Hogwarts: Harry Returns From The Witcher

volume one is over

The expected rhythm, the first volume of the 100,000-word story, as some book friends mentioned, is faster.

Don't worry too, the story will not end too hastily, there are many things that can be written, the reason why the first volume is fast is because there are not many things that can be written.

After all, Harry was a mature witcher. His curiosity was still strong, but he was no longer that brat—since he was pitchforked, he became much more stable.

Many of the storylines in the first volume could not be developed.

Malfoy is a bit dull, but he will not provoke an impossible opponent. In the following article, there will be a wonderful performance by this oily boy.

Harry also ignored a young wizard's provocation.

You won’t be able to join the Quidditch team in the first grade. Don’t worry, Harry will definitely join the team, but I shouldn’t write too many plots in this regard, or basically mention it—after all, Harry is Harry , even though he grew up and matured, he was still Harry.

After finishing the long-winded words, let's review it carefully.

I was not very satisfied with the writing of the first volume. There was no major problem in the rhythm, and I finished it step by step, but in terms of some small rhythms, my grasp was a bit wrong.

In the chapter of Hogsmeade, there is almost no foreshadowing-although this is the pot that I changed the following.

The burst of orgasm is not refreshing enough.

The Forbidden Forest is a small climax, and the last room of the Sorcerer's Stone is a big climax, especially when Harry's sword is aimed at Dumbledore, it should be an emotional explosion.

Sorry, I didn't write it out.

It's too restrained, I have to think about it, design the rhythm of the second volume, and the emotional outburst.

I'm not very satisfied with the text either.

It's been a long time since I wrote an article, and I'm a little bit jerky, but I'm slowly recovering. I can still give myself a passing grade for the part about the potion test and the description of Snape's feelings.

In short, you have to make progress slowly.

Here I am thick-skinned, asking for a wave of recommendations, monthly tickets, follow-ups, and rewards.

At present, the results of this book are not bad, but human greed is infinite - if it can be better, then I will definitely be more happy, and then I will code with my heart.

By the way, let me talk about the rules of adding more.

before listing. For every 5,000 rewards, one chapter will be added, but because it is a new issue, even if there are more, only one extra chapter can be added a day.

This is only my first round of recommendations, and the number of words has almost caught up with the second round of recommended books.

If, I'm just saying if...

Fortunately, I can get more rewards. If a chapter is not updated before it goes on the shelf every day, it will be updated on the day it goes on the shelf.

basically…

On the day of release, there will be ten chapters more stable. As for how to add more chapters, let me see how my grades are at that time.

After it was put on the shelves, 10,000 words were steadily updated every day. As for how to add more words after it was put on the shelves, I had to see how my grades were at that time.

That's it!

I hope everyone will continue to support me!