The Apprentice is Too Diligent and the Master is a Bit Lazy

When I hit the finale, there was too much reluctance in my heart.

There are many, many characters in this book, all of which I knocked out with my hands, as if living in that world, and I was reluctant to end them.

But the story should end here.

At the beginning of the book, there are two main lines, the stealer line and the daily line.

I originally planned to write these two lines at the same time, but the author is too young and not strong enough to control it.

In the story of Penglaijian, the thread of the thief ended hastily.

After this line is over, it comes to the line of the heroine Daxie. When it is completely deciphered, the story of this book is over.

I made several fatal mistakes in the process of writing.

It's just that the characters are drawn too thinly.

Especially the fairy boy, I used a lot of strokes to write about this person, but was easily killed by the protagonist.

There is no foreshadowing in front of the second villain, and he appears very abruptly.

Another fatal disadvantage is:

Readers said that they like to read daily life, but then I tended to write daily life, writing too much daily life, resulting in too slow progress of the plot, watching too much daily life, it is easy to be aesthetically fatigued, and the follow-up is not strong.

After all, I just didn't grasp the degree well.

The next book must be a lesson learned.

Fortunately, the degree of completion of this book is still acceptable, the pits that should be filled have been filled, and the things that should be written have been written.

Strive to write better in the next book.

Thank you brothers for your support!

Finish the scattered flowers!

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