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Late again.

...

He Chen's previous comics, with their novel settings and world view, could easily gather popularity in the early stage. But this Conan is different, there is no such amazing bright spot. Moreover, it is still a very niche type of suspense reasoning in China. It has been serialized for more than half a month, and the results have been tepid. Even the completed Muyin chapter can't compare.

"I said boss, why don't you take the usual way? What's wrong with drawing, drawing such a niche subject as reasoning and suspense." The editorial department filled in, and gradually shared Zhuang Bufan's pressure, watching Conan's grades keep improving Go, Zhuang Bufan vomited bitterness to He Chen.

"Meters Bonwe!" Thinking of the advertisement, He Chen blurted out.

Zhuang Bufan wondered: "What did you say?"

"..." He Chen smacked his lips, there was no Meters Bonwe, and there was no advertisement, so no one knew what he wanted to say. Such loneliness, no one understands.

"Don't you think this story is not good?"

He Chen still had doubts about his ability to adapt. He was afraid that if he accidentally made a mistake and ruined a classic, he would have to commit suicide and apologize to Gangchang Qingshan.

"It's not that it's not good-looking. The story is quite exciting, and it fully embodies the expression techniques of comics. For example, the roller coaster murder case you drew for the first time. If it is a novel, because you have to describe the details, just pay attention to it. If you look at the part that the author focuses on, you can easily infer it; but you drew the manga, if Xin Yi hadn’t exposed the woman in the end, no one would have noticed that the necklace around the woman’s neck had disappeared. This kind of need Carefully pay attention to the details of each picture in the comics, until the moment when it is revealed at the end, it is more exciting than reading novels!"

Zhuang Bufan spit and said excitedly to He Chen, it seems that he is very satisfied with this cartoon.

He Chen put down the tablet, stood up with the phone in hand, moved his body, and said, "Then what do you think is wrong?"

"...But aren't the men in black you arranged a bit too far-fetched? For example, to confirm something, isn't the Ferris wheel better and more convenient than the roller coaster? And even people who smuggle guns dare to blackmail, but because of the consideration just now Leaving the scene of the crime and not daring to kill the protagonist, it is a bit unreasonable. There is also the killing method, the speed of the roller coaster is very fast, and there is vibration, even a gymnast may not be able to do it? And in the process of moving, casually Wouldn't Conan be exposed if he rubbed a little bit?"

Zhuang Bufan raised a question.

Who knows what Teacher Qingshan Gangchang was thinking at the time, and He Chen couldn't answer. He could only say: "I dared to write it because it was impossible. Otherwise, would I be required to write a textbook teaching people how to kill people?"

"Hey, of course not." Zhuang Bufan laughed foolishly, "By the way, are the Fuchs and Conan you wrote above real or fake? Seeing how awesome your introduction is, I want to see it. "

"...True is also false, sometimes false is also true, there is something to do and there is nothing to do." He Chen was vague.

"If the first one is quite exciting, the second one is much worse. The standard is too low. The case is very simple and not exciting at all. It's just that the protagonist was slapped hard and looked uncomfortable. It's Xiaolan, didn't you set it up? Is the Baguazhang determined to pass on to others? Why every time you hit someone, you just kick your legs, what about the palm technique?"

"..." He Chen didn't know how to Baguazhang, so he only changed his name. The manga didn't change at all, and he kicked when it was time to kick.

"Don't you think it's nice to see long-legged girls kicking their legs?"

"……hiss,

When you say that, it really makes me think Xiaolan is pretty. Much more beautiful than the ones you painted before, gentle, powerful, beautiful, dedicated..."

"Ahem!"

He Chen coughed twice before pulling the dead fat man back.

"The third case had a bright spot. Because Conan's body became smaller and he lost his reputation, everyone no longer believed his words. The doctor gave him a voice changer, and he probably used it to imitate other people's speech in the future. Deceive people’s eyes and ears, and solve the case. But the use of ice to fix the knife and then jump to commit suicide is a bit too deceitful, and ordinary people may not be able to stab people to death with a single knife, not to mention the backward jumping suicide, even if you practice the buttocks. It may not be so precise. There is also Conan's kick, Mao Goro's landing is too precise, how could he just faint, take two steps back, and sit firmly on the sofa..."

"Well, it's better to be fake, otherwise everyone will use this trick, and the court will sentence me to abet murder, then I will die unjustly." He Chen didn't care.

...

In the past, every time He Chen made something, he would always be ridiculed by various media. I don't know if it was because He Chen slapped him in the face every time. The beating was so hard that Conan's grades were mediocre, but they didn't make trouble. Seeing nothing, Qiqi ignored He Chen.

Although the system is being upgraded, the reputation function is still operating as usual.

He Chen looked slightly dissatisfied with the reputation of his system. When you didn't need to advertise, they all came up like cats, smelling fishy; when you needed to advertise, but none of them disappeared. It's so annoying!

Liang Xiaoqiu is a writer of suspense mystery novels. Huaxia's suspense mystery novels are not well-known in the world, so that their status in the traditional domestic literary circles is also low - they can't produce enough novels, and they can't stand up.

And the Internet literature world is fast-food literature, and suspense mystery novels, which need to be savored word for word, cannot attract the attention of those who like fast-paced Internet literature.

As a result, suspenseful mystery novels have become a thing that uncles don’t care about and grandma doesn’t love. They have no status, can’t make money, and their thinking gradually becomes rigid. It feels as if the classic novels have been written by foreign countries, and they have fallen into writing everything. Do not come out of the cul-de-sac.

Liang Xiaoqiu likes to write novels, and prefers the tense and exciting atmosphere of suspense and reasoning. After writing a few novels with good reviews, she gradually froze into her own routine.

He is not a person who is at ease, and he wants to seek a breakthrough, but he has never been able to find the gap with those top suspense mystery novels.

By chance, he heard that someone on the Internet had drawn a reasoning comic. In the spirit of seeking a breakthrough, he didn't care whether it was good or not, he read it first.

"It turns out that this is a comic. The story is pretty good, but the reasoning is too childish. It feels like it's deliberately pandering. Have those police officers' detection methods been thrown out of school?"

While watching, Liang Xiaoqiu complained. There are not many comics, and every time it is too obvious, it can be seen at a glance; or it is an afterthought, and the most important clues are not given until the end.

Obviously quite general reasoning, but there is always a force pushing Liang Xiaoqiu to look seriously, what is it?

Looking at the comics, everything can be expressed in the screen, but in the novel, it has to be written carefully, neither too prominent nor too secretive.

"That's right! Details!" Liang Xiaoqiu was startled suddenly, and then overjoyed. He finally knew why he had been stagnant.

He excessively pursues the shaping of atmosphere and the oppression of tension, but he ignores the most important part of mystery novels-details!

It is precisely because I deliberately downplay the clues in order to deliberately shape the atmosphere, and sometimes I don’t even write, the atmosphere comes out, but it makes readers lose interest in reasoning!

A door slowly opened for him.

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