Crossover Anime: Not Joining the Service Club at the Start

Judging from the sound just now, Yuihama probably tucked Yukinoshita, who had just woken up, into her arms.

With this guess in mind, Hachiman looked inside with determination.

Then it immediately shrank back.

That's right.

Good news, he's awake.

Bad news, Yuihama might get a scolding later.

"Shall we wait here for a bit?"

"Aren't you awake?"

"You're awake." Hachiman explained the current situation and his guesses to him.

"Okay, that works." Cheng Shi agreed.

It's not a big problem, it's just a matter of standing for a little longer.

A few seconds passed

Finally, a girl's voice came from the Service Department.

"come in."

Upon hearing the notification, Hachiman immediately pulled Naruto into the room.

After taking his seat, Hachiman quietly took out his phone.

It's best not to speak at this time.

Since we don't know whether Yukinoshita is alive or not, we can just maintain the status quo.

As for who will break this...

"Boom-"

coming.

"Gentlemen, here comes the spicy kicker!"

After greeting everyone in a somewhat unorthodox tone, Cai Muzuo walked in.

"Then, please let me hear your thoughts."

Cai Muzuo plopped down in the middle chair opposite the group, arms crossed, looking confident.

Upon hearing this, Yukinoshita silently put down her cup.

"To be clear, I'm not actually very familiar with this type of thing."

"Yes, no problem. I'd like to hear the opinions of the common people, so please feel free to speak your mind!"

"it is good."

Yukino took a deep breath: "In short, this novel is extremely boring, and it can even be quite painful to read after a while."

At that moment, Yukinoshita recalled her comments from yesterday afternoon once again.

Reading this book might turn into torture!

As it turned out, that was exactly the case.

Upon hearing her words, Cheng Shi subconsciously thought of a word.

poisonous.

At this moment, Cheng Shi also immediately abandoned his original plan to take a look after his eyes recovered.

Incidentally, he also referred to Yukinoshita, who had read the book and given her evaluation, as "Shennong" (a legendary figure in Chinese mythology).

Meanwhile, Yukinoshita, whom they call Shennong, is still there continuously outputting.

"The grammar is a mess, the sentence inversions are nonsensical, don't you know that there are auxiliary words and auxiliary verbs that can be used in writing?"

"Didn't you learn that in elementary school?"

puff-

"I feel like I heard the sound of a sharp object piercing something. Is it just my imagination?"

Hachiman responded quietly after hearing this, "Maybe not."

“And another thing,” Yukinoshita continued, “your pronunciation is also incorrect.”

She pointed to a spot and said:

"It's incorrect to say 'ability' as 'chikara'."

"Also, why is the term 'Phantom Crimson Blade Flash' labeled as 'Nightmare'? Where does 'Nightmare' come from?"

"Um! That, that's just a recently popular grammar that highlights ability characteristics," Zaimokuza tried to explain.

However, Yukinoshita did not affirm this at all.

"That's just your self-indulgence. By the way, do you really intend for others to see what you're writing?"

"If this sentence hadn't been transcribed by you, I'm afraid I would have crossed it out as a mistake."

"Eek!" Zai Muzuo exaggeratedly clutched his chest: "But, but, wouldn't this make the plot seem cool and profound?"

"No, I just felt something was off and didn't make sense."

"And now, back to your plot," Yukinoshita pulled out another card and pointed to a spot: "Why is the female lead taking off her clothes here?"

"It feels completely unnecessary, and this is the only sentence in this section that has no mistakes, only errors."

"Pfft!" Timber felt like he was about to vomit blood.

He never expected this to happen.

"besides"

"There are still more?! Is that all the mistakes I made?!" Zaimokuza looked incredulous.

"Didn't you realize that when you heard what I said?" Yukinoshita said mercilessly.

The wooden base was choked.

Before he could speak, Yukinoshita recited another death warrant.

Chapter 56 Breaking Through Defenses and Rising Again

"In short, the problems with your writing are probably that the narrative sentences are too long, there are too many obscure words, and the article is not finished."

"Don't you know that showing someone an unfinished article is very uncomfortable?"

As these words fell beneath the snow.

The wooden base collapsed to the ground instantly, emitting a scream.

“Ugh!”

Seeing the woodwork stand's movements, Hachiman couldn't help but frown.

How annoying! And the movements are way too exaggerated!

Doesn't this guy know he'll be laughed at if others see him doing that?

In short, it's time to let him take a break.

Just as he was about to speak to Yukino, Chengshi suddenly pulled out his phone.

"Excuse me, did the earthquake just now shake something down and hit someone?"

Should I call for help?

Upon hearing this, Hachiman's expression immediately turned strange.

Wow, that's a double whammy!

"No, no need, that wasn't an earthquake."

"Really?" Cheng Shi asked hesitantly. "But the person who screamed just now hasn't screamed anymore, and there's no sound. Could it be..."

"Cough cough!"

At this moment, Yoshiteru Zaimoto had already gotten up from the ground.

Even someone as shameless as him felt too embarrassed to roll back down on the ground at this moment.

"Um, I'm really fine, so there's no need to call for help, thank you."

"Oh, okay." Cheng Shi nodded and silently put away his phone.

Phew, it finally stopped.

It seems that even the most immature person can become more normal under special circumstances.

Just like now.

Yes, Cheng Shi deliberately staged all of this for the others to see.

To be precise, it's for the timber pedestal.

Although he had watched a chuunibyou anime a long time ago, at least that character was good-looking!?