Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 172 171. Comments on "The Immortals of the Heavens"

Today I would like to recommend to you a new work of the Infinite Universe genre.

"The Immortals in the Universe", author: Canghai Chengchen, level 2 author.

Category: Science Fiction - Time Travel.

【Introduction】

Coming to a strange reincarnation world, facing a pawn shop that is trying to steal money and kill people, Luo Feng is furious. I am a dignified time traveler!
How can I let you scum from the old times bully me!

What, maybe there's a gun?! Slip away, slip away.

Wait until I reach the twelfth level of breathing technique, achieve the acquired great perfection, and become indestructible, then I will come back for revenge!
What?! This world has extraordinary people who are born with special abilities and can also learn new skills. How terrifying!

Run away, run away, wait until I reach the 100th level of breathing technique before I emerge again. If I can't beat you, can I not outlast you?!
What? In 1937, the Japanese invaded the Central Plains...

Slip...slip your ass!
Where's Laozi's golden statue? Where's the Five Thunder Brick? Where's the Ruyi Vajra Staff?
I'll pull them all up!
One person, demon child, fox demon, immortal rebellion, heaven-shaking, emperor tyrant, journey to the west, mysterious, Xiling, Nuwa...

Travel through the heavens and the endless sea to become an immortal!
【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter 1, Shock! The Lord God Space is actually... The protagonist appears in the Lord God Space, only to find a group of bigwigs sitting there, protagonists from various worlds. The Lord God suddenly realizes that something is wrong. These people are not something he can control.

Chapter 2: The most miserable God in history. The God was quickly annihilated by the two great men, leaving only a few small scraps as a small benefit for the others. The protagonist, Luo Feng, survived, or rather, was successfully reborn.

Chapter 3: Follow your heart, slip away, slip away. Luo Feng and Zheng Zha are both reborn, rescued by an old farmer. His identity is unclear. Luo Feng and his companions go to a pawn shop to exchange some money, but are followed by someone sent by the pawn shop. The world is unstable.

Chapter 4: The Correct Way to Open the Dao of Talismans. Luo Feng took Zheng Zha to see a doctor and had a heart-to-heart talk, and they had no choice but to continue walking side by side. Fortunately, the old farmer who saved them was willing to guarantee their household registration in the village. The two of them were also busy, each with their own specialties, and their skills seemed to complement each other.

Chapter 5, Seventh Breathing Technique Revised to Version 2.3. The two diligently practiced, achieving some success. However, remembering what happened at the pawnshop, they still didn't dare to openly seek revenge. They opted to sneak in at night.

Chapter 6: A year later. That night, the two men discovered the pawnshop's mafia, but they didn't resolutely take action to eliminate it. They lay low for another year, their skills further refined. Their dream of becoming an immortal took another step forward.

Chapter 7: The Age of Mischief. The two men, returning home from their training, encounter the village chief and Yuan Yuan. This is a tragic story. The two men claim Yuan Yuan as their own, and remembering their gangster encounter from a year ago, they finally prepare to take action.

Chapter 8: Level 3 Armor and Level 3 Bag. The two decided to destroy the Black Dragon Gang. Although it was a small dungeon, they still needed to be thoroughly prepared. Level 3 Armor and Level 3 Bag, taking all the dangers into consideration. Eliminate all evil!

Chapter 9: The terrifying Black Dragon Gang. The two devised a series of 49 battle plans, only to successfully infiltrate the enemy's base using only three. Their complete lack of awareness made the infiltration process a bit easier.

Chapter 10: A thousand years of darkness, illuminated by a single light. Luo Feng first uses a nerdy trick—a false voice—to trick the door open, then dispatch the enemy before they can fire. A series of interrogations reveals the forces behind the scenes. To apprehend them all, they use their gang leader to lure all the bad guys in and eliminate them one by one!

【Brief Comment】

You have seen the introduction. I did not deliberately increase the word count, but to show you how to write an interesting and long introduction.

This introduction is really long, 258 words.

But it also makes the tone of the book's story clear.

What attracted me to this book was not the all-heaven flow, the infinite flow, the invincible flow, or the steady flow. After all, what kind of books has I not read?
The biggest highlight of this book that attracted me was actually the first chapter.

In the main god's space, the main god recruited reincarnations, but for some unknown reason, he recruited 37 of them at once, 35 of whom were the protagonists of major well-known Zhutian novels.

You can compare carefully and see how many you recognize?

According to the Lord God's inner monologue, if one big boss attacks him, he can still have a 50-50 chance of success; if two big bosses attack him, he may be able to escape; if dozens of big bosses attack him, he will be killed without leaving any trace.

So, the Lord God was destroyed, the Lord God Space exploded, and the big guys just walked away with a smile.

The poor protagonist Luo Feng and another lucky person Zheng Zha survived by chance and traveled to a small village during the chaotic period of warlords in the Republic of China.

Then, they hid themselves. In the early part of the book, the protagonist's character was deeply influenced by his senior brother's steadiness.

One knows how to use talismans, the other knows how to practice!

But they were not reckless at all. Even when bullied by the Black Dragon Gang, they continued to hide. After a year of painstaking training, they finally achieved some success. Finally, due to a tragic opportunity, they attacked the Black Dragon Gang. With the help of the gang leader, they destroyed the Black Dragon Gang, but this only brought the retaliation of Marshal Ma. Wave after wave of battle, wave after wave of tragedy.

Due to some strange mistake, the protagonist was separated from his friend, and his friend may have died.

The protagonist continues to wander in various worlds, fighting against magicians, fighting against the Jiejiao and the Chenjiao, fighting against the sky, the earth and the air!
In addition, the early part of this book is extremely amazing, but the plot later on is a bit hasty, and the transition to the world of Mantian is a bit hasty.

The key point is that this book is only 18 words long. I don’t know how I’ll continue to write. If I don’t control my speed, I might finish it in just one month. That would be a shame.

Moreover, the author of this book has a very sophisticated style and jokes, and he is probably not a cute newbie author. So, you must control yourself~
【to sum up】

This book is very exciting and is definitely worth a look!
Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

I just read the latest chapter of this book, and the chapter title is quite bold.

At least much braver than me!

This type of authors are full of talent but have nowhere to put it, so they need an outlet to release their emotions.

I just didn’t expect that in the Western world, there is a package price for Bodhisattva status.

The Mingwang Buddha set meal that the protagonist finally ordered was quite cost-effective.

This book finally reaches the end of the Three Realms. It has its own views on the explanation of Buddhism and Taoism, most of which are of course spoofs.

The writing style from beginning to end is relatively uniform, and the rhythm is still relatively fast.

Generally speaking, if you write to this level, the story will be at least one million words long.

Judging from the development of this book, it may be completed in less than one million.

I don’t know if I’m not good at using a lot of words, or I just don’t like using a lot of words, but this book shouldn’t be too long.

The author's books are not long.

This is very un-online!
Today a friend also said that many books do not need to be written with more than 10 million words.

I agree with this, and even say that for works with more than five million words, 70% of them are just padding.

So, I hope my short stories will only reach 499 million words!
As a person, you can’t be too superficial!
Even in the free era.

(End of this chapter)