Naruto: I am invincible in the ninja world with full favorability

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(Volume 2, end)

Conclusion of Volume 2

If you are not interested, just skip it, it will not affect the plot.

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In the second volume, I originally wanted to write about Haneda's thoughts on the ninja world, and his desire to change the world after the tragedy he experienced, which corresponds to Madara's words at the end of the first volume.

But writing like this is not very pleasant.

This was the first story I wrote, which described the tragic situation of the Wave Country being monopolized.

Then Haneda couldn't stand what ninja was and tried to change.

But if you look closely, you will find that nothing has changed.

As long as the ninja system exists, the daimyo's aristocratic system will always exist.

Because the nobles always control the money, and ninjas follow money.

The overall story of the second volume is driven by the planning of Madara and Black Zetsu, which is similar to the Nabe Shadow in the first volume.

But the connection is not close, it just serves as a hidden thread to push forward.

With this, the second story of the Minato legend begins, with a powerful villain trying to stimulate Haneda and Obito to open their eyes.

This part of the plot is well written. Haneda discovers Madara's plan for himself and Obito, and then wants to protect himself or his companions.

Minato's love for Kushina and the village also shows another side of ninja.

After that, I didn’t write much about what ninjas are, but described them from the side.

For example, Scorpio pursues art and revenge, while Horned is purely for money and nothing else.

Yahiko fights for peace, Nagato and Konan fight for their companions. This is similar to Obito and they have some intersections.

The most direct one is the "feint" I wrote in Rain Country.

Writing that Sakumo almost died for Haneda will increase readers' favorability towards Sakumo.

Generally, supporting characters who are willing to die for the protagonist are well-liked by readers.

Afterwards, it was written that Sakumo gave up his mission and sacrificed his life for Haneda.

(PS: Abandoning the mission was implicit, as we were experiencing a war at the time)

He didn't explain anything before he died, he just cared about Haneda and his son Kakashi, which created a better tragic outlook.

The second sword, the comfort in front of Kakashi’s memorial.

He knew that Haneda was avoiding him, so he left on purpose and waited for Haneda to come out.

Normally, Kakashi should be sadder than Haneda because his father died.

He should also feel resentment towards Haneda, because his father's death was largely caused by Haneda.

But even so, Kakashi comforted Haneda instead.

Comfort is the real knife in times of sadness.

I believe that many people are like me, who don’t cry when they are sad, but feel comforted by someone…

You know everything.

The third sword, Fugaku’s father.

I didn't mention this much, but people did die.

In the hidden plot, Fugaku's father sacrificed himself on the battlefield to protect his son, just like Dai saved Kai.

But even though he was so sad about the war, he still comforted Haneda, who had lost his teacher and best friend.

This point is expressed indirectly through Itachi's mouth. If you just think about it carefully, you will understand the sadness in it.

The fourth sword, Obito's grandmother,

New Year’s Eve dinner and amulets are used to express the grandmother’s love for her grandson and half-grandson.

It then goes on to say that grandma knows what Haneda likes to eat and drink, and her love for him deepens.

Then write about Haneda's white lie, because Obito was not dead at that time, and he still held on to hope that Obito would return.

The story could no longer be concealed, and it was written that the grandmother had been waiting for her grandson to come home, and also indirectly expressed her concern for Haneda at the cemetery.

Finally, after his grandmother comforted Haneda, he died at home.

All these knives came together.

When some people thought that Haneda would turn evil, Haneda opened the Mangekyō Sharingan because of love.

There has been a huge improvement in both strength and state of mind.

But this improvement is pessimistic.

Because many important people died.

If I think about it carefully, I feel regretful.

At the same time, Obito also opened his Mangekyō Sharingan because of the tragedy of Rin and the ninja world, and said similar words to Haneda.

The CP feeling is perfect, right?

The two people's words echoed the dream at the beginning of the second volume and what Madara said at the end of the first volume.

Understand the world and change the world.

(PS: Actually, many parts of my book correspond to the previous article, but no one has noticed...)

It also fits with the original work's idea that Obito wanted to change the world in the face of Rin's death.

Some people may say that it is difficult for Kamui to hide his tears, but in the original work, it was indeed Obito who opened the Mangekyō first because of Rin.

After experiencing war and the darkness of the world, I want to change the world.

In this life, Obito has a new bond, but the emotions in Shirin's words are not strong enough.

Afterwards, because of Haneda and Kakashi, he began to think about the world, change the world, and delay the opening of the Mangekyo, which would be more logical.

It's just like when Itachi is alone at the beach recalling every detail of the past, and his kaleidoscope is opened because of Itachi's love.

Personally, I don’t think sadness comes immediately after someone dies; sadness is a delayed process.

On countless nights, during a dinner, or just at a special time.

Overall, I changed the writing style for the second volume, probably two or three times.

I know the routine of the first volume.

First imagine which character is stronger, try to get in touch with him, then encounter obstacles, overcome them, and finally gain something, with a little shock added in.

In the second volume I focused more on dangers and difficulties.

That is, the protagonist is about to face a powerful enemy, has something to protect, or a strong motivation, and then encounters the enemy, encounters setbacks, and through the previous personal efforts, overcomes the obstacles, and finally achieves the goal, gains something, and is shocked.

This is the routine.

In essence, the routines of cool novels are the same, they all involve emotional pull.

Regarding the Third World War, strictly speaking I abbreviated it.

Only the key points are written, and the key points are basically on the protagonist.

You will find that the victory of the war seems to be all thanks to the protagonist.

Then there is shock. What I wrote most about in World War III is shock.

To put it more complicatedly, it is the reactions of the major characters to the actions of the protagonist.

Among them, I think the more interesting one is the scorpion.

Scorpion fought three games with Haneda.

One win and two losses.

The victory was a crushing victory, and then Scorpio also reflected on his own shortcomings.

In the second game, we targeted Haneda, but we didn’t expect Haneda to have another big move.

In the third game, the Faraday Cage was used against Haneda again, but no one expected that Haneda still had a trick up his sleeve: Wood Release.

These were all laid out, the Faraday cage was unexpected and very interesting.

I got the inspiration from a book friend.

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Well, after looking back at the short review that criticized me, I admit that the ending of the second volume was written rather hastily.

This is probably because in order to create a sad atmosphere, some things were unconsciously abandoned.

And I am also consciously trying to speed up the progress and don’t want to write too much about the war.

I admit that the logic is not well written.

But I think there is nothing wrong with this writing style, it’s just not perfect enough, which led some book friends to think that Haneda’s IQ is worrying after careful examination.

Judging from the data, although my score dropped because of this, my follow-up reading did not decrease, but increased instead.

This proves that there is nothing wrong with my writing, it’s just not perfect.

Here, I would like to apologize to all the readers. It was my fault that I did not lay the groundwork well and was in a hurry to catch up with the progress, which caused the story to take too long and many things not to be explained well, which led to a bad impression among some readers.

This is left on June 2024, 6, and I would like to apologize to the readers again.

I was wrong( ?? ﹏ ?? )

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Answer questions from book lovers.

Where is the system? Where is the favorability system?

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