Reborn, I really don't want to fall in love

Chapter 40: Guidance to Yan Wei

Author: Yi Ye Ruochen

Chapter 40: Guidance to Yan Wei

"Don't worry, I'll take a look and tell you again."

Just now, Lin Yu was thinking about going to other places, and he had not had time to read what Yan Wei wrote.

"Yeah, OK, senior, don't worry."

Although Yan Wei was quite anxious, she still looked unhappy on the surface, in case Lin Yu was unhappy.

Then Lin Yu did not think about it anymore and focused on watching the novel written by Yan Wei.

Although Lin Yu is not very good at writing, he has written novels for several years. He is still clear about the basic situations of the novel, how to write them and whether they are good or not.

Soon, Lin Yu finished reading Yan Wei's opening chapter.

While Yan Wei was nervously looking at Lin Yu.

Lin Yu slowly spoke.

"Your beginning is really a big problem. There are many other areas that need to be revised. If I were an editor, I would not agree to your draft."

Lin Yu's words made Yan Wei feel cold and she could only bit her lips tightly.

“However, there are many advantages.”

This sentence made Yan Wei happy.

He asked happily:

"Senior Lin Yu, there are other advantages at the beginning of my article."

At this time, Yan Wei was almost unable to feel confident about being hit, so she couldn't wait.

Lin Yu glanced at Yan Wei who was anxious and looked at his anxious gaze. Thinking of Yan Wei who stood on the rostrum four years later, there was a unique sense of inexplicable contrast.

Lin Yu could imagine that when Yan Wei became famous in writing books, she stood in the spotlight and told her story about her writing books. She was a novel taught by a "senior" to teach her to write.

He taught until she became famous.

That must be very interesting.

Lin Yu looked at Yan Wei who was anxious and said with a smile:

"Don't worry, I'll analyze it for you slowly."

But what Lin Yu didn't know was that Yan Wei was also very shining in the school at this time and was the object of admiration by countless boys in the school.

But Yan Wei is usually very cold, which makes those boys discouraged.

There are only a few outstanding boys who dare to come forward and take the initiative to chase Yan Wei. It’s a pity that no one can catch up.

In the previous life, Lin Yu would work part-time as long as he had free time. All he thought about was Li Yuxuan and would not pay attention to other girls at all.

Lin Yu even hadn't participated in the school party, otherwise he wouldn't have known Yan Wei.

This led to Lin Yu not knowing Yan Wei very well.

"The first problem at the beginning of this article is that you use too much writing style, which leads to only writing style but no plot."

"Then your plot is too dispersed. I know you want to write everything in your mind and want to finish it all at once. This is not possible. You write a main line first and then intersperse the branch line."

At this time, Lin Yu did not deal with Yan Wei casually after knowing that the girl next to him was Yan Wei, but instead gave a very serious lecture, explaining his three or four years of writing experience to this novel one by one without any reservation.

Lin Yu knew very well that if it weren't for Yan Wei, he wouldn't have taken this path, and Yan Wei really had some help to him.

In addition, no one can refuse himself, so there is a well-known beautiful writer under his name.

When chatting with others in the future.

It is said that a certain writer was his apprentice before.

Then don't mention that you are so proud.

Of course, there is absolutely no Yan Wei, because she is very beautiful.

Lin Yu is not that kind of person.

It just surprised Lin Yu and the other way, but it was reasonable.

After a brief explanation from her own, Yan Wei could not only understand it with Lin Yu's brief explanation, but also learn from one example.

He is worthy of being a talented player, and his ability to comprehend is fast.

Lin Yu looked at Yan Wei with a delicate face and couldn't help but exclaim in his heart:

"What's wrong, Senior Lin Yu, what's wrong with what I said?"

Looking at Lin Yu looking at him, Yan Wei didn't know why, and she always felt a little embarrassed.

Looking at Yan Wei's eyes dodging.

He smiled in his heart, no matter how deserted Yan Wei was on the surface, she was still a little girl in her heart.

"No problem, you understand it very quickly. Just as you understand it just now, if you change the beginning now, you will definitely make a lot of progress."

Lin Yu said confidently.

I dare not say anything else. As for the beginning of the manuscript, Lin Yu really has absolute confidence. He wrote countless beginnings in those years of miserable careers, which was not in vain.

Even Lin Yu later sold how many of them at the beginning of selling.

If it weren't for the sanctions later, Lin Yu could make a lot of money by selling it alone.

"Really, thank you so much, Senior Lin Yu, if it weren't for you, I would probably be hit so hard that I didn't know what to do."

At this time, Yan Wei no longer looked lonely when facing other boys, but said excitedly:

"It's okay, your talent is also very good. If you stick to it, you will achieve unprecedented achievements in this industry."

Lin Yu said sincerely:

"Really, senior, can I really achieve certain achievements in this industry?"

Yan Wei looked at Lin Yu with beautiful eyes, a little unbelievable.

If it was Yan Wei in the past, she would definitely be very confident, but in recent times, the continuous rejection of the article and the editor's words really made Yan Wei wonder in her heart whether she was really not suitable to enter this industry.

But Yan Wei really wants to become a writer.

"Really, more true than gold, I never tell lies."

Lin Yu said with a smile:

"Yeah, Senior Lin Yu, I will definitely work hard and will not let you down for your help."

Yan Wei looked at Lin Yu with great gratitude. If it were other boys, Yan Wei just thought that boy was trying to please him and said nice words.

However, these words of affirmation were spoken from Senior Lin Yu, but Yan Wei trusted her very much.

Yan Wei believes that Lin Yu will definitely not deceive herself just because she pleases her. In Yan Wei's heart, it is already very good that senior Lin Yu is "not aggressive" to herself.

"Then senior, I can sit beside you and write a book. If I have any questions, can I ask you for advice."

Yan Wei mustered up the courage to say.

At this time, Yan Wei, who had always been cold, looked at Senior Lin Yu a little embarrassedly, for fear that Senior Lin Yu would reject him. After all, Senior Lin Yu at the beginning was very concerned that he would disturb him next to him.

After saying this, Yan Wei became a little nervous unconsciously. This was a feeling that Yan Wei had never felt before. Even when speaking in person as a teacher and student in the whole grade, Yan Wei had never been so nervous.

I was afraid that senior Lin Yu would refuse him.

"Yeah, yes, you can sit down, just don't bother yourself to write."

Lin Yu said indifferently.

As long as Yan Wei doesn't deliberately get close to her, it really has no effect on Lin Yu. Moreover, there is such a beautiful girl sitting next to her, and she can enjoy her for nothing, which is quite good.

"Really, senior, thank you very much."

Yan Wei was a little overjoyed, and she thought Lin Yu would reject her.

"It's okay, just write well."

Lin Yu said.

Lin Yu looked at Yan Wei's happy look and didn't know what to say. It was just such a trivial matter to be so happy.

Lin Yu is now in the library, blowing the air conditioner, sitting next to him, smelling the fragrance from Yan Wei.

On the other hand, Jiang Zijing was much more miserable.

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