"Tell me!"
"I've prepared the outline, and Editor Machida thinks it's okay, but I'm stuck on the beginning. I've been writing for several days, and none of the four beginnings are satisfactory," Xia Feifei said somewhat seriously.
"I think what you wrote is quite good; it's just that your standards are too high," Yamada Elf commented.
"So you mean you want me to take a look for you?" Tsuchimikado Fuyu asked.
"Although this isn't the main purpose, it's good to have you take a look and listen to the fans' opinions." Xia Feifei quickly sent four emails to Tsuchimikado Fuyu and said.
Judging from her practiced movements, it didn't seem like she was just casually asking Tsuchimikado Fuyu for help; she had come prepared.
谷藩
After receiving the document, Tsuchimikado Fuyu suddenly said, "By the way, my company recently developed a better communication software. You can give it a try."
Yamada Elf and Kasumi Fat reacted differently upon hearing this.
Xia Feifei remained calm and politely declined, saying, "This software is quite useful, and I'm used to using it."
Yamada Elf turned her head and asked expectantly, "Could it be the legendary account that can be used to log in to SAO's chat software?"
"To be precise, the Starry Sky Communication account can be used to log in to all games in the Starry Sky system, including most of the games in the Starry Sky Mall," Tsuchimikado Fuyu said with a smile.
As expected of a game enthusiast, Yamada Elf noticed the rumors released on the Starry Sky official website so quickly.
The official website of Starry Sky Group does not explicitly state that they have developed Starry Sky Communication Software, but through this rumor, they have been slowly building up interest and generating buzz, gradually attracting attention from the outside world.
However, since there has been no clear statement from within the group, no one knows whether it is true or just a rumor.
Upon hearing this, Yamada Fairy excitedly opened her phone's app store, but she couldn't find the Starry Sky app that Tsuchimikado Fuyu had mentioned.
"fraud!"
"What's your rush? It's not even available yet, of course you can't find it." Tsuchimikado Tou rolled his eyes at her and said, "This software is still in beta testing. It's only available for internal use within our company. If you want it, I can send you the installation package."
"Send it over quickly."
"So, senior, do you want to give it a try? This software is pretty good, it has all the functions, and it's very convenient for sending files or chatting."
Furthermore, there's a group chat system. I've created my own author group so everyone can discuss any issues there.
After a moment's hesitation, Xia Feifei also requested the installation package.
Soon, the two downloaded the software. The software icon was a white background with a blue-purple six-pointed star pattern on it.
Click to enter, and the interface is similar to the QQ of the previous life, but it is simpler, looks clean and tidy, and is very comfortable.
Functionally, they were similar. With Tsuchimikado Fuyu's introduction, the two quickly completed the registration and joined the writer group created by Tsuchimikado Fuyu.
Haruto Fuwa, crying in a storm: "Welcome, welcome! Welcome, Shizuko Kasumi-sensei! Welcome, Elf Yamada-sensei!"
I am a siscon (Itsuki Hashima): "Welcome, welcome! By the way, this group is the Fantastic Bunko discussion group, right? Is it really okay for Yamada-sensei to join?"
The Universe's Most Beautiful Girl: "I'm happy with my high sales, is that not allowed?"
Chiba's Fallen Saint Black Cat: "Ah~ It's that trick again. Don't you have anything else to say besides sales figures?"
Rino: "Exactly, exactly. And this group is called a paperback exchange group, but it's more like a familiar author exchange group. The name has always been 'Author Exchange Meeting Here'."
Xia Shizi: "If you don't need your eyes, you can donate them to someone who does."
The Hashima Izuki sank instantly!
The most beautiful girl in the universe: "By the way, when did you guys get this messaging app? I didn't even know about it as early as Haruto Fuwa and Itsuki Hashima!"
Haruto Fuwa, who was crying in a storm: "I feel like what Yamada Elf-sensei said was quite rude, but we only found out about it a couple of days ago."
The author of Tianyu said it would be convenient to communicate with other writers, so I downloaded it and tried it out. I found it to be quite interesting.
I've already created my fan group, and once the software is released, I can chat with my fans frequently.
Crab, who likes his seniors the most: "Indeed, chatting and joking with everyone is so much fun, a great way to pass the time."
Chapter 1387 Kasumigaoka Utaha's Invitation
Soon, Yamada Fairy and Kasumigaoka Utaha were successfully captivated by "Starry Sky Chat".
The reason is simple: chatting has become more convenient, and there are more functions now.
Especially for Yamada Elf, she won't have to painstakingly tap on the window to play games anymore. She can just create a group chat and start voice chat when playing games with friends.
While Yamada Elf and Kasumigaoka Utaha were chatting with Kuroneko and the others in the group chat, Tsuchimikado Fuyu also opened the four documents and started reading them one by one.
None of these four documents contain much content; they are mostly just an introduction of about 10,000 words, with an outline attached to the first document.
However, when Tsuchimikado Fuyu finished reading the outline, his expression was like this: (((;???;)))
I was completely dumbfounded!
Let's first look at the male protagonist's background: a high school student, the child of a mysterious, reclusive family, who accidentally comes into contact with the abilities of an Onmyoji and from then on takes on the job of slaying demons and protecting the city.
Does it look familiar?
And looking at his height and personality, Tsuchimikado Fuyu just wants to say, you might as well just write my name down!
And all you did was change the surname and replace "winter" with "summer"... Could you be any more perfunctory?
But just when Tsuchimikado Fuyu thought Kasumigaoka Utaha was going to write a hot-blooded story, the style suddenly changed.
The female lead is a senior from the same high school, a genius writer. She is basically based on Xia Feifei herself, except that she has removed her sharp tongue and turned into a very assertive and mature woman.
Then, due to a creative block, after reading an urban legend, she prepared to seek inspiration, but unexpectedly encountered a demon and was then saved by the male protagonist.
From then on, the female protagonist began to search for the male protagonist, preparing to use him as the subject matter to write the world's number one light novel.
That's right, the subsequent outline doesn't have many scenes of slaying demons and monsters; it's mostly just the male and female leads shamelessly showing affection.
Moreover, they met in the first volume, lived together in the second volume due to an accident, started being affectionate and affectionate in the third volume, and basically confirmed their boyfriend-girlfriend relationship in the fourth volume.
As for the later volumes, to put it simply, they can be described in nine words: "a shameless and unrestrained married life."
Got it, love!
It's her old profession!
Tsuchimikado Fuyu shook his head, suppressing the urge to complain, and began to read the four beginnings.
While Tsuchimikado Fuyu was quietly appreciating the beauty, Yamada Elf was chatting enthusiastically with everyone in the group, oblivious to the world around her. She had even learned how to make memes and was secretly taking pictures of Tsuchimikado Fuyu, preparing to make a bunch of memes for him as revenge.
Meanwhile, Kasumigaoka Utaha would steal glances at him every now and then, then continue pretending to chat in the group. However, she was actually very nervous inside, after all, her protagonist status was too obvious!
About half an hour later, the coffee on the table had been replaced once, and Tsuchimikado Fuyu finally finished reading the four beginnings.
"How...how is it?" Xia Feifei asked nervously.
"Hmm...it's alright, actually." Tsuchimikado Fuyu pondered for a moment and said:
"The first opening scene has too many battle scenes, which you're probably not very good at describing. It's a bit strange. I think you should talk to Kuroneko or Itsuki Hashima about this."
“Hey! I’m also very good at writing battle scenes, okay? You can ask me!” As soon as Tsuchimikado Fuyu finished speaking, Yamada Elf immediately objected and said with a displeased look.
"Heh!" Tsuchimikado Fuyu chuckled disdainfully. Don't you know why you're so popular? How arrogant!
Of these authors, Black Cat's battles are the most enjoyable to read, even surpassing Crab King's, though Crab King doesn't write battles either.
The reason is actually quite simple. After all, Kuroko is a seasoned chuunibyou (a person with delusions of grandeur), and she's an expert in this area.
Although Yamada Elf is a bit of a chuunibyou (a person with delusions of grandeur), she is still too inexperienced, and she always unconsciously leans towards fan service in battles.
谷觜
As a result, the battle scenes weren't written very well, and most of the writing focused on fan service content.
Yamada Elf was furious at Tsuchimikado Fuyu's silent mockery, and angrily kicked him several more times, but she didn't kick too hard, afraid of hurting him.
As for Kasumigaoka Utaha, she nodded thoughtfully. She also felt that the first chapter was a bit strange, but she couldn't figure out what was wrong.
"And what about the second one?"
"The second story is generally okay, but the male and female leads meet too slowly. It feels like the evil spirit is a pushover, and he's just playing around with the female lead."
"So you mean the strength is insufficient?"
"A demon! It's fierce and murderous. At most, it's just to buy time. Give it a 'nonsense' attribute so it can ramble on at the start."
Although most evil spirits in reality are ruthless and don't talk much, since many evil spirits don't know how to speak, they just kill and that's it, why bother with so much nonsense.
Of course, there are exceptions, such as the one that was tricked by Yoshiko Hanabatake into keeping at home.
Next, Tsuchimikado Fuyu shared her thoughts and suggestions on the other two articles with Kasumigaoka Utaha, and also told her about Hanabatake Yoshiko's case.
This surprised them both.
"So there really are such stupid ghosts!" Yamada Elf said blankly.
“No, I should say that Hanabatake and her mother are just too amazing.” Kasumigaoka Utaha shook her head and said, “But this is indeed a very good source of material, which we can use in the future.”
Kasumigaoka Utaha quickly typed on her phone's memo app, preparing to record this material so she wouldn't forget it later.
After commenting, Tsuchimikado Fuyu said, "So, what is your real purpose, Senpai? Do you want me to help you choose a beginning?"
"Come with me on a date!"
"Huh??" Tsuchimikado Fuyu and Yamada Elf stared at her in disbelief. No, how did the topic suddenly jump to this?
This doesn't make sense!
"A date...a date? That's so bold! And it has nothing to do with you!" Yamada Fairy said in a panic.
Didn't you agree to form an alliance? Why did you suddenly run away?
"Senior, may I ask why?" Tsuchimikado Fuyu wasn't too flustered. After her initial surprise, she quickly calmed down and asked seriously.
"Just a field trip. I haven't been able to capture the imagery I want in my writing, so I wanted to experience it in real life," Kasumigaoka Utaha said calmly.
Of course, whether this field trip is legitimate or not depends on how smoothly the date goes!
Her purpose was indeed to gather material for the field, but dating was also part of it!
They don't interfere with each other!
"But..." Yamada Elf still felt that Kasumigaoka Utaha's purpose was not so simple, but for a moment she didn't know how to say it.
Just as she was struggling with this, she heard Tsuchimikado Fuyu say, "Sure!"
Kasumigaoka Utaha's eyes lit up, while Yamada Elf sat down somewhat unhappily.
But just then, Tsuchimikado Fuyu continued, "Later, senior, you'll come back with us, and then in the evening I'll take you to slay demons and monsters so you can experience it for yourself."
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