Fox in the Penalty Area

Using these few days, I finally saved up nine chapters.

I originally planned to post a single chapter today to announce the update tomorrow.

But after thinking about it, I always feel that I can write it better.

The existing manuscript does indeed explain all the information that needs to be explained, but I am not very satisfied with the way the information is explained. The characters and stories are too flat.

This difference is just like me telling everyone that the character I am describing is a good person through several specific small incidents, and it is the same as me directly writing "he is a good person" in the article.

The latter is indeed unreliable. Five words include what I explained in 5,000 words.

But I personally think that this does not match the overall style of my book.

I want to avoid this as much as possible.

This requires careful design of plots and scenes.

After all, the time span has spanned four years, and there are too many things that have not been explained. If I go directly to the topic, everyone will just be confused - ah? What happened to that who?

ah? Who is this person?

ah? What happened in between?

ah? What did I miss?

…

But if I only wrote the key nodes in these four years in chronological order, the story would be too fragmented, too fragmented, and too jumpy.

Therefore, it is necessary to concentrate on a suitable time and explain this information one by one.

I don’t want to throw out all aspects of what happened in the past four years by throwing away the background settings. This is very easy and requires no brain work, but it is not beautiful enough - there are no characters, no story, and no pictures.

Unless absolutely necessary and there is really no other way, I try not to use this method.

All of the above tells me that I need to spend more time rewriting the beginning of the final volume.

In fact, I am very satisfied with the first four chapters of this volume. When I wrote it, I wanted to update it immediately for everyone to see. I spent a lot of time writing it.

But the latter part has to be overturned and started again...

I know everyone is anxious, but I am even more anxious than you are...

After all, breaking updates also has a great impact on performance.

But there is no other way. I said I would write this last volume carefully and leave a beautiful ending, and I will do it.

In fact, this situation of having to overturn and rewrite something that has already been written is very common in this book.

It's just that in the first half of the book, because there were still enough manuscripts saved, this overturn was completed before everyone could notice it.

If you don’t save the manuscript later, you will naturally have no choice but to discontinue updates...

This is also the reason why I always save manuscripts.

I am not the kind of writer with unique talents. I often deny myself. Writing a book requires repeated revisions and grinding back and forth.

This grinding process is very painful, and I often have to contend with my own laziness-sometimes I really think, "How about this, I have written everything that needs to be written, so I can make a contribution."

But in the end, I gritted my teeth and stamped my feet and decided to start over.

It was really painful to write this book, but I believe that when I finish writing it and come back to read this book in its entirety, all the pain and effort will be worth it.

I hope everyone can understand, and thank you for your tolerance and support.

Everything is to let you see a better story and a more real world.

So I don’t know the return date yet. Once I finish rewriting, I will definitely let everyone know as soon as possible by releasing a single chapter.