already written her second novel. This type of novel, especially light novels, has maintained a good popularity, which is enough to prove Kasumigaoka Utaha's skills.

And it's not just a delicate description of emotions, Utaha Kasumigaoka also interspersed a lot of funny scenes.

When seeing the plot where the male supporting actor cheated on her with another man, Asakura Kaede was lucky that she didn't drink tea, otherwise she would definitely choke.

Glancing at Kasumigaoka Utaha who was whispering with Eriri over there, Asakura Kaede didn't expect that the "Honey, say something" video that he recommended to Kasumigaoka Utaha just for fun was actually written into the script by her.

Although it was just a borrowed genre, and the entire story inside was originally created by Kasumigaoka Utaha herself, Asakura Kaede could still tell the source of her inspiration at a glance.

There's no way, it's just too impressive.

After reading the script written by Kasumigaoka Utaha from beginning to end for more than an hour, Asakura Kaede rubbed his eyes, exhaled and said, "Senior, there are many ideas in your script that you want to express, some of which are sharp, and it may not be possible to film them all smoothly."

"Of course I know that."

Kasumigaoka Utaha said with a smile, "The producers asked me to write according to my own ideas first, and then they will discuss and revise it with me appropriately. I have a very clear idea anyway. This is my first time writing a script, and I never thought that my script would be adapted into a TV series. I only have one requirement for myself now, which is to write the script smoothly, and then see my work being adapted into a TV series, which will be a success."

After listening to Kasumigaoka Utaha's explanation, Asakura Kaede nodded and felt a little relieved.

He was not worried about Kasumigaoka Utaha's ability at all, but he was afraid that the script would not be able to go according to her ideas and would be modified by the director, which would dampen Kasumigaoka Utaha's creative enthusiasm.

But now it seems that her mentality is still very good.

Kasumigaoka Utaha also saw what Asakura Kaede was thinking, looked at him with a smile and said, "Don't worry too much about me. I'm not the same person I was when I first entered the industry. I've been in this industry for a short time, and I've talked a lot with the editor-in-chief and Editor Nakajima. I know very well the position of a new screenwriter in a TV series. No matter how capable you are, you can't take the lead unless you are the investor. So, this time I will just treat it as a practice to gain experience. When I have enough strength and qualifications in the future, I can have the final say on the script."

With this, Asakura Feng was completely relieved and said with a smile: "So, your future goal is not just to be a novelist? There is indeed more to be achieved in the screenwriting field."

"Asakura-kun, do you want to join in?" Kasumigaoka Utaha saw Eriri also reading the script and listened to their conversation. She asked with a smile, "With your ability, Asakura-kun, you may not be able to write a script like mine, but you should have no problem writing other things, right? Besides, there are so many related books in the study, and Eriri said you are reading them."

Ying Lili nodded repeatedly: "Yes, yes, Feng Jun, don't you have a lot of connections over there? If you want, just write a script and tell them, and you will definitely be able to find interested investors!"

"That's what I said."

Patting Eriri's head, Asakura Kaede smiled and said, "But I have no plans to get involved in the screenwriting industry for now. My main priority right now is the smooth serialization of my novel, its animation, and my college entrance exam next year. When I go to college and have more free time, I think I will consider writing a script. But I haven't really thought about what type of story I would write."

Eriri thought for a moment and said, "Hmm~~~ Feng-kun, what type of script is suitable for you? A battle type? A TV script for another world type, isn't it difficult to write?"

"It doesn't have to be about another world, I can write other types of scripts, but if I really write it, the cost of filming it will definitely not be low." Asakura Feng said with a smile, "So I thought it would be better to write a movie script. A two-hour duration, a substantial story, and the budget for movies is usually higher, which is more in line with my requirements."

Wow, this span is even bigger.

Chapter 550: The matter of address (2/2)

But if you think about it carefully, movies are indeed more suitable for Asakura Kaede.

As for the length, a two-hour duration is very suitable for all types of stories. For TV dramas, if it is science fiction or fantasy stories that require exquisite special effects, the cost of special effects and scenery is not a small amount. Asakura Kaede would never agree to reduce costs.

Compared to Kasumigaoka Utaha who is good at describing delicate emotions, Asakura Kaede is better at setting various world views, battle settings, and grand scene descriptions.

From all aspects, movies are indeed more suitable for him.

"Oh~~~"

Eriri said expectantly, "A movie? Wouldn't it be even more amazing if it were made? Wait, Feng-kun, you're not still thinking about what you said before, about writing a script for a special effects drama?"

"Hey, do you still remember?"

"Forehead......"

Kasumigaoka Utaha also looked at Asakura Feng speechlessly: "You actually want to write a script for special effects? A theatrical version?"

Asakura Feng spread his hands and said, "If Tsuburaya is willing, it's not impossible to write a TV drama script. This is more interesting to me, isn't it?"

"...It really fits your personality, Asakura-kun."

It was getting late, and after drinking a cup of tea, Kasumigaoka Utaha hugged her cat, said goodbye and went back.

After working for a while, Asakura Kaede and Eriri also washed up and prepared to rest at around 11 o'clock.

In the bed, Eriri curled up in Asakura Kaede's arms and said, "Kaede-kun, can I ask you a question?"

"Hmm? What's the problem?"

Asakura Kaede yawned and said with some fatigue while holding Eriri with one hand.

Rubbing his head, Ying Lili asked curiously, "Feng Jun, you are called Shi Yu now, why don't you call her by her name?"

"kindness?"

Asakura Kaede was stunned. She didn't expect that Eriri would ask this.