Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 1367 1365. Comments on "My Past Life Comes True, My Past Life Was Dug Out"

Hello everyone, I am Cang Yiwei.

Today I would like to recommend a new book to you.

"My Past Life Comes True, My Past Life Was Dug Out", Riding a Cow North, Level 3 author, currently serializing with 9 words.

Category: Xianxia-Fantasy cultivation of immortality.

Summary:
Li Daochen came to a new world with a piece of time fragment.

He can create clones, enter fragments of time, and travel back to the past.

A thousand years ago, he debated swordplay with Yan Chixia and was revered as the world's number one swordsman.

Two thousand years ago, he once watched the sword immortals flying all over the sky, defeated the blood demon, collected the corpses of the sword immortals, and guarded the golden wheels of the sun and moon.

Six thousand years ago, he practiced in Jinshan Temple, sat in Leifeng Pagoda, and witnessed Fahai's death.

Ten thousand years ago, he made a pact with the Dragon Girl on the shores of the East China Sea and has not been seen since.

20,000 years ago: He sent a monk on a journey westward to witness his meritorious deeds and his attainment of Buddhahood.

Thirty-five thousand years ago, he and the stone monkey studied martial arts in Fangcun Mountain and witnessed the birth of the Monkey King.

Fifty thousand years ago, he saw a Taoist dancing with a sword and taught him the sword techniques. Later, the Taoist was honored as Lu Zu.

One hundred thousand years ago, he and a child fought a real dragon in the East China Sea. The child ascended to the fairyland and became one of the immortals.

……

A million years ago, a Taoist came riding on an ox, his purple aura spreading for three thousand miles. "Old Taoist Li Er, I have come specially to discuss the Dao with you, my fellow Taoists."

Millions of years ago...

Li Daochen originally thought that he could safely wander on the edge of the times and seek eternity.

Until one day, a news report came out: "A tomb of Yan Chixia was unearthed in Daling Mountain. According to investigation and evidence, Yan Chixia was the second-best swordsman in the world a thousand years ago." Li Daochen: "???"

What are you teasing me?

【Brief Comment】

He also has another book under his name, "The Taoist Ancestor of Immortality: Starting from Cultivating the Willow God", which has 126 million words and is completed, but not a masterpiece.

This is a novel with a theme similar to The Sims. The difference is that every time the protagonist experiences life with the help of the system, he can bring it back to the real world, or directly come to a fictional era where technology and cultivation coexist. For example, in a story about Yan Chixia, he can watch Yan Chixia catching monsters in Lanruo Temple through live video. This is really a bit fantasy, similar to a low-profile version of "The Other Side of Deep Space" and "Emperor Overlord". You can try to figure out what the situation is.

Overall, I feel that the imagination is not particularly novel, the story line is weak, and it feels a bit like a diary. It is quite difficult to immerse yourself in the story. In other words, the plot is not developed enough and the characters do not leave a particularly deep impression on people.

I think the details can be polished a bit, but the basic creative idea is still pretty good.

The pace of the story is a bit too fast, it goes by like flipping the pages of a calendar, which is a pity.

Works that make the top rankings are particularly difficult to imitate, as they often fail to capture their essence. Without a sense of immersion, it's difficult to keep readers coming back. Often, authors have excellent ideas, or even good intentions when learning from external sites, but they fail to grasp the essence. In particular, readers at certain sites aren't particularly enthusiastic about typical fantasy writing, finding it too superficial and contrived, and therefore unacceptable.

Personally, I can only say that this book is okay and worth a look.

If you are short of books, please pick them up yourself.

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment.

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”.

Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

Starting today, it’s another week of duty. I’m tired and will be spending the New Year alone.

(End of this chapter)