I am collecting entries in reincarnation

Chapter 86 Second Single Chapter

I posted a post in the comment section about a poisonous point collection, the content is as follows.

You are welcome to post here the parts you think are harmful. I will modify them as appropriate after seeing them.

Whether it's an unreasonable plot, a collapsed character, or an inaccurate setting, including but not limited to various problems in my writing and narration, I really want to improve.

The following are the issues I have summarized during this period.

The first point, which is also what most people think is unreasonable, is that the world is one family, and in ancient times when productivity was insufficient and education levels were not high enough, everyone was forced to be equal.

I admit that I didn't think enough and was too self-satisfied. I didn't think too much about it, because I saw a lot of historical articles written like this. Oh, there are so many plagiarized articles in the world, so I took it and said it later.

But now I find that I am indeed shallow. Although I also wrote about the protagonist climbing the technology tree to improve productivity, the description was very superficial and the argumentation ability was insufficient.

Chapter 23 has been revised now. If you are interested, you can take a look. Since it has been written like this, I cannot make drastic changes. I can only make some minor revisions. If you have any good ideas, please feel free to raise them.

By the way, in fact, it’s not just Chapter 23. I changed a lot of places, and I changed them while reading the comments. Do you know what a growing author is? (Hands on hips.JPG)

Second, many people don't like the way I talk to myself while describing the story, which is more like a storytelling style. This is easy to say and can be changed. I personally like this writing style and find it quite interesting. However, the feedback I've received so far is that it's distracting, so I will probably try not to write like this.

Third, sometimes I will play memes, including but not limited to, a certain martial arts master, lie down, family members, we just say wait.

My original intention was to add a cheerful atmosphere, but the effect might still distract people from the show. I'll use my discretion. I don't want to be a one-size-fits-all approach and I'd like to keep it because I really love to complain.

So the protagonist is my tool for complaining, he will help me complain about the book I wrote.

Finally, if you have other opinions or better ideas, you can post them in the book review section. The reviews in the book review section are more easily seen by me.

Thank you all for your support. I have noticed that the pace of this world is slow at the moment. Although there is still a lot I want to write, I will just give an outline of the Spring and Autumn style in these two chapters.

If anyone wants to read it, I will write a sequel later hh.

Oh my god, I can’t write the main text, but I’m inspired to say something else.

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