Elf Archer of Life in Another World

Some readers said before that the writing was too sloppy, but later I focused on asking questions at the end of the chapter and got answers, so I will use this post to reply and explain myself.

1. The atmosphere of life is too strong, there are too few battles, and the battle plot ends too quickly.

This is a real problem, and I'm trying to intersperse it as much as possible. However, the focus of this novel is actually more on brainpower and pattern battles. Of course, there are arrangements for single-player and even team battles, but the protagonist fights with the people around him every year.

The fact that the force suppression is high is indeed an oversight on my part. It will not be easy to deal with in a short period of time. I hope to make some corrections after the follow-up war begins.

2. There are too many dialogues, too much psychology, and the plot is not clearly promoted.

Rather than writing a straightforward anecdote, I think the form of dialogue is more appropriate. For example, the first half of the chapter "Encounter in a Tavern" would become a long paragraph of nonsense if a passerby's tone was not used to add interest.

The narration will probably be more boring. In this way, details such as language, actions and other details can be appropriately used to express a story.

There are actually very few psychological descriptions, so I don’t know where this too much is meant, and I hope to point it out specifically; in my opinion, psychology and dialogue not only serve the plot, but also serve the characters and

The details and information interspersed in the dialogue may not be obvious, but there will never be too much nonsense.

3. I want to see what Nian Nian did, briefly explain how she felt after doing it, and then move on to the next plot. Don’t write about why she did what she did.

Regarding this issue, I'm afraid I can't modify it. Without causes and consequences, it will be difficult to reflect the logic of the plot, and the occurrence of certain patterns or events in the later period will not be rational. This virtual game world I created is a very small world.

The feedback of the butterfly effect is extremely obvious, so the character's behavior is very easy

It will have an impact. If the antecedents are not handled well, when the consequences appear, it may be too sudden. As for simply explaining the mood, it is even more impossible. I will not write a running account. The mood of the character can be reflected in the behavior, or it can be made

Readers themselves feel that as an author, I will not hastily label the characters in my novel.

4. These people always appear

There seem to be a lot of new characters appearing recently, and there will be more in the future. The protagonist is Nian Nian, and Nian Nian is always surrounded by these people. If you feel bored, then there is nothing I can do.

5. Artificial intelligence is too involved. It’s good to simply treat it as a game. The protagonist is data, which can be used as the protagonist’s halo.

I'm not simply writing a game, especially one where you complete tasks one by one and get rewards. I'm really writing about artificial intelligence. The protagonist is not data. Although she exists in different forms, she still has feelings, emotions, a past and a future.

Being an independent person is not her protagonist aura. Her "protagonist aura" actually lies more in her interpersonal relationships.

6. Skills cannot be used without some system origin.

It's not necessary, Nian Nian doesn't need this skill, and other characters don't have this possibility either.

7. A person like Nick can definitely write about his life and death, obtaining various skill books from various dangerous places, etc.

Nick will not do this. There is no part of his character that would push him to do this kind of thing. Even if he is overly protective of Nian Nian, Nian Nian will throw these things into the recycling bin with disdain.

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——Gossip

Authors are generally a bit stubborn, especially in the description of characters. Although I always carefully predetermine many details in an effort to make the story more twists and turns, unfortunately, the characters who appear in the story always ignore my advance preparation.

The plot acted without authorization and added many plots for no reason, just like Nick would definitely wait for Nian Nian to come home at night, and Nian Nian would definitely tell Nick his thoughts.