A foreigner's journey

I didn’t dare to write the final remarks in the last volume, but I can finally do so this time.

In fact, I anticipated the criticism of the plot at the end of the previous volume before I wrote it.

But for the sake of the subsequent development and completeness of the plot, I would rather give up subscriptions and follow-up reading, sit back and be scolded, and I must write this plot out.

Because the protagonist is far from mature and perfect in my opinion, and he needs to really grow up.

People fall down in order to learn to stand up.

The actions of the Spiral Party are also in line with the thoughts that normal outsiders should have - when they find potential enemies, they immediately gather a strong team to kill them, instead of giving away their heads one after another to gain experience. In fact they did it perfectly.

Cosmo's only mistake was to accept Heather's provocation and enter the wrong battlefield.

Now think about it, if you get beaten in the last volume, you will get beaten back in the next volume. In fact, there is not much problem with the story of Heather getting beaten.

The real problem is that I updated it too slowly, which resulted in the plot of Heather being deflated being greatly extended, giving readers a poor reading experience.

After learning from the experience, we decided to update 20,000 words on New Year’s Eve.

When I finished coding the last chapter, I felt a sharp pain in my head. After all, 20,000 words was still too much for me.

Also, I saw some readers saying it was boring deus ex machina, for which I had to defend myself.

I mentioned the fact that glasses are limiters in a chapter in the One Piece volume. The Fire Source fragments were laid out in the Godslayer volume. The Xhosa Crystal and Mazinger Z were not written on the forehead at the last moment. , but has been digging holes from the beginning of the machine war volume.

In this case, I feel that the birth of the demon god ZERO cannot be regarded as a deus ex machina.

In short, the mecha war volume has ended successfully. I have to rest for a few days and do my own thing.

When the renovation is completed, Heather will enter a new chapter. Please support me.

Next volume - "Outlander and Superheroes".