Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 476 472. Comments on "If I Become an Immortal with Magical Powers As High As Heaven"

Today I would like to recommend a novel about Journey to the West.

"If I Become an Immortal and Have Magical Powers As High As Heaven", a chili spirit, a level 4 author.

Category: Games-Games in Another World.

【Introduction】

Awakening in Taiwu.

You looked at the "Ming Ting Sutra" in your hand, started studying it, began practicing, and raised the "Ming Ting Sutra" to the state of 100% great perfection, and you opened your third eye.

You have elevated the Five Classics of the Spiritual Veins to great perfection, and your voice can be heard clearly from hundreds of meters away.

You practiced the Pulse Classic and began to shift the meridians.

You have elevated the "Sutra of Human Immortality" to great perfection, adding five hundred years to your lifespan!

You practiced swordsmanship and knife skills.

You looked at the "Book of Changes," "Baopuzi," "Xisuijing," "Ziwei Doushu," and "Qi Men Dun Jia" in your hands...

Cultivation?

When you look back suddenly, you have already become an immortal.

【Golden Five Chapters】

Chapter 1: Dragon Slaying. The protagonist, Li Hongru, is in class at Simen Hall when a friend passes him a note, telling him that Wei Zheng will slay a dragon at Wumen Gate at 3:30 PM. The protagonist, a time traveler, has a built-in system, but it's not very useful, so he can invent something. For example, he can use a telescope to see how to slay a dragon.

Chapter 2: Fairy Dust. The protagonist's friend, Rong Caijun, is from an aristocratic family, while the protagonist is from a humble background. Their friendship is pure fate. However, Rong Caijun's frequent passing of notes leads to a question from the teacher, which he manages to get past. The teacher dismisses the get out of class on time, and everyone wants to see the dragon slaying. The protagonists go home to get their binoculars, and with Rong Caijun's fairy dust, they're in for a treat.

Chapter 3: The Emperor's Sword, Zhenguan Period. The two protagonists found themselves a few hundred meters from the Meridian Gate. Using a telescope, they could barely make out the sight of the gate. The sword Lord Wei summoned turned out to be from the Emperor, its gleaming light causing pain in their eyes. After applying divine powder, they saw Lord Wei's spirit, holding the Emperor's Sword, soar into the sky and approach the white dragon.

Chapter 4: The temporarily opened Heavenly Eye. The two protagonists take turns using the telescope, their eyes still aching. However, they witness Lord Wei's spirit enlarge and sever the white dragon's enormous head. A red rain of blood descends upon the Meridian Gate, and the dragon's head is collected by guards with a red silk cloth. Someone attempts to intervene in the dragon's slaying, but ultimately is forced to take the dragon's corpse with them.

Chapter 5, "The Bright Court Sutra." After the dragon slaying, Rong Caijun becomes increasingly aware of the power of the protagonist's telescope, which allows ordinary mortals to witness extraordinary phenomena. The protagonist also frets over whether his temporarily opened third eye can only be activated with divine dust. He learns many secrets of spiritual practice from a friend and ultimately strikes a deal with him, trading the telescope for viewing the "Bright Court Sutra."

【Brief Comment】

A chili spirit, a level 4 author, has written two books, "Heroes of Might and Magic Grandmaster" and "If I Become an Immortal with Magical Powers Equal to Heaven".

The former, with 5.2 million words, took two years and four months to complete, with an average of 180,000 words updated each month, or 6,000 words updated each day. While "If I Cultivate Immortality, My Magical Powers Will Reach Heaven" was released on August 14th, with only 270 initial subscriptions. To date, in less than two months, 630,000 words of paid chapters have been updated.

An average of 300,000 words per month, with 10,000 words updated every day.

In my opinion, no matter how well written or plotted a book is, the sheer volume of updates is admirable. Especially given that the book's performance is not good, it can still steadily update 10,000 words every day.

The data of this book is not ideal, but the author is in a good mood at the moment and the plot is also stable.

This is essentially a Journey to the West fanfiction, except the protagonist has an extra game system. The system was very weak in the early stages, forcing the protagonist to live an ordinary life for over a decade, only able to invent little things to show off his extraordinary abilities and gain the opportunity to study.

An accidental sight of Lord Wei slaying a dragon caused a change in his system, and he began to embark on the path of cultivating immortals.

Personally, I feel that the writing style of this book is OK, but the early part is not exciting enough, the key points are not prominent enough, the characters are a bit vague, and the system features are not obvious.

In other words, the author has a certain level of writing skills and is able to update the book frequently, but his ability to create contradictions and interesting points is still lacking. Therefore, it is unlikely that this book will become popular for the time being.

Also, the title is quite interesting, reminding me of the Xingxiu Old Immortal. I checked and found that the title "If I Cultivate Immortality, My Magical Power Will Be Infinite" has been taken by someone else.

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

The titles of the books I’ve been recommending recently are all quite interesting.

this point is very important.

If even the title of the book is unremarkable, why would readers be interested in reading it?

The introduction is also very important.

This is also a cliché question. You can have different styles, but it is also important to be interesting.

Today's readers generally don't have much patience and won't give you too many opportunities to express your deep thoughts.

(End of this chapter)