Doomsday Jigsaw Game

It's the end of the month again, let's summarize the practice. Let me talk about the update first, 200,000 words, 60,000 words less than last month, I am ashamed, people really feel uncomfortable for a few days in this month, and if I have been writing 8,000 words, I feel that the writing is bland.

There is still no guarantee that there will be more in February than in January, because there are more and fewer every day, and it still depends on the status. This is also the reason why I dare not ask for a reward, it is really still not moving.

The most important thing is that my body really can't bear it. Fortunately, in terms of anti-theft, everyone's support has reduced my pressure a lot. I don't have to stay up late, and I have regained half my life.

Then the plot, I thought it was a small problem when I read this book, but when I wrote it down, I found that I still missed a part, which led to a larger problem - the character design.

Bai Wu, Wu Jiu, Lin Wurou, Yin Shuang, and Liu Chengzi have stood up, including Yan Jiu, which is quite satisfactory, but the part of Shang Xiaoyi, Bai Xiaoyu and Qin Lin Wangshi is too thin.

Many book friends have mentioned this problem. I actually noticed it when I wrote 300,000 words, but why did I not correct it when I reached 800,000 words?

It is really that the later plots do not have room to develop them, and I want to finish some stories too much, so Wang Shishang Xiaoyi and Bai Xiaoyu, who I really wanted to portray seriously in the early days... have no chance to appear on the stage to write in detail.

In this regard, I feel quite sorry for the readers, for not presenting a good image of sentient beings. It is partial. Of course, the story is still long, and it can be corrected slowly later. These characters still have the opportunity to portray them through some methods other than the copy.

In short, I still have a lot to learn, and I will do my best to write a good follow-up.

Finally, I don’t leave bad reviews from some book friends. For one thing...you gave me any comments. In order not to affect other readers’ reading, I usually delete the bad reviews directly. But I don't accept readers' opinions, and I suggest private letters.

Secondly... I would also like to tell some book friends who like to point out the country. It is suggested that the title be promoted to an apprentice before teaching me how to do things, otherwise I am very realistic~

I wish you all the best of health and prosperity in February and the months to come.