My anime/manga fandom can't be that lazy.

[Yakumo Shiro: Okay. By the way, I've read all of your manuscripts.]

Black Cat: ...

Ruri Gokou, who was on the other end of the line, was suddenly interrupted. She hurriedly deleted the sentence she had typed and looked expectantly at the screen for Dongfang Bai's next words.

To be honest, Ruri Gokou was very scared because her light novels had been rejected so many times in the past, which made her very insecure.

However, she also developed a very strong ability to resist harsh words. No matter how offensive the other party's words were, she could remain expressionless, at most feeling a little uncomfortable.

[Yakumo Shiro: I think it's pretty good. You just need to refine the excessive vocabulary and write the setting step by step, and then your light novel will be basically complete.]

The so-called 'too many words' actually refers to the fact that the black cat uses far too many chuunibyou (delusional) phrases. It's just going out to buy groceries, but it uses complicated language and obscure words to describe it, which looks very strange and awkward.

On the other side of the screen, Gokou Ruri's face gradually flushed red. She had long expected to be criticized for this, but when she was writing light novels, she would unconsciously use chuunibyou language whenever inspiration struck.

[Yakumo Haku: If you really can't get rid of this word, perhaps you could try incorporating it into battle scenes instead of using it in your usual descriptions.]

Dongfang Bai's words made the black cat's eyes light up. Indeed, if it were a battle scene, even if you used the most cringeworthy words to describe it, it would only feel incredibly cool, without anything strange about it.

She hadn't thought of this at all before. At this moment, she once again discovered Dongfang Bai's writing talent. He really had read her entire manuscript to understand so much.

In reality, Dongfang Bai only gave a general suggestion; it wasn't as exaggerated as Gokou Ruri had imagined...

[Black Cat: Thank you so much!]

[Yakumo Shiro: It's alright, it's alright]

Upon seeing the message Black Cat typed out, Dongfang Bai's lips twitched slightly. Black Cat was far too polite. Even though he had told her many times not to be so polite, she inexplicably still acted this way.

However, I have nothing to be proud of, since my Fate story is just a translation of the plot that has already been written in 510, and I describe it using the writing style of Chinese web novels.

However, because I have read so many light novels and Chinese web novels, I can easily see where the problems are in the light novels written by Black Cat and what the flaws are.

It's just a matter of accumulating experience. As the saying goes, if you look at the whole book from the perspectives of both a reader and an author, you'll make different discoveries.

Ruri Gokou's hands were a little stiff on the keyboard. She quickly typed a line, "As a thank you, can we go to a café in Akihabara together later?", but then blushed and slowly deleted it, then reorganized her thoughts.

But no matter what she typed next, she could only slowly delete it, leaving her at a loss and sitting there dumbfounded.

After all, she has no friends and doesn't know how to communicate, let alone take the initiative to invite people out to play. This kind of thing is still too difficult for Gokou Ruri at the moment.

[Kuro Neko: Thank you so much for today. I'll definitely ask you for more advice when I have time.]

In the end, she could only type this sentence as the ending, sat down in her chair and sighed slightly, feeling a little annoyed. So she dialed Kirino Kousaka's number and asked her to play games together...

Chapter Thirty-Six: No problem! I already know my allowance! [Please subscribe automatically]

After a few boring days of studying, Saturday arrived quickly, and it was time to go see musical instruments with the members of the Light Music Club.

Today, Dongfang Bai was dressed in a fairly ordinary everyday outfit: a black and white striped jacket over a light-colored short-sleeved shirt, along with comfortable trousers and sneakers.

He had arranged to meet the four members of the Light Music Club at the central shopping mall area, and he was also curious about what the other four looked like when they weren't wearing their school uniforms.

However, there was still some awkwardness. He shouldn't have agreed so quickly. He didn't seem to realize that he was going out to buy a guitar with four girls, which was actually just shopping.

"Ok?"

Dongfang Bai saw the group of people standing under the bus stop sign from a distance. Because they were all very cute girls, they were very eye-catching and super conspicuous when they stood together. You could see them at a glance.

"Hey~ Bai Jun, over here!"

Dongfang Bai originally planned to walk over quietly, but suddenly Tainaka Ritsu saw him, his eyes lit up slightly, and then he raised his right hand and started shouting loudly, causing everyone nearby to look in his direction.

"You're so slow."

Tainaka Ritsu said with some dissatisfaction, while Dongfang Bai covered his head and didn't know how to complain. They said they were supposed to meet here at 2 pm on Saturday, but it was only 1:50 pm now, and he had already arrived early.

"There should be about ten minutes left before the meeting time."

Dongfang Bai complained helplessly, making Qiushan Mio blush, because the three of them had arrived quite early, having been waiting there since 1:30.

Only Akiyama Mio, Tainaka Ritsu, and Kotobuki Tsumugi have arrived so far. Hirasawa Yui, who is the most worrying, is still nowhere to be seen. Dongfang Bai guesses that she will definitely be the last to arrive.

Today, the members of the Light Music Club were wearing outfits different from their usual casual clothes. Instead of looking strange on them, the outfits highlighted their youthful energy. In addition, all of them were quite good-looking, so they were very eye-catching standing there.

Especially Dongfang Bai, standing among the three girls, was met with hostility from the male audience, which could be felt even with his back turned.

Ok?

Dongfang Bai was taken aback. He suddenly noticed that the three girls' gazes were a bit off, especially those of Akiyama Mio and Tainaka Ritsu, who were looking at him with very strange eyes...

What's going on...?

"Um... good afternoon~."

Akiyama Mio blushed and greeted Dongfang Bai very politely. Today she was dressed very appropriately, wearing a beige and pink hooded jacket over a gray shirt that looked very similar to Dongfang Bai's.

She wore light purple trousers and ordinary sneakers, but she also carried a very nice bag, and her long hair was draped behind her head, exuding a unique charm.

Ritsu Tainaka, standing to the side, didn't dress as elaborately. He simply wore a very convenient light gray jacket and trousers, giving off a casual, boyish vibe.

Kotobuki Tsumugi, dressed in a pure white dress, stood to the side, smiling gently, her eyes crinkling into two small crescent moons. She seemed quite happy to be able to go out with her friend.

"Where's Wei? Hasn't she arrived yet?"

Dongfang Bai glanced around and didn't seem to see Pingze Wei's voice. She was so excited yesterday, could it be that she was too excited to sleep last night and forgot the time today?

"Wei hasn't arrived yet, and I don't know where she's gone."

Ritsu Tainaka shook her head. It seemed that the three of them had been waiting here for a long time, as could be seen from the magazine that Mio Akiyama was holding, which had been flipped through quite a bit.

"Could they be lost?"

Kotobuki Tsumugi's two eyebrows, which resembled pickled radishes, were furrowed together. She wore a white sun hat with a red ribbon on her head and a pure white dress with a blue ribbon. She possessed a familiar Eastern charm.

"So you shouldn't come so early..."

Dongfang Bai's expression suddenly froze. He stared intently in one direction, and the other three followed his gaze, also becoming stunned.

Today, they saw a girl in a cream-colored coat and beige shirt, excitedly petting a stray dog ​​in the distance, her hands constantly kneading the dog's head and cheeks.

The girl had short, light brown hair with a hair clip in her hair and a slightly dazed expression. Everyone recognized her at a glance – wasn't she Hirasawa Yui?

……

"Sorry, sorry, I accidentally saw a little dog when I was passing by earlier, and I thought it was kind of cute, so..."

Hirasawa Yui scratched her head sheepishly, but the others didn't seem to mind, since only five minutes had passed since the actual meeting time, so Hirasawa Yui couldn't really be considered late.

"Is the money ready?"

Dongfang Bai asked with some concern, as their most important task on this trip was to buy a guitar, and it would be troublesome if Pingze Wei didn't raise enough money.

"No problem! I've already asked Mom for an advance of 50,000 yuan in pocket money!"

Hirasawa looked incredibly confident. She felt that the 50,000 yen in pocket money she had was enough to make her rich, and she even felt a different way of walking.

"Is everything alright...?"

Dongfang Bai's lips twitched. After all, 50,000 Neon Coins was a lot, but not a little. Generally speaking, a cheap guitar only costs 10,000 Neon Coins, but a better quality one costs around 100,000.

He felt that Yui Hirasawa should buy a good guitar; if it was expensive, she would cherish it more and even study harder.

Never mind, if any problems arise, I can lend her some money myself (Li Le Zhao).

Dongfang Bai arrived empty-handed today. The four girls at least brought a bag to carry their belongings, while he walked in with nothing in his hands, though he did bring his wallet and bank cards…

"Hmm! Next, I need to plan how to buy a guitar..."

Hirasawa Yui's tone gradually weakened, and her gaze became somewhat unfocused. Dongfang Bai followed her gaze to the side, where a shop selling takoyaki was located, with a sign that read 'Special Offer: 299 Japanese Yen per box'.

The advertisement headline was very eye-catching, and the aroma of grilled octopus wafted over from that direction. Dongfang Bai took a sniff, no wonder it attracted Hirasawa Yui.

"only……?"

Akiyama Mio uttered a questioning sound as she watched Hirasawa Ichiro leave the group step by step, as if possessed by something, looking extremely eerie.

Chapter Thirty-Seven: So Handsome Yet a Scumbag [Please Subscribe Automatically]

"Waaah! I'm so, so, so sorry, Shiro-chan!"

Hirasawa apologized to Dongfang Bai with a pained expression, but by the time she realized what was happening, she had already started eating takoyaki.

"It's alright, it's alright..."

Dongfang Bai didn't mind. Since Pingze Wei wanted to eat it, he would let her. Even if they really didn't have enough money to buy a guitar, he would help them borrow some. There was no need to worry for the time being.

"Well, since we're already out here, let's have some fun!"

Kotobuki Tsumugi chuckled as she spoke, and those words seemed to plunge Hirasawa Yui into despair. Her mind was instantly consumed by the word "play," and she completely forgot what a guitar was.

"Okay! Let's go have some fun first!"

"Oh!"

Tainaka Ritsu and Kotobuki Tsumugi sang in harmony, leaving Akiyama Mio sighing helplessly. She looked at Dongfang Bai and found that he felt the same way as her, and suddenly felt a sense of kinship.

Mio Akiyama and Haku Higashikata are the only two normal people among the group of weirdos in the Light Music Club...

"Ritsu-chan, Ritsu-chan! Look how cute this is!"

Hirasawa Yui was holding a black lace ruffled mini skirt in her hand, with a happy smile on her face.

"This... is too short...?"

Akiyama Mio was a little shy. She couldn't even imagine what it would be like to wear such a dress. She might die of embarrassment.

"It does feel a bit short."

Dongfang Bai looked at the short skirt, then at Pingze Wei's blank and silly expression, and felt that she was not very suitable for this kind of trendy clothing. She should be more suited to wearing cute styles.

"As for Mio, she would be quite suitable."

Dongfang Bai glanced at Qiushan Mio beside him. Judging from her appearance, he felt that her temperament was more suited to this kind of clothing, but unfortunately, her personality...

"Huh? Me!? No, no, no...!"

Without a word, Akiyama Mio refused outright. Her face flushed red as she shook her head frantically. If she had to wear such a miniskirt, she would rather wear trousers.

In fact, Akiyama Mio mostly wears trousers; she buys very few skirts, not because she dislikes them, but simply because she's too shy to wear them...