Fall in love after simulation
Fix the extra story
I originally felt that I had a lot to write about when I was a kid, and that was indeed the case. I wrote about 10,000 words in the foreplay part, but the problem arose - I couldn't contain it.
If written like this, this extra story would need more than 100,000 words to have a complete and interesting ending. This is already the number of words for one copy.
Moreover, this main line becomes the children's guide and target, which partially overlaps with the previous article.
In the last chapter, the setting of Yuki's time travel and Nao's and the others' time travel was thrown out, just to quickly pull the emotional line and save some words.
In the past three days, I continued to type more than 4,000 words, wrote and deleted, and revised the draft again and again, but I still felt that it was not working. If Yuki and Nao were written back to their childhood, the setting would be like asking for fish. It would be better to just write that Yuki turned Nao and the others into what they were when they were children in reality.
So the extras need to be modified. I will replace the original chapter. After the modification, a new (revised) mark will be added to the chapter name.
The new extra chapter returns to the orthodoxy, writing the plot after the main text, while taking a new approach. Like the ending, some surreal settings will be added to make it more interesting.
There are so many revisions to the text, and the number of revisions to the extra chapters must be unprecedented and unprecedented. (covering face)
I am so sorry!
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