The Witcher Loads the Thriller Game

I have read all the comments, and most of them have answered as much as possible.

Some of the problems I mentioned have been corrected or patched. After all, there are still many bad points for newcomers.

All the masters are sprayed. I just said that this book is a bit watery, the rhythm is a bit slow, and I don’t like the poisonous talk with live broadcast elements.

I am already very happy.

It proves that I have achieved my original intention, which is to write a novel that makes everyone relax, a novel that is easy and interesting to read.

What I think is, let everyone not get tired of reading, life is already very tiring, why write some complicated things to make everyone continue to be tired.

Relax is over, comfort is over!

So this is a pure cool article, of course, it also has something.

In this book, you can see: the writing is fluffy, the dialogue is simple, the comments are rainbow farts, and the plot is mainly cool.

There is not much room for water injection in the content, and everything written is related to the development of the plot.

Of course, the pace of this dungeon is a bit long. After all, I have to have a dream, write a few characters and create characters, and I don’t want the protagonist to be monotonous, so the book will be empty.

So I wrote about Xu Weiping, I wrote about Zhao Xue, I wrote about Ziye, and I wrote about Zhao Peng. I spent a lot of pen and ink, not just the protagonists.

Try to be as mellow as possible, let them have their own distinctive personality, maybe the writing is not strong enough, so you can't see it... cough cough!

Newbie, please bear with me! !

My main purpose is to make you look good, everything else is secondary.

In addition, regarding the setting, I have an outline, half of which is set up, and it is already obvious. Randomly select people from the earth to become players. Those who have not become players can watch it on the Horror app. You can choose to become a follower, serve players, and develop fans. The group, the number of people reaches a certain number, and the fan celebration (sacrifice) is held every year, so that players can go to the earth for a certain period of time... No more spoilers!

In terms of content, the comments are watery, I admit this, it is a common problem in live broadcasting.

Later, I will try to reduce useless comments and refine them a bit, but I can't do without them.

Also, this is the second volume, which is the early stage of the early stage. The horror dungeon I experienced has not even involved the supernatural, so I didn't exaggerate too much and used the supernatural ability to avoid writing collapse.

It can be understood as facing every world you have experienced with the most respectful attitude and giving respect to the unknown.

Often, exploring, discovering, analyzing and researching are what wizards want to do most.

Force is only secondary, of course it is necessary!

To conquer first! !

And I already have a draft, that is, after this dungeon, the protagonist will start to show extraordinary abilities,

Unexpectedly, many book lovers can't wait!

The wizard factor, of course there is, maybe the pace is really slow, I even have a good road system for the protagonist wizard behind...

The first dungeon allows everyone to have an understanding, and this dungeon is for everyone to adapt and be familiar with.

Do it directly later! !

This dungeon is almost over, within about ten chapters!

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I also want to explode the update, I also want to write more, but there is no way, the editor makes the second update, PK recommendation...

Only with your support can I go further...

Please follow up, come and see it every day! !

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