They are all bound to the love system

It's really Eryang, I owe a chapter, let me talk about my thoughts

I’m really pregnant, I owe you a chapter, and give me some thoughts.

Author: Jin'er baby

Including what I owed last time, I owe a total of two chapters, which will be paid back this month.

The fight between Feifei and Jin'er in yesterday's chapters should have been okay.

I understand that we are evenly matched and no one takes advantage.

However, the storylines in recent months have indeed focused on Shura Field.

Now that I write, I know some of the problems I have.

The protagonist's career line is so weak that it seems to have no main line, and he is suspected of being a softie.

The plot relies on the Shura field to advance, but in a harem love story, it is really difficult to write sweet stories all the time, as that would be too bland and boring.

Reflect, improve, and accept suggestions.

The last volume will give a perfect ending.

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