Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 602: 598. Comments on "Warring States Ten Thousand Enemies"

Today I would like to recommend to you a completed Warring States novel with 233 million words.

"Ten Thousand Enemies in the Warring States Period", Shark Zen Master, level 4 author.

Category: History-Alternative History.

【Introduction】

Story summary: The tough guy from Wu is here, who dares to fight to the death with me!
The conflicts among nations are too chaotic. Let's unify them.

【Golden Three Chapters】

Chapter 1: Savages. The protagonist, Li Jie, travels across time and space to a strange world, where he is rescued by a woman. This is a backward village by the sea, where life is like that of a savage. But the protagonist slowly adapts.

Chapter 2: For the House. The protagonist becomes the village chief and not only teaches the villagers how to read and write, but also how to build houses. In the minds of the villagers, this is like a god-like act.

Chapter 3: Showing Off Wealth. Officials at the top learn of Baisha Village's exploits and send an investigation. They're impressed by the protagonist's wealth-building experience and military prowess. This fully demonstrates that even in the most backward places, disparity persists. Envy is ubiquitous.

【Brief Comment】

This book has 3.76 collections on Qidian.com, 1953 collections in the bookstore, 7.78 fans, and 4 leader.

The author also wrote two historical novels, "Engineering Students in the Tang Dynasty" and "Three Hundred Years of Zhenguan", both of which are about the Tang Dynasty.

His best result was in the book Engineering Student, which directly helped him to become a Level 4 author.

But starting with the book I recommend today, my performance started to decline. Let's take a look at the reasons.

The story is quite interesting, and it's the style I like.

The protagonist Li Jie was originally a foreman in modern society. He traveled through time to the past because of an accidental death and became a savage outside the city of Gusu, that is, an indigenous person living on the beach.

He was rescued by a beautiful silkworm woman who raised silkworms very well. After all, it provided more labor and the family line could be continued.

The protagonist, a textile college graduate, is a foreman, yet a man of culture. His prestige quickly rises, especially among the illiterate natives, and he quickly becomes the chief of the tribe. He creates surnames, teaches writing, builds houses, and merges villages—all with primitive methods, yet they are accomplished with remarkable success. The writing is also exquisite, with apt quotations from classic texts. Although this is an alternate history, the details are not haphazardly written.

The protagonist has a relatively calm personality. As a time traveler, he must first learn to accept, quickly integrate into, and look for opportunities for development.

But because it starts from a remote indigenous tribe, the background introduction in the first few chapters is a bit too scientific, which requires a little patience.

After this part, the plot starts to get exciting.

Overall, the performance of this book is indeed not as good as the previous one, and the gap is huge, so the performance of the new book is even worse.

A big reason for this is the handling of the plot in the middle and late stages, which is commonly known as poor writing.

So, keep working hard!
【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

What I didn’t expect was that I didn’t spend much effort writing the five golden chapters of this book.

After writing more, you will find that the five golden chapters are laborious and often have no effect.

Once it was cancelled, the speed of writing became much faster.

I even want to take the plunge and participate in the monthly explosive power rankings.

I feel that as long as I write fast, readers will not be able to keep up with my pace.

After much consideration, I decided to write slowly and live a more comfortable and stress-free life, which would be more enjoyable.

So, you deserve to be poor!
(End of this chapter)