Cang's Ramblings

Chapter 1162 1159. Comments on "What Should I Do If My Girlfriend Ignores Me After She Becomes Famous"

Hello everyone, I am Cang Yiwei.

Today I would like to recommend a new book to you.

"What should I do if my girlfriend becomes famous and ignores me", Yuanle, level 4 author.

Category: Urban-Entertainment Stars.

Summary:
"Ding! A suitable host has been detected, and the system is starting to bind."

"My girlfriend has become famous, and our love life has encountered setbacks. 1. If she was dumped, I will give her a Zhonghai City Center Commercial Building as a consolation. 2. If she survived the dumping, I will give her a memory capsule as a congratulations."

Reborn in a parallel world, Zhang Yu is a junior at a music conservatory. His girlfriend becomes a star after participating in a talent show. He thought they were about to break up and live a life of rent-collecting, but unexpectedly, his girlfriend falls out with her agent and the company she signed with.
what should I do?
【Brief Comment】

He has five books under his name, including "My Superstar Girlfriend" and "The Beautiful Star Fell in Love with Me", all of which are about entertainment.

The styles are also relatively uniform, and the differences are actually not that big.

The big thing is the results.

If you write about the same topic too much and repeatedly, your readers will be lost.

Just like posting short videos, if you always post "The Other Side of Deep Space", you won't have much traffic.

The main reason why I want to introduce this new book instead of his completed work is to give the new book more opportunities.

I also want to see what mindset the authors have when they write a new book and how long they plan to keep it going.

I also want to see whether their writing ideas and techniques are in perfect alignment with the market.

It's like buying a lottery ticket, what if you win?

The title and synopsis clearly suggest a trend-following approach. It bears a striking resemblance to a previous book and to many entertainment-themed novels. After reading enough entertainment novels, especially those about music, readers can almost guess which songs the protagonists will copy.

This is the biggest embarrassment of entertainment novels.

What’s even more embarrassing is that if you don’t copy songs, there is no way out.

This book actually has a few highlights. First, the system is unreliable. The rewards for failing quests are often incredibly high, while the rewards for completing them are decent, but they're mostly skill-based. For example, musical instruments, opera, etc., are meant to further enrich the protagonist's career and help his girlfriend further her acting career.

In terms of romance, the protagonist initially refuses a breakup check from his girlfriend's agent, but actually plays a joke on her by writing a large sum on the check. The relationship between the male and female protagonists isn't significantly impacted by one's career advancement; instead, the protagonist continues to compose classic songs, earning him the blessings of his fans.

However, the story does have some significant flaws, which makes the book's performance quite average. One is the frequency of song plagiarism, which is too frequent and can easily wear out the reader's enthusiasm. Everything comes too easily. Good songs are wasted like this, which feels too casual.

First, the supporting characters don't have many screen roles, and the occasional unreliable host asks unreliable questions, which makes the show seem lacking in intelligence. Furthermore, the pacing isn't well-controlled; it's too fast, and the details don't stand up to scrutiny. Before you can even savor the moment, the next song-copying segment rushes on.

However, it seems that all entertainment novels have this problem, so let it be, and everyone can choose according to their personal preferences.

【to sum up】

Writing is not easy, so cherish every moment.

I’m Cang Yiwei, and I’m here to promote “Cang’s Ramblings”.

Welcome to the paradise of book reviews.

【Cang's Ramblings】

Finally, this book review has enough words.

I am very satisfied!

love you~
(End of this chapter)