I, the Holy Son of Yaoguang, am invincible in the world! (Even my beautiful master is invincible!) Author: Lan Yuexing

Edited by: Little Book "Child"

 

 【brief introduction】

My first master is the Empress Liuli, a woman of extraordinary talent and beauty. My second master is a nine-tailed celestial fox, a true enchantress! My third master is a pure and immaculate female swordswoman, and my fourth master is a youthful-looking yet arrogant generation's swordsman… And I, I possess the Rage System! As long as I anger others, I can obtain numerous rewards. [Ding! You have angered the entire sect, gaining the Haotian Divine Body, which will unlock a hundredfold increase in comprehension and cultivation speed!] [Ancient legend says that those who possess the Haotian Divine Body will eventually become the ruler of the Three Realms!]

Rewrite the general direction.

1. QCQS's personal definition: Any female character who appears in the story is beautiful, regardless of whether she's a protagonist or antagonist, and must develop feelings for the protagonist before being accepted into the main character's harem. This is what I consider "accepting all female characters." I also accept characters whose mothers are too beautiful (this strange preference likely stems from watching some novels about imperial uncles; ideally, the mother should be an orphan or widow, and the orphan might be changed to a virgin if necessary). The world should be set up with a certain race where all the women are beautiful or surrounded by beauties, such as succubi or fox spirits. I personally prefer accepting all races, but it feels a bit far-fetched, so it depends on the situation.

2. Dislikes brotherhood (or other relationships involving men). Actually, it's not so much that I dislike brotherhood as I dislike it as I dislike it when the male lead (not just brothers, but all the men related to the male lead) has a wife, or even a very beautiful one, or a harem (a major flaw, I feel like I could die instantly). I can tolerate the male lead being single or marrying someone of average appearance.

3. I dislike stories with few or infrequent scenes involving women, especially those that are only briefly mentioned. The plot should be concise and engaging, not verbose; I dislike stories that are too long.

4. I don't like any romantic scenes or even sex scenes between the male lead's parents (especially if the mother is very beautiful. I can accept scenes of marital affection between the couple if the mother is of average or low attractiveness, but I cannot accept kissing scenes, sex scenes, or even hints). This aligns with my preference for a mother who is of average or low attractiveness, preferably an orphan or widow.

5. I cannot accept plots in the world where villains rape innocent women, or even rape and then kill them.

6. Unacceptable triggers/frustrations:

The death of a female villain (especially a beautiful one is unacceptable; it's best to assimilate her and then recruit her, but it also depends on the plot. I generally don't read novels where a beautiful female villain dies. I personally like to recruit her, but the plot requires her to die, which is contradictory.)

The woman who leaked urine (felt unwell and then died suddenly)

The Condor Heroes (It's so painful, then he suddenly dies)

Green (Don't come to this one)

The molestation of women (this is hard to say; mild abuse is acceptable, but beatings, the villain tearing off the clothes, giving the villain fan service, the villain holding hands, etc. are not allowed)

WRQ (This is a bad point; I generally don't read books like this. I don't like this kind of plot in normal books or normal stories about imperial uncles.)

Rape (If the male lead is strong and vicious, and the female villain is also acceptable, and the female lead is very good-looking, then it's fine; if the female lead is average-looking, then it doesn't matter)

Extreme content (I don't like this kind of book, I won't touch it).

Masked identity (or false identity): Well, in most cases it's acceptable. It's acceptable if the protagonist uses his real identity during the process of getting close to the female lead, or if the female lead finds out or suspects that he is the male lead afterward or during the process, or if he uses a false identity to plot and get close to the female lead, and the female lead finds out that he is the male lead afterward. What's unacceptable is if the female lead likes the male lead with the false identity and then gets close to him with the false identity. Other than that, it depends on the situation.

NTL: Under the conditions of implementation, the female protagonist must, as far as possible, retain her first kiss. Non-virgin married women are not allowed, but married women who have retained their first kiss are acceptable.

Not a first love (no public displays of affection, no physical contact – Dame).

To be supplemented...

So based on the above, you can roughly know which aspects will be modified and whether they suit your taste. If necessary, I will also completely rewrite the character development and ending, but the content and plot must be attractive enough to me.

[Edited Content]

1. Skip the scenes with multiple one-on-one interactions in the book, as I don't want to elaborate and can't, it's a knowledge gap. The rest of the book is full of interesting details. The initial recommendation had a lot of detail, but I skipped the scenes with more detail in the subsequent recommendations. Adding more details is quite painful, as it's easy to become formulaic, especially for the "royal uncle" type of scenes. My writing isn't great, and I haven't written many royal uncle scenes before, so please bear with me.

2. The completely uncensored version (the original manuscript before the platform automatically deleted words, sentences, paragraphs, or the author changed the name or content).

3. Extensive revisions were made—tens of thousands of words.

4. Similarly, the plot will not be revealed; treat it as a new book.

Book scanning report:

This book belongs to the "Invincible Little White Harem" genre, but it's frustrating.

Book scanning progress: 587 (Latest today)

Male lead: Lin Xiao: Sleazy, but not entirely sleazy. Average-looking, but very handsome.

Female lead: Master, Liuli (Empress). Character: Cold and aloof, but not entirely so; possibly greedy. Recent chapters hint at her potential reincarnation as a powerful being. She usually wears a veil because she is so beautiful. Partially a romance novel, not yet fully completed.

Second Master, Ji Yunyou (Fox): She has a charming personality and seems wanton, but in reality, apart from the male protagonist, no other man has ever touched her (thumbs up). She has nine tails and nine bodies (one is worth nine). She has been romanced but not yet fully pursued.

Third Master, Bai Xuer (cc): A cold and aloof swordswoman, her lack of experience in romantic relationships led to her being easily (x) conquered by the male protagonist. Currently, she has been conquered and romanced.

Fourth Master, Ye Guo'er (cc): A proud and innocent-looking young swordswoman, a typical proud and aloof old loli. In the early stages, she liked to make bets with the male protagonist. After being taught a lesson by him, she fell in love with him and even considered giving up becoming a god for him. Currently, she has been romanced and has been completed.

Si Lanqi (cc): The Palace Mistress of the Music Palace. While the male protagonist was staying at the palace, she drugged her disciple in an attempt to tie him up (not physically), but the protagonist managed to break free. After spanking her, she developed feelings for him. Later, she was saved by him in a moment of crisis and fell completely in love with him. Currently, she has been successfully romanced and completed.

Su Yunwei cc: The poor disciple mentioned above had feelings for the male protagonist, and when he returned to the Holy Land, he overheard her thoughts (no explanation needed, right?). She's already been romanced and won over.

Ji Sinan cc: A disciple of Feixing Palace, she fell in love with the male lead upon seeing him and was subsequently won over. She has already been won over and romanced.

Princess Chiling (cc): The ninth princess of a certain dynasty, she develops feelings for the male protagonist upon seeing him. After he helps her seize the throne, she falls for him and is then seduced by him along with the woman mentioned above. Currently, she has been successfully romanced and taken down.

Youqingcc: One of the most beautiful courtesans at Miaoyin Pavilion (owned by her second master). Judging from her appearance, she seems untouched, which is a bit disappointing that the author didn't write about. She develops feelings for the male lead after meeting him; she's the type who could easily seduce him upon first sight. However, the male lead hesitates because he's worried about the second master's influence. After experiencing something similar to what happened to Si Yunqi, she falls completely in love with him. She seduces him with the (help) of her second master. Currently, she has been successfully romanced and seduced.

Shen Qingyun cc (????***): Did the author forget about this?????? The latest chapter wasn't included!

The former courtesan, initially sent by the second master to protect the male protagonist, later developed feelings for him and, with the second master's (help), ended up with the woman mentioned above. Currently, she's been romanced and has been romanced, but hasn't been officially collected yet.

Luo Kongying cc: The male protagonist's little apprentice, cute...and very strong, a Japanese-style little loli. Currently half-conquered, not yet fully pursued.

Ling'er cc: A ghost the male protagonist saved in a village. She possesses the body of the Nine Netherworlds and considers him like a brother because of his help. She has observed him doing things many times and has developed feelings for him. She should be the kind of legally romanceable loli. Currently in the Underworld, she can't be forgotten, right? Currently, she's been romanced but not yet fully pursued.

Frustrating + Thriller: 1. The male lead has a brother, and I personally think this supporting male character is extremely tragic. He's very effeminate, dates a very masculine woman... and in the end, he even becomes a skeleton, in the truest sense.

2. In the latest chapter, the male protagonist took away a meaningless FC (presumably a type of item) and wanted to go to the God Realm????? Even FC doesn't want this, but you want this? I don't know if he'll accept it; if he does, there should be an explanation. I'll update below later.

3. She rejected Si Yunqi's cousin (I forgot the name) because of a mole on her buttock, and ultimately wanted to give herself to the male lead but was rejected. (???) This female lead should have a sequel; I'll wait for updates. If there's no sequel, the author might as well die.

4. Some non-main characters have harems, but most of them are not described in detail.

5. He transmigrated, but had no connection with any female lead before transmigrating.

6: The male lead is the most despicable character I've ever read in a novel.

7. I hope everyone can communicate with this author. This author is a real person, and many of the frustrations mentioned above can be resolved well later on. Has he had any good works recently? I think he has. Although it's a bit simplistic, the theme is relatively novel. I thought I would never read system novels again, but this book changed my mind. Based on some descriptions, I can see that this author is aware of what to avoid… I hope he can change that in the future.

Source: http://tieba.baidu.com/p/7504051640?share=9105 (@MyWifeHanamitsu)

Chapter 1 Epic Reward: Haotian Divine Body

"Lin Xiao, didn't you say you wanted to pass the test and become a personal disciple of the Four Fairies of Yaoguang? You've already come this far, so don't back down!"

"A real man shouldn't just talk the talk but walk the walk."

"Hahaha... Look, Lin Xiao is pretending to be stupid. He's definitely chickened out."

A group of young people looked down at a handsome young man, mocking and ridiculing him.

However, the boy's eyes were empty and lost.

"What the hell... have I time-traveled?"

Soon, Lin Xiao murmured softly, his eyes regaining their luster as he scanned his own body up and down.

Suddenly, a flood of memories rushed into my mind.

After a while, Lin Xiao roughly understood the situation.

He transmigrated to a martial arts world called "Tianyuan Continent".

He replaced an outer disciple of the Yao Guang Holy Land.

Yaoguang Holy Land is located in the Southern Heaven Domain of Tianyuan Continent.

It is undoubtedly the number one power in the Southern Heaven Domain, with profound foundations.

However, he himself was of mediocre talent.

Three whole years have passed, and he's still only at the first level of the Blood Condensation Realm.

"Lin, you good-for-nothing, stop playing dead. Everyone's come all this way to see your assessment, they've practically taken their pants off, can't you at least move a little?"

Li Yuanxing kicked Lin Xiao, smiling sarcastically.

"none of your business!"

Lin Xiao wasn't intimidated and retorted directly.

The so-called Four Fairies of Yaoguang were not only extremely powerful and all-powerful, but each of them was also as beautiful as a celestial being.

They ruled over the Yao Guang Holy Land and were renowned throughout the Tianyuan Continent.

They once said that they would only take on one apprentice in their lifetime.

They were taught by four people.

To this end, a test was set up by the Four Immortals.

Whoever passes the test can become their personal disciple and be taught their unique skills.

This was naturally a great opportunity for the disciples of Yaoguang Holy Land to rise to the top in one step.

You'll also get the chance to get close to four stunning beauties.

What if something more than friendly happens with the beautiful female mentors...?

Wouldn't that be enjoying the blessings of having multiple wives?

Unfortunately, things weren't as simple as they seemed.

The Four Immortals' assessment was extremely difficult.

Over the years.

Countless disciples participated in the assessment one after another, but none of them succeeded. They all ended up in a miserable and pathetic state.

"Oh! Getting grumpy now?"

Li Yuanxing sneered, "Lin Xiao, don't you know your own limitations? You're not even worthy of emptying the chamber pot for the Four Fairies of Yaoguang."

"You even took the assessment? Where did you get the courage?"

"That's absolutely right!"

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