The Heroine, She Has a Prosperous Beauty

[The beginning of the new article is good, but it lacks a little novelty, and the characterization is a little disappointing. ]

Looking at this comment sent by the editor "Sheep", Leng Su remembered that the original owner's old article seemed to have just been completed. The new article is being submitted, and I am waiting for the editor's reply to finalize the time for publishing.

Leng Su did not rush to reply to the editor's message, but opened the beginning sent by the original owner and read it.

Good talent, good writing, but lack of experience.

The story is also good, but lacks life experience.

But thinking about it, Leng Su can understand it.

The original owner was a child who was spoiled since childhood, a flower in a greenhouse. Except for this marriage, no one in the Leng family would force her to do anything.

A novel, a perfect story, the heroine will experience a lot in her life... sweet, sour, bitter, spicy and salty.

The fullness of the story, the different character shaping of different characters, the causes and results of everything, the changes in the heart, etc., the original owner's current writing ability is still a little short of fire.

The story written by the original owner is very sweet and warm, but it also gives people a sense of boredom.

Because, a life that is too smooth and happy is something that people envy but cannot reach.

Leng Su did not read the rest of the story, closed the document, and opened the chat box with the editor "Sheep".

[Beautiful Sheep, I suddenly had a new inspiration, and I plan to modify the story and the beginning. ]

[Okay, then you can modify it as soon as possible and send it to me. And... I am a man! ! ! ]

Leng Su:... Embarrassing! ! !

[Sorry. ]

After sending these two words, the other side seemed to be really arrogant, and she did not see a reply to her message.

Leng Su shook her head and laughed, and could not help but complain: "Really... stingy."

After the chat, Leng Su was just bored, in order to avoid the tragic consequences of the original owner's lack of food in the plot.

She simply did not take a nap, but opened her laptop and started typing on the website background.

"Pa pa pa pa pa." The sound of keyboard tapping resounded throughout the afternoon.

When the evening came, when Ji Mu prepared dinner again and called her to eat. Leng Su stopped her hands and looked at the 30,000 words she had typed on the computer. She was simply incredulous.

According to the original owner's memory, she typed at most 6,000 words a day.

And she typed the original owner's five-day amount in just one afternoon. She felt that she would never be hungry again.

However, it must be said that Leng Su was a cheat.

First of all, her soul power is stronger than that of humans, and her mental strength is also strong. Moreover, the writer's blockage that the original owner often encountered does not exist for her at all.

Because... all the stories she wrote are real, and they are the real encounters she experienced when she traveled through so many mission worlds.

She wrote about the campus plane, and the story of the top student Leng Su and the scum Ke Muchen.

Unlike the stories of the iceberg school grass and the domineering school grass on the website, Ke Muchen's pure shyness is a unique existence.

"I'll be there soon."

After responding to Ji Mu's call outside the door, Leng Su directly published the campus article she had written.

The first release was 10,000 words, and the website passed it in just a few minutes. Leng Su also breathed a sigh of relief, locked the screen and went to eat.

Looking at the sumptuous dinner on the table, Leng Su sat down and began to discuss eating with Ji Mu.

"Ji Mu, can I discuss something with you?"

"Hmm? You, what do you want to say?" Someone said defensively.