Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 164: 163. Comments on "Our Ancestors Are in Heaven"

Today I would like to recommend to you a work that is still being widely promoted.

"Our Ancestors Are in Heaven", author: Desktop Computer, Level 3 author.

Category: Fantasy-Eastern Fantasy.

【Introduction】

I am a body cultivator, specializing in the cultivation of the physical body.
I once dominated an era and established a family of supreme glory.

The saying "one force can break all laws" is actually referring to me!
After I passed away, my body survived for thousands of years, but was later pulled out of my coffin by a group of unfilial descendants, who used it to ward off disasters and destroy enemies...

"Old Ancestor, the Red Whale Gang is coming to kill us, and the elders can't stop them. Please lend me your body!"

"Forgive me, ancestor. The Tianjian Sect is coming again. The clan leader has been beaten to the point of vomiting blood. I have to borrow your body to hold them off!"

until one day……

"It's too troublesome to dig up and bury our ancestors' remains every time. How about we sacrifice and refine them into combat puppets for our clan?"

"For the sake of our family, I believe our ancestors will forgive us..."

"I can't forgive!"

These unfilial descendants deserve to be beaten!
this day.

I was so angry that I came back to life and opened the coffin lid...

This is a positive energy story about an old physical practitioner who died thousands of years ago and made great contributions to human cultivation civilization. He was so angry at a group of unfilial descendants that he opened his coffin and came back to life. He continues to shine and make contributions and educates his descendants to respect the elderly and love the young and work hard for human and cosmic peace.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter One: Digging Up an Ancestor. The family is attacked by enemies, so they dig up their ancestor's body and throw it into the enemy's midst, allowing them to attack. The ancestor's protective energy instantly kills the enemy. These descendants then plot to transform the ancestor into a puppet, perpetually fighting.

Chapter 2: Resurrection. The "Ancestor System" scans and passes review, and the protagonist, Liu Fan, is successfully resurrected. His previous life was incredibly famous, but his descendants' reckless behavior in later generations truly doesn't deserve protection.

Chapter 3: Ancestor's Wrath. A system scan reveals that the descendants present, despite their ill intentions, will still grant the protagonist a significant amount of filial piety. If the protagonist discovers someone taking advantage of the situation, they will be apprehended immediately.

Chapter 4: Between people, sincerity is the most important thing. A descendant, cursed by the protagonist, publicly mocks the other elders, reveals his hidden identity, and even curses his own master. Death is nigh!

Chapter 5: The High-spirited Curse. The family was truly destitute, with nothing of substance left. After dark, someone sneaked into the mourning hall and stole the offerings, only to be caught red-handed.

Chapter 6: The smell of salted fish, so fragrant. Someone is devastated and wants to take a backdoor, so the protagonist casts a positive spell to slightly divert their dejected mood.

Chapter 7: The tribe's qualifications follow a normal distribution. The protagonist uses the system to determine the distribution of the tribe's qualifications, similar to the normal distribution or sum sorting in mathematics. Someone also constantly steals other people's stories, pretending to be a pitiful person, and everyone ends up hungry.

Chapter 8: Grandmaster, you are truly powerful. Someone has discovered a mysterious technique behind the protagonist, and they're rushing to learn it. Although they haven't mastered it yet, they can already feel the effects.

Chapter 9: A Fierce Wind Sea, a Flying Boat from the Sky. The elders restored the protagonist's body to its normal position and placed their hopes on the author—you. If it weren't for the protagonist's powerful abilities, he would have been thrown out long ago.

Chapter 10: To refine the ancestors into combat puppets. These people still refused to give up and kept discussing with each other whether they could get what they wanted from their ancestors. And there was a person named Liu Dongdong who kept crying, but it turned out that he was just repenting.

【Brief Comment】

The introduction of this book is very long, at least five hundred words.

The pace of this book is a bit slow, even a bit watery.

From the first ten chapters, you can see that there is no clear career line and it looks very messy.

The protagonist of this book is even more tragic.

He also traveled through time and space and became the ancestor of a small family. Experts vied with each other to make predictions, hoping to dig out some useful skills and techniques from the protagonist.

The world is on the verge of collapse, and the consequences are mainly felt in human beings.

No matter how small a family is, there will be powerful rivals and insurmountable peaks.

They tried many ways, including burying the protagonist and making him into a puppet, but none of them worked.

They also tried to read the words on the protagonist's back. From all indications, it can be seen that these people's fates did not intersect much with the protagonist's.

Their life or death will not affect the protagonist's mood.

It’s not that the protagonist is too old and devilish or too hot-blooded.

Because we will encounter more dangerous things soon tomorrow. Thank you, Master of the Top Tower.

The writing style of this book is not very good, the logic is a bit confusing, and the plot is too busy, as if we have just started.

I believe many people can see these shortcomings, but why was it selected as a major recommendation by Qidian?
First, it may be related to classification.

There are too few good fantasy novels nowadays, including the invincible flow, the mortal flow, and the single-player flow.

But the opening ancestor flow is so similar to "Sword of Dawn". But the quality is very different.

The ancestor of this book has been imprisoned until now, and there is still no reasonable reason to release him.

Despite this, there are still many things to watch at the beginning, so it is not a coincidence that it is on the top of the list.
Secondly, it may be related to the story.

It borrows from "Sword of Dawn" and is a bit bold, but the story doesn't seem to be expanded much.

The protagonist lay motionless in the ancestral temple, without even a dream world, and could only have boring conversations with the system.

In the later stages of the book, various plot holes are being filled and dug.

These have nothing to do with this book, which is just for fun.

Again, the process of this book becoming a masterpiece is very inspiring.

It was launched on January 1st, and the first order was only 390.
In just two months, he managed to turn it into a masterpiece.

It's so horrible. If it were someone else, they would probably have cut it off.

So, we have to support it no matter what.

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

My mental state is not very good, and what I write is not very nutritious.

Just like some brainless amateur writing.

The online literature market is like this: people read all kinds of books, and all kinds of books can become popular.

Those who can be recommended by the big list have achieved this honor only after going through various tests.

So the quality of the book is not a big problem.

The problem is just the style.

There are too few good fantasy novels.

After evaluation, this book can only be browsed casually and cannot be read in depth.

Otherwise, you will be the ones who suffer.

It’s another rainy day today, and I’m still in a bad mood.

I need a black orange to perk me up.

(End of this chapter)