Cannon Fodder is Not In the Service Area

Chapter 144 141: Achievement

"Eh? Is this a novel written by Xiaomeng?" Su Jiameng was in a state of mind-wandering, when Lucy's curious words came to her ear, making her turn her head to look at him, and saw a trace of inquiry on Lucy's face , "What type of novel?"

Fiction...Su Jiameng twitched her lips imperceptibly. She never thought that the "diary" she wrote could be considered a novel. Before Su Jiameng could deny it, Lucy said again, "It doesn't look like a novel, but rather the outline of a novel...Xiaomeng?"

Su Jiameng lowered her eyes slightly, and said softly, "It's not a novel, it's just a short joke written to pass the time when I'm idle."

"I see, that's really a pity..." Lu Xi put Su Jiameng's shoulders from behind, then stretched her neck to look at the virtual screen in front of her, "Although it is very simple, I always feel that if this story is written, Should be great!"

Su Jiameng secretly rolled her eyes and smiled wryly. If this story is really written, I guess I will become the most sick author in history, right? In this story, no matter how many roles there are, no matter how attractive it is, as long as it is a character who can show his face, he will always die in the end. Hehe...Even in the end, the protagonist in this story will die with hatred.

If such a novel is really written, it is estimated that there is a 99% certainty that readers will complain about "the most eunuch, the most failed, and the most dramatic" novel, right? Of course... these complaints have to be based on the fact that someone reads this story...

"I'm not interested, and I don't have the time." Su Jiameng's eyes fell on the text on the screen, and she said in a slightly vague tone, "After all, it's someone else's story. No matter how I write it myself, I can't write the other person's innermost feelings. practical thinker……"

"Xiaomeng's words are really puzzling...you are just a sixteen-year-old girl mother, don't put on a sixty-year-old face, okay?" Lucy tugged at Su Jiameng's cheek in dissatisfaction, and pulled her There were two blushes on the slightly thinned cheeks.

Su Jiameng was helpless, and Lucy muttered again, "Aren't novels all imaginary? Who can write about their own personal experience? But if you don't want to write, it's okay. After all, follow your own inner thoughts and make yourself happy." is the most important."

Is your happiness the most important thing? Su Jiameng heard Lucy's obvious favoritism, most of the depression in her heart dissipated, and she said with a smile, "Of course I know this... In fact, writing novels seems to be good, you can tell the stories in your mind, and you can also communicate with others." Many strangers of all kinds who don’t know each other share, and no one knows who the author is, and what happened in the past…”

"Hmm... Listening to Xiaomeng's words, you seem to have this intention to write?" Lucy opened her eyes wide in surprise, and then Mimi smiled, "If that's the case, Xiaomeng will let me read the manuscript of the novel. Look, as a bookworm with a book age of over ten years, maybe I can give you very good advice...Xiaomeng, do you think this is good?"

The corners of Su Jiameng's eyes seemed to twitch uncontrollably, can she say that she doesn't have any thoughts? but……

Think about it, in fact, it seems pretty good to write your own previous stories as novels? Su Jiameng thinks very far. Although the novel is very common, it has the charm and influence accumulated by the sun and the moon. If I mix some news about the Zerg race and the mind into it, maybe I can give it to those who accidentally read the novel. Someone ring a bell?

Even if it doesn't play this role, I can look at these words to comfort myself, at least use words to prove that my second life is real, not Zhuang Zhou Mengdie or Die Meng Zhuang Zhou? After thinking about it, she nodded and said, "I have this plan."

God knows that after Su Jiameng graduated from the first life, she never wrote a composition of more than 800 words. The second world often writes military reports, but the content and format have a certain track to follow, and it is not troublesome to write...Writing novels? Can anyone tell her how to write it?

While Su Jiameng was vaguely responding to Lucy's words, she was depressingly thinking about how to write a novel. For a waste of liberal arts who hasn't written a composition for a long time, writing a novel is so challenging! It's hard to do it yourself.

However, she is an open-minded person after all, and she didn't struggle with such a small problem for long, and soon she was relieved. In her opinion, writing a novel should be similar to telling a story, she just needs to write out what she thinks.

"Okay, that's it, I'm going to see the manuscript in advance!" Lucy took care of everything, and Su Jiameng didn't even have the strength to sigh. She only answered the other party's first question, why did Lucy "solve" all the follow-up questions?

It's also fortunate that Lucy was so excited about the fact that she didn't leave a single word... But since she decided to really set foot in a field she had never touched before, Su Jiameng would not do anything unprepared. It seems that in the future, she will One more task.

Time passed quickly, Su Jiameng settled down to sort out her second life, and listed all kinds of things that she knew or just heard about in a time table, just telling her own story, as long as they are in the To a certain extent, it is good to tell the truth, so there is no need to prepare the so-called outline and detailed outline...

Because it was a story about "myself", Su Jiameng decided to describe it in the first person. Although she has not read many novels, she also knows that novels written in the first person are not popular. Because it is easy to write self-good YY ╮(╯▽╰)╭

For example, in the first-person Gongdou Zhaidou drama, in order to show that she is beautiful, the heroine can fascinate all the men. Naturally, the description of appearance, eyes, movements, psychological changes and clothing is indispensable, but the writing is too beautiful. A slightly disgusting narcissism.

Not to mention this, the first-person still has a relatively fatal shortcoming, that is, it cannot accurately describe the psychology of others.

But in the writing of a novel, psychological activity is a very important factor. As the protagonist of the first-person perspective, how can he "have the ability to spy on other people's psychological activities" and write what others are thinking at this moment? Super easy to fine-tune...

Although the first-person narrative has various shortcomings, Su Jiameng decided to write novels just to vent and express her feelings and past. She doesn't have the consciousness to worry about what readers think. And because she was writing her own story, Su Jiameng always used the third person to describe other people's psychological activities with a little bit of precision, looking super twisted...

The beginning of the novel is naturally written from the beginning of time travel by "myself", the panic at the beginning, the fear later, and the gradual transition to the helpless acceptance of reality, confusion and panic about the future...

The first chapter is basically about the psychological changes of "myself", from the initial resistance to unfamiliar environments and characters, to the gradual acceptance at the end, and then at the end of the chapter through the dialogue of "parents", the figure of the Zerg and the background of this era are drawn out... …

"Tsk tsk tsk, Xiaomeng's typing is pretty fast..." Lucy teased her interestingly, besides rolling her eyes, Su Jiameng can also show amazing expressions? If her hand speed is not fast, how can she drive the mecha? This is a bit redundant, girl Lucy, "However, Xiaomeng really decided to write in the first person? As a reader, the proportion of abandoned articles will probably be very high..."

"That's good..." Su Jiameng said flatly, sorting out the first chapter a little bit, and then saving it, "If I choose the third person, I always feel something is wrong... I just need to follow my own wishes. "

"That's true!" Lucy slapped her left palm with her right fist, and said again, "But doesn't Xiaomeng feel that the first chapter is very procrastinating?"

"It's okay..." Su Jiameng thought about it carefully, the scene of her first time travel was vivid in her memory, and that was how she felt at that time. The parents thought their newborn daughter had a physical problem, so they sent her to the hospital for a long time, and the two took turns staying by her side...

In fact, Su Jiameng felt guilty at the time. She wasn't sure whether she had forgotten to drink Mengpo soup to forget her memory after being reincarnated, or if she invaded this body and killed her parents' own child...Because of this thought, she kept going. Some are trembling.

She couldn't imagine how this pair of parents who love their children to the bottom of their hearts would behave after their secret was exposed... In fact, it is very likely that they would get angry or even call her a monster, right? After all, their real children shouldn't have so many memories...

While living in fear, she longed for the care and love of her parents. This was something that Su Jiameng never enjoyed in her first life... This situation continued until her father died in battle. When he was gone, she wanted to regret it. It was too late.

Adults think that three-year-old children don't have too many memories and complex emotions, but Su Jiameng is not an ordinary child, she deeply remembers how her father died. He lost his father at the age of three, his mother at the age of six, and the only remaining grandparents at the age of nine also died one after another...

The death of her father taught Su Jiameng to truly understand this cruel and dangerous world. The death of her mother inspired her to fight for peace in her heart with both hands, to protect everything she wanted to protect, and to entrust her happiness and loved ones to others, like Waiting for the rescue of the alliance soldiers like a waste, it is really embarrassing, stupid and naive.

The death of her grandparents was probably the biggest blow to her, and it also made her completely fade away from the influence of the first life Su Jiameng, and made her deeply remember that she is only Su Jiameng, the descendant of the four alliance warriors in her family!

She grew up with blood. These contents are too bloody. There are Zerg, enemy, friend, family, and comrade-in-arms... Others are reborn from the ashes, but she and the survivors of that era are wading in blood all the way Come along, the price of growth is too great, no one can bear it, even if it collapses, you can only grit your teeth and persevere...

"This is the story I want to write, as long as I write what I think is enough..." So there is no need to change the original intention to cater to other people's tastes, just follow the heart. For Su Jiameng's insistence, Lucy couldn't say anything against it.

"Uh... so, what is the main line of Xiaomeng's novel? What is it about?"

"A hard-working heroine went through a series of hard things, and all the people around her died, and then she killed herself..."

Lucy: "..."

In fact, if Xiaomeng's story is really written, it will probably attract a lot of scolding... It's too bad...

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