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Chapter 434 430. Comments on "Girl, There's Something Wrong with You"

I accidentally discovered a book, but the title and introduction are so unconventional.

"Girl, There's Something Wrong with You", You Zhu, a level 4 author.

Category: Light Novel-Original Fantasy.

【Introduction】

【Easy Edition Introduction】

He came from a poor family, his parents had both passed away, and his beautiful fiancée broke off the engagement.

A standard template for the protagonist of a novice novel, so my golden finger is coming, right?
Unexpectedly, that night, the fiancée suddenly changed her mind:
I won't withdraw from this marriage!
And they have to live together and sleep together, and she has to pay for all the living expenses!

Okay, let’s live together. I won’t suffer any loss anyway.

After a night...

Hey, there's something wrong with this fiancée?

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【Serious version introduction】

Demons are rampant across the Chinese mainland, and humans have retreated to giant technological cities to survive. The world is in danger.

The northerners moved south with many disagreements; the aristocratic families and the imperial family were fighting endlessly; the common people could not bear the beatings; the refugee generals were watching covetously, waiting for the opportunity to rise up and tear apart this hard-won order.

To describe it in two words, the human world is a disaster.

Cheng Jinyang, a sickly young man who traveled here, set two small goals for himself:
1. Exercise and recover soon.

2. Become stronger!
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The author has already completed the masterpiece "The Blue Sword" with 210 million words, with a Happy Ending guaranteed. It is trustworthy and has no eunuchs, bad endings, or literary troubles!

Looking at these two versions of the introduction, you can tell at a glance that the relaxed version is more realistic, while the serious version is too dull.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter One, it starts off off a bit wrong. The protagonist, Cheng Jinyang, is a time traveler from a poor family, his parents orphaned, along with his childhood sweetheart from a neighborhood plagued by demons. He suffers from heart disease and nightmares every night. Fresh out of the hospital, he's confronted by his beautiful fiancée, Xing Yuanzhi, who breaks off the engagement. At this point, all the standard online novel protagonist features are complete, except for the gold finger.

Chapter 2: Don't despise a young man for being poor, unless... The protagonist's fiancée's tone when she broke off the engagement was incredibly familiar, leaving him furious and nearly shouting out the famous "break-off" line. Then, suddenly, the other party offered generous terms, prompting him to agree to break off the engagement. He suffered a relapse of his heart attack during class, and fainted in the classroom. A checkup by the school doctor revealed a significant increase in his blood concentration. While not yet at the level of awakening, it was still good news.

Chapter Three: An unexpected twist. Xing Yuanzhi discusses the compensation for breaking off the engagement with her father, only to fall asleep and sink into an abyss. The protagonist, expecting another night of battle with demons as usual, instead enters a dream in which Xing Yuanzhi slays a demon and comprehends its powers. He exits the dream, thankful to not have to endure the night's torment, when a knock on the door arrives, and he sees Xing Yuanzhi's eerie gaze through the cat's eye.

Chapter 4: Mutual Testing. Xing Yuanzhi wakes from a nightmare and scrubs herself in the bathroom. The events of her childhood, buried deep within her, she never expected them to resurface in a dream, and crucially, the protagonist witnessed everything. She goes to the protagonist's house alone, explaining that she was forced to break off the engagement, hoping for his understanding. She expresses regret, but he has already accepted the breakup.

Chapter 5, I won't cancel this marriage! Xing Yuanzhi revealed her regret for canceling the engagement in her words, and was even willing to pay the other party a little more money, but she only asked to live with the protagonist. She wanted to further confirm whether the protagonist had the ability to penetrate dreams. If it was true, the protagonist would be a treasure covered in dust. After hearing this, the protagonist did not drive the other party away immediately, but finally stated his own conditions. He needed the Cheng family's universal gravitation algorithm. Chapter 6, Azhi stayed tonight. Based on the concept of time and space, the protagonist inferred that the algorithms of the Cheng family and the Xing family should be deducible. Unexpectedly, Xing Yuanzhi agreed to get the Cheng family's basic algorithm directly to the protagonist. The price is that the protagonist will live with the other party in the future. Xing Yuanzhi has severe mysophobia. Not only did she send the protagonist to buy a sleeping bag at four in the middle of the night, she also accused the other party of not paying attention to hygiene at all.

Chapter 7, Azhi, the Clean-Loving One. Azhi realizes that the protagonist possesses a ninth-grade talent and is well worth recruiting, especially as he could be a future genius. To this end, she personally arranges the room. The protagonist visits the clinic and is confirmed to be significantly better. Time will tell.

Chapter 8: Don't Call Me Ah Zhi. The protagonist finally lives with the other person. Living with someone with mysophobia isn't always a good thing. The protagonist wonders if he made the wrong choice. However, the other person quickly gets him the Cheng family's universal gravitational algorithm.

Chapter 9: Shameless Senior Sima Yi. This world is a parallel universe; even "The Theory of Relativity" was written by Sima Yi, and the unit of measurement is horse. The protagonist tests his blood concentration again, and it remains very high. However, Ah Zhi reminds him that being ignored may be due to other reasons.

Chapter 10: The foundation of love is the desire to kill. The two of them enter a nightmare experience, where the protagonist's secret is discovered by someone who has experienced it, and they even try to take advantage of the opportunity to invite the other person. However, overnight, the two reach a conclusion, and the protagonist draws a pistol, prompting the other person to immediately surrender.

【Brief Comment】

You Zhu, a level 4 author, is the author of two works, "The Blue Sword" and "Girl, There's Something Wrong with You".

He started with an initial order of 280 and wrote "The Blue Sword" in just seven months, turning it into a masterpiece. He was so amazing.

"Girl, There's Something Wrong with You" currently has 1.66 collections on Qidian.com, 188 collections in the bookstore, 61 fans, and 5 alliance leaders.

My rationality tells me that the number of followers is a bit strange, but this chapter says that it is unusually active, which seems normal.

Especially Sister Lily, one of the three most toxic milk fans, has already recommended this book, so her popularity should have increased a lot.

So, let’s assume that the data is normal.

In terms of content, the book is quite different from ordinary people.

The setting is very unique. The awakening of superpowers is related to the focus, blood concentration, and brain computing power. Blood concentration is related to genetics, similar to the bloodline limit in Naruto. Each family has different bloodline power.

Brain algorithms, on the other hand, are related to mathematical rules and physical laws. For example, the Cheng family, the protagonist's family, uses gravity as its algorithm; the Xing family, with whom they are friends, uses mass effect, which is related to kinetic energy; the Wu family uses emotional manipulation; and the Zhou family uses memory reading.

This setting is quite different from typical immortal cultivation novels. It has a bit of anime-inspired flair, making it quite interesting. It's particularly well-suited for family alliances, cultivating the art of combining male and female attacks to achieve a greater-than-two effect.

The language characteristics are also very obvious. In addition to spoofs of classic online novels, online jokes and magical brain circuits are all good highlights.

The only drawback is that this is a new book and readers may find it too short and not satisfying.

But what I want to say is that you are lucky to be on the bus early. Paying attention to it early is much more interesting than watching those long monster-killing and leveling-up games, right? At the very least, keep it for a while~
【to sum up】

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