Primordial 'Dual Cultivator' Dragon With System

Since Volume 1 is over now so please share your thoughts with me. Especially about pace, MC and FMCs characters, and the development of the story.

As for volume 2, I planned to give a week's time skip, and for a whole week Ling Yun will not dual cultivate with anyone. He would only focus on raising his Yang Qi and also focus on practicing all of his techniques.

Anyway, volume two will focus on the conflict, the conflict between Ling Yun and his father's family, and some cultivators like in the old novel.

However, he would actually fight cultivators when he went to the Cultivator Realm later, because only a few could move around freely on Earth. (Vol3/4 later)

In addition, he will also meet enemies from demons and angels. Unlike cultivators, they can roam Earth freely.

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