Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 633 629. Comments on "The Lord's Army Conquers the World"

Today I would like to recommend to you a 680 million-word game novel that is currently being serialized.

"The Lord's Army Conquers the World", Shen Tianyi, level 4 author.

Category: Games-Games in Another World.

【Introduction】

One night, countless crystals fell from the sky, allowing people to enter a different world. In this different world, people can build their own cities and the era of lords begins.

Goblins, goblins, kobolds, elves, dwarves, trolls, angels, orcs, demons, minotaurs, dragons, murlocs, undead... Thousands of races stand side by side, fighting each other in an endless war. Today, one man, with his sword, traverses the vast expanse of space, sweeping the land with his blade, reigning supreme for eternity. [Commentary]

Just stumbled upon this book in a bestseller selection.

Out of curiosity, I clicked on it and took a look.

I found that this book is very suitable for novice authors to learn, especially novice authors who are interested in creating game-related online articles.

The strengths and weaknesses of this book are quite clear.

The upside is that the background, structure, level, and other settings are very complete. You can't find any faults, but you can't find any new features either. It has everything you need and is very complete.

The protagonist is a teenager who accidentally obtains a meteor crystal that falls from the sky and enters the apocalyptic world.

This is a farming game world, and the game world will eventually erode the real world.

In the game world, he possesses the blood of both the Tang and Qin dynasties, but chose the Qin. He became the heir of the Qin dynasty and established a novice village. He became a lord, leading Bai Qi, Li Si, and others to build the village and develop Chengdu City, defeating monsters, leveling up, and fighting for supremacy in the dynasty. This model should be familiar to anyone who has played this type of game.

Its shortcomings are also very obvious.

This book has obvious traces of being a novice author, with a poor sense of rhythm, simple sentences without any special embellishments or literary style, and confusing logic. These are all problems that novice authors often encounter, and they all exist in this book.

This book is very much like the growth process of a newcomer, so it is quite toxic in the early stages and many people will be discouraged in the early stages.

So why do I want to recommend such a book?
Firstly, it's quite long, at 680 million words, and it took four years to write. That's about 150 million words a year, so the update rate isn't fast, but it's relatively steady, giving it a sense of steady progress. Secondly, you can learn some tips for writing online articles from this book, including background setting, story development, and the author's mindset.

Attitude is really important.

When you find an interesting topic and decide to start writing, you must have very strong perseverance. No matter how the book performs, you must keep writing according to your original plan.

When the number of words reaches a certain level, even if your story is not particularly exciting, there will be a group of readers following you. This is very important.

I have seen too many short and quick-paced authors recently. It is time to introduce some hidden and ordinary authors and works to readers.

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

Generally speaking, when I use iFLYTEK Assistant on my mobile phone for voice input, the Golden Five Chapters basically do not appear.

Moreover, an enthusiastic reader once left a message in the book club, saying that he did not like reading the five golden chapters.

It made me feel calm and at peace with myself!
So, I decided to update the method and content as the occasion demands.

Everyone saw the outcome, it was tragic, right?

Everyone, please don’t learn this, okay?

Newbies, you must learn to update books quickly. It is best to finish two or three books with more than one million words in a year.

By then, you will know how it feels now!

(End of this chapter)