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Chapter 358 353. Comments on "Within a short distance, everyone is the enemy of the country"

Today I recommend to you the recently completed work "The First Sword of Starting Point".

"Everyone is an enemy within a short distance", Chengfeng Yujian, a great writer.

Category: Fantasy-Eastern Fantasy.

【Introduction】

"I'm not well-educated, so don't lie to me. 'Within a short distance, a whole nation is destroyed' clearly means that if I stand still within this short distance, I can single-handedly destroy an entire nation."

"But, as I recall, this sentence seems to mean that when two people are very close, even if the other person has a country behind him, it won't help."

"Fake." Baili Qingfeng raised his sword horizontally, and the electromagnetic field formed by the circulation of thunder energy burst out with a huge Ampere force, pushing the sword made of superconducting red divine steel in his hand to tear through the atmosphere at twenty times the speed of sound, shooting up an aircraft carrier three hundred kilometers away, and the flames from the explosion of the gunpowder depot rose and illuminated the sky.

"Look, I'm right here."

……

A world without cultivation, without super powers, without magic, but with a little bit of true energy, a world where warriors have culture.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter One: A Stranger. The protagonist, Baili Qingfeng, is immortal, even a nuclear bomb can't kill him. But this time, he feels his life threatened by a warrior. The protagonist is simply passing by, accidentally injured. But the warrior ignores him and destroys him. So, he decides to practice martial arts, because he begins to fear death.

Chapter 2, Thunder Beast. The protagonist arrives at his second grandfather's home in the countryside to practice martial arts. This unexpected event, after repeated confirmation, begins teaching the protagonist the Thunder Beast's practice of standing meditation. The protagonist then expresses his desire to practice swordsmanship, palm techniques, and breathing techniques. He has considerable talent and, if he persists, he should achieve great success.

Chapter 3, Thunder Master. The protagonist returns home. His father and sister are concerned about his martial arts training progress and passion, suggesting a career in music might be more promising. He researches online the two warriors he faced today and continues practicing the Thunder Master technique. While his progress is impressive, he only reaches the third level.

Chapter 4, War Level. The protagonist's father arrives at the place where he learned martial arts and has an unpleasant conversation with his second grandfather. The protagonist learns about the martial arts rank system and the destructive power of war-level warriors. The subsidy is only 2,000 yuan, and even a bus ride costs one yuan. Alas, has the monetary system collapsed?

Chapter 5, Sword Fighting. The second grandfather boasted to the younger generation that he had killed several war-level masters in the past, but was soon exposed. The protagonist followed his cousin to learn sword fighting, but he did not expect that he was so talented. He had fought more swords than his cousin and the others.

Chapter 6: Retirement after Success. The Second Grandfather sees that the protagonist has mastered his skills in just two days and is performing quite consistently. One day, the protagonist's sister comes to tell him that the song has sold. A song plagiarized by someone else actually has a market.

Chapter 7: Ordinary Baili Qingfeng. The protagonist visits the person who bought his song and is treated politely at the recording studio. He asks to use the studio to record a new song, "Ordinary Road." This is a parallel world, and the song has won the unanimous praise of the professional musicians there.

Chapter 8: Double Kill. The protagonist goes to find Jiang Ziheng, the second-level warrior who nearly killed him earlier. Before the fight, he thought he was very powerful, but after the fight, he discovered that he was quite formidable. He used his fists instead of swords, using the sword-thrusting technique to kill Jiang's subordinates, and then fought with absolute force, slightly outmaneuvering them.

Chapter 9: The Future. Back in his city, the people in the car are still discussing national affairs. A cousin, the second grandfather's most capable son, arrives and offers some pointers. The protagonist is also told by his father that martial arts are great, but music holds more promise.

Chapter 10, Bone Correction. The protagonist learns that his second grandfather has been discharged from the hospital and rushes to see him. He finds him preparing a medicinal bath, which is actually for him. Stimulated by the bath, the protagonist feels that his physical condition has greatly improved, making him even stronger.

【Brief Comment】

Chengfeng Yujian, a great writer, has written 11 works, almost all of which are about sword cultivation.

The official couldn't help but name him "the first swordsman at the starting point", affirming his continuous exploration in the field of sword cultivation.

He is a veteran and famous writer who debuted very early and still looks quite young.

I started reading it with the intention of learning, but my heart immediately started beating!
This book is a bit poisonous, or a bit naive.

The story takes place in a parallel world, and the protagonist is named Baili Qingfeng, who is very similar to Baili Dengfeng, the protagonist of a Chinese comic "Painting Jianghu: The Spirit Master".

The name of the protagonist of this book is quite difficult to adapt to, and I need to adjust my mindset.

The storyline is also a bit bland.

The protagonist practiced for a day and a half before he dared to confront his opponent and fought to the death, and even completed a double kill.

The martial arts of his family are not a unique inheritance, but its power is so terrifying.

The book's monetary system is also a bit frustrating. The protagonist needs one yuan to ride the bus, and six thousand yuan to buy a computer. His father's monthly salary is five or six hundred yuan, but he wrote a song and sold it for a thousand yuan. And the war-level warrior who boasted for a long time only receives a two thousand yuan subsidy.

The chaos of the monetary system is unacceptable to readers. It feels like a lot of bragging, but it is not even worth the money of a computer.

And the force value is also very confusing.

The protagonist practiced for a day and a half, stabbing the sword more than 100,000 times, comprehended the internal strength, fought hard against the enemy, and completed the kill.

He was so talented, so why was he so unknown in the beginning? He was like a homeboy, with a very weak sense of existence. He was even treated as a passerby and was almost killed instantly.

And what does the system, as the standard configuration for the protagonist, give?

The protagonist relies on the Internet to practice martial arts and write songs, especially the core training system of their Baili family, which was searched from the Internet, including the image of the thunder beast.

The early part of the book feels quite casual and the setting is not rigorous enough. The author is a well-known and great writer who has been deeply involved in the field of sword cultivation and has written tens of millions of words of novels. However, this book is very frustrating.

Writing a lot and writing for a long time does not mean that you write well.

Many platinum writers also face this problem. It is easy to fail when trying to innovate, and there is no progress when writing routines.

But the author of this book is still quite touching. At least he has good writing skills and has been persisting in writing!
【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
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Cang's Ramblings

I have been busy again in the past few days, with training every day. I am very tired at night and often can't even finish a chapter.

In addition, there are fewer and fewer good books, most of which I have recommended, which makes me feel like I’m out of books again.

But it’s not scary to be short of books. Let’s work together and recommend them!
Let’s get this done together.

As for today's book, Lao Bai readers please do it according to your ability. If you want to read it, just take a look.

The number one swordsman at the starting point, it’s better to hear about him than to see him in person!
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