Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 141 140. Comments on "Myth Screenwriter"

POV, the point-of-view writing technique, allows one to freely choose the richest angle when narrating the same thing, which greatly enhances the flexibility of the narrative. While telling the story, the author can adjust the order of each POV at any time, which greatly facilitates the later revision of the full text, the addition or deletion of the plot.

There are thousands of online novels, but only Three Days and Two Sleeps can master POV.

He has also accumulated many years of writing experience to achieve his current results.

If he hadn't been idle and messing around, he would have been able to write more exciting stories in this field.

The book I’m introducing to you today also attempts to write in this area.

"Myth Screenwriter", author: Please shut up the moon, level 1 author.

Category: Science Fiction - Evolution and Mutation.

【Introduction】

#The mastermind behind the scenes.

As a screenwriter, Wei Yuan originally just wanted to write a good story, but accidentally started the era of mythology.

In the East, Taoism and Buddhism are fighting each other, all things are reappearing, and the greatest emperor of all time awakens from his tomb.

On the streets of Tokyo, the wind howled, evil spirits crawled out of hell, and hundreds of demons paraded at night.

Beneath the Tower of England, ravens shrouded in darkness flapped their wings and flew, while ghost riders patrolled in the dark night.

In the west of the world, the gods awakened from ancient times, and the hero king, armed with oracles, conquered the world.

In the Middle East desert, the pharaoh pushed open the thousand-year-old coffin, and the sphinx roared to the sky.

【Golden Five Chapters】

Chapter One, the story begins. In a parallel world, the protagonist, Wei Yuan, packs his gear and heads to Zhongshan. After a year of preparation, he begins writing the script. A system appears, but its brilliance is limited, forcing him to confine the spiritual energy that all creatures can absorb for evolution and cultivation to Zhongshan. His pen falls, stirring the storm, and a vision arises.

Chapter 2: The Sage Appears. At the observation deck of Taiyi Peak, numerous tourists witnessed a bull emerge from the void. Laozi appeared, chanting the Tao Te Ching. He rode the bull westward, and a purple aura descended from the east. Wei Yuan, cloaked in the shadows, titled the play "The Sage Appears." Perhaps by accident, Laozi seemed to glance at him.

Chapter Three: The Great Era Begins. Zhongshan's spiritual energy has revived, allowing everyone to cultivate. Wei Yuan can clearly sense his own strength improving. He previously saw a news story where, using a script, he discovered the reason for a girl's suicide. Here, he will create a script to bring the girl back to life.

Chapter 4: The Wind Rises on Zhongshan Mountain. The resurgence of Zhongshan's spiritual energy allows souls to condense into bodies and regain their pre-mortal consciousness. Revenge is needed, vengeance is needed. He seeks to awaken the world. The wronged souls seek revenge with a clear purpose, yet they do not harm the innocent.

Chapter 5: Public Security Bureau. A wronged spirit claims Zhang Yu's life, and his parents rush to the Public Security Bureau. The divine apparition on Zhongshan Mountain during the day had already given the Public Security Bureau a headache, and now this wronged spirit has claimed his life.

【Brief Comment】

First of all, it is certain that the author of this book is a veteran and this is a new book from a new account.

It doesn’t matter who the big one is!
The book was released on February 28th and is available on shelves today.

It currently has 3.7 collections and is being strongly promoted on the homepage.

After reading the latest chapter of this chapter, I found that the number of people interacting has dropped sharply.

Therefore, the first-order situation is not optimistic, and it is not easy to reach 2000.

Secondly, let’s talk about the plot.

This book can be read as a collection of short stories.

Because of the POV writing style, the protagonist acts as the mastermind and presents the myths and legends of this parallel world through stories one after another.

The characters aren't closely connected.

Various bizarre and mysterious events are complicated and intricate.

The protagonist uses the system to write stories, including the appearance of the Zhongshan Sage, the revival of spiritual energy, the revenge of evil spirits, Tokyo legends, Mayan civilization, European mythology, and so on.

Under his pen, they appear one after another.

The Public Security Bureau is responsible for handling related matters, but is mostly powerless.

What the protagonist's purpose is in doing this is currently unknown.

In addition, the story moves to Europe, which slightly weakens the sense of immersion and makes it less attractive.

The author stated that the story will be transferred back to China after it is released.

But he has already written most of the major background stories that can be used as material, so it would be difficult for him to write a more exciting plot.

Again, let’s talk about the characters.

The protagonist, Wei Yuan, known as "Ma Liang the Magic Brush," constructs these stories with just a pen and a notebook. He himself moves directly behind the scenes and rarely appears, making his character image unclear.

The setting of playing the role of the mastermind and creator can easily make readers feel lost.

The stories he made up were also too concise, with many details not fully presented, which also dampened readers' enthusiasm for reading.

This is also a major drawback of POV writing.

The protagonist of several of Sanzha's novels, although hidden behind the story, still shows his personal charm through powerful logical reasoning at critical moments.

This book falls somewhat short in this regard.

However, the writing style of this book is still worthy of encouragement.

Without some writing skills and cultural background, it is really impossible to do it.

So, this book is on the shelves today. Friends who are interested can subscribe to it and see if the plot can be reversed.

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment!

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”!
Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

This book will be on sale on April 17, and the first order data is expected to be available at noon on the 18th.

My prediction is that the first orders will be 2000, and the author's own target is 1600.

New authors will not have such a clear understanding of first orders.

The quality of the book is really good, with tight details and a brisk pace.

The author's desire to survive is evident on the page. The first three sentences of the first chapter set the stage for the book.

The author's remarks in the first ten chapters shout out slogans very loudly.

However, these were not saved and several chapters were ruthlessly blocked.

The author said that the beginning was inspired by "Making Myths", and I also went to find some and read it, it was very intense.

No wonder it has been completely blocked.

This shows that novels of this type still involve high risks.

Therefore, the author set the story in a parallel world and concealed various key names.

But there are still many places that are a little intense.

These plots are certainly a good reading experience for readers.

But it is not a good thing for the author.

So, if the author can see this article of mine, please pay more attention to it.

There are some plots that you can avoid if you can, it’s okay.

There are so many things to write about in this vast world, there is no need to make your book always high-risk.

Having written this, I still envy these authors with wild imaginations who can always write some outstanding stories.

Finally, I hope that more people can see and like this book.

Especially that gentleman is so kind and has recommended it six times.

If this were placed in other categories, it would at least be pushed to the homepage.

The collection will exceed 20,000 at least.

but it does not matter.

The performance of a book cannot be judged by the data at a certain stage.

Chapter 139 is an obvious counterexample.

I hope "Cang's Whispers" can become the unique Xiumei on Qidian!
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