Fairies Are Fierce

Take a day off.

In the afternoon, Aguan squatted on the balcony and smoked a pack of cigarettes. There was no sun or rain outside. The gloomy weather made the balcony hot like a steamer, and beads of sweat kept rolling down.

An aunt who was going to the park passed by in the alley. After walking out, she stepped back, looked up and said with concern:

"My dear, you are still young. If your wife runs away, I will introduce you to one. Don't be fooled by her beauty."

Aguan pinched off the cigarette butt in his hand and smiled:

"I don't have a wife yet."

"Oh... don't worry about it even if the target runs away..."

"I don't have a girlfriend either."

Aguan said it very naturally, but he didn't know why he couldn't laugh.

I originally wanted to explain that I was just imagining the plot, but when I looked up, I saw the sympathy in Auntie's eyes.

"If you can't find a partner, why don't you just go out and hang out more? If you hide here and smoke, the partner can run into your house on his own? These dolls now, ugh..."

Lopsided.

Aguan squatted on the balcony and shut himself up, smoking another half pack of cigarettes.

Finally, I looked back and saw the monitor that was on whenever I was awake. My mood, which was more boring than the weather, suddenly felt a little more comfortable.

After all, the brothers and sisters in front of the screen can definitely understand why Aguan squatted on the balcony and shut himself up on a hot day.

…

The above is purely made up (but Aguan really has no partner).

I took a day off. I was not satisfied with my recent writing. After thinking about it carefully, I realized that the problem lies in the 'emotional' aspect.

There is just no emotional resonance, and it cannot make readers feel happy, disappointed, excited, moved, etc.

It feels like writing a report. What the protagonist has gained, who he has met, is just writing one thing in detail. After reading it, he understands what happened. I have read it, and then it is gone.

This is definitely not going to work, so we need to make some adjustments and try to get back to the status quo in the next plot.

I hope everyone understands or2!

(end of this chapter)