Practicing Naruto

Na...

After finishing this book, I felt a little complicated for a while.

However, the world of Naruto has generally been told, and if it continues, it will repeat the same routine and lead to aesthetic fatigue.

I am still very satisfied with this ending, although there are still some things that have not been explained, such as what Orochi did after she got Naruto's piece.

There are also some other originally designed plots and the endings of various characters.

For example, the final destination of Hanabi and Rongxue, and whether Sister Terumi Mei is only Naruto's intimate lover...

Will Kurama turn into a demon fox girl and live happily with Naruto...

I will write a few extras about these, so please don’t delete the book in a hurry, and let it lie on your bookshelf for a while...

After finishing the book, of course, you need to review it. For example, if you wrote some bad things, the results of this book can only stop here without improving to a higher level. In this way, you can learn from the lessons for the next book.

Firstly, the setting of this book is actually too monotonous. Although I felt comfortable with Naruto's way of making friends at first and finally stopped feeling aggrieved, I ended up feeling a little tired of it later on.

Therefore, I directly compressed the plot of traveling out of Konoha and making friends.

Secondly, in describing the process of making friends between Sasuke and Naruto, the wording may be too ambiguous, causing many readers to think that this is a gay novel, and further misunderstanding the author himself... Alas, I...

Thirdly, in Chapter 45, Naruto makes friends with Hinata. This section makes many people unhappy. In fact, my idea is that Naruto is a native of Hokage after all. He is not a time traveler. He does not have a God's perspective. How could he know Hinata?

Will Tian become his wife in the future?

Therefore, many people cannot accept it.

But I didn't change this paragraph, because I feel that Naruto, who is not from a God's perspective, would be slapping himself in the face if he let Hinata go. This friendship making competition is just a joke and does not hold up. The character design is completely overturned.

There are other issues such as plot rhythm control and writing problems. Of course, there will be problems. After all, I am just a newbie who is still learning, and I can't compare with those great writers.

However, fortunately, you have tolerated me all the way and accompanied me until now, so this book fortunately did not die.

Thank you to Mr. Wen Siqi, my first ally since I wrote a book. Thank you very much. This boss read my book in the middle and turned on automatic subscription. Thank you very much. I hope I did not disappoint you.

Thank you for the thorough revision of my book. It is also my first helmsman. I thought before that it would be great if my book had a helmsman when it was finished. Unexpectedly, not only did I have to revise it, but I

Thank you very much to the completely changed helmsman and the ally of Mr. Wen Siqi.

Thanks to 4 Yang 36, my first deacon. Well, sorry to say, there are still two deacons, one is my fellow villager and the other is myself, so this cannot be counted. Thank you for your support.

Thank you Xiaozun for your monthly support, thank you to the eleven disciples of Motian Pavilion, thank you Wang Xingren for falling in love with Meow, and his life of despair, with such viciousness, he is the best, the most annoying full-time writer who does not update, the five of Zhaotian Gang

80,000, my junior and senior year, I feel sore and dry, but my classmate, Ziyan... Actually, I have many people to thank. I remember the IDs of many readers, but I didn’t type them out one by one. Please forgive me.

I still remember cynicism, qcqw, and I remember Sao Nian Yiyi, Qinglian Sword Master, and Heavenly Canglong from QQ Reading.

I still remember the first zzz devil who marked me as a disciple. When I put it on the shelves, he said that you can just update it. I have a monthly pass. Then, I have finished the book now, and I still haven’t seen a monthly pass from him.

Na na...

However, I am still very grateful to him. I couldn't make it to the end. It can only be said that it was a missed opportunity.

By the way, there is also Bi Lixin who said that I will be automatically subscribed to both accounts, although I don’t know what his other account is.

In short, I am very grateful for everyone's company. Some people have come from the new book period to the present, some people have come in the middle period, and some people may have left in the middle. Then thank you because you have supported me.

I’m almost done with my reflections. I’m not wasting everyone’s time. I’ll update the extra in two days because I’m preparing a new book. If it’s a new book, I’ll release it at the beginning of the month. As for the subject matter, I’ll keep it a secret for now. I’ll talk about it in this book at that time.

So, please don’t delete this book yet…

Finally, I hope that in the next book, we can walk together and see you in the memories...

Thank you and salute.

Eating barbecue late at night on the evening of October 31, 2020.