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Chapter 218 What else do you need me to do?
Tang Yao saw the legendary producer of "Yun".

Of course... I also noticed his expression.

Tang Yao remained expressionless, she was used to it... She didn't know why, but every visiting staff member seemed to like to make a lot of noise when they saw her.

It was as if she were some kind of demon or monster.

Is it really that unexpected that I am the owner of Avalon?

I didn't eat your rice, so why are you all acting like this is completely unreasonable?

I'm so sorry I'm a shut-in.

Tang Yao complained inwardly, but didn't show it on her face. Instead, she stood up and tried to put on a dignified expression: "Hello."

of course.

It doesn't have much authority.

She is strikingly beautiful and naturally approachable; very few people would perceive her as authoritative or capable of being fierce.

"Hello……"

Wei Chi, somewhat bewildered, pulled out a chair and sat down opposite Tang Yao.

...The owner of Avalon, the company behind FGO, who is very knowledgeable about the preferences of otaku, is actually a beautiful girl?
What kind of otaku fantasy is this?
"..."

Seeing Wei Chi's bewildered expression, Tang Yao decided to cut to the chase and asked, "Hello, what are your plans for the game 'Yun' next?"

Wei Chi finally snapped out of his daze when he heard about the game.

anyway.

The person sitting in front of him now is the one who can decide his life or death in this game.

This has nothing to do with appearance or age.

Think of this.

Wei Chi quickly averted his gaze from Tang Yao's face: "I'm sorry, I didn't expect the leader of Avalon to be so young."

"I also think that Producer Wei is younger than I imagined."

Tang Yao shook her head: "Let's get back to the game."

"This……"

Wei Chi took out a laptop from his briefcase: "I actually brought a follow-up proposal for 'Yun' with me. I wonder if President Tang would be interested..."

Tang Yao's eyes lit up, and she asked curiously, "Can I take a look?"

"it is good."

Wei Chi handed over the laptop.

Tang Yao took the computer, lowered her head slightly, and gently slid her fingertips across the touchpad to start reading.

Her expression gradually became focused, her delicate eyebrows sometimes relaxing and sometimes furrowing slightly.

Wei Chi also took the opportunity to observe this legendary rising star in the gaming world—she was wearing a simple T-shirt and jeans, her long hair was casually tied into a high ponytail, her skin was fair, her features were delicate, and she exuded a youthful vivacity. She was indeed very beautiful, the kind of beauty that was non-aggressive and comfortable to behold.

...But to be honest, he does look more like a student than a business owner.

"very funny."

Tang Yao suddenly raised her head and gave her evaluation.

Wei Chi suddenly came to his senses.

"but……"

After praising her, Tang Yao abruptly changed the subject.

Wei Chi couldn't even admire her beauty anymore; he looked at Tang Yao with some nervousness.

Surely... you're not really going to break your promise?
If the game were really going to add in-app purchases, he might as well have listened to Chu Jian back then, at least he had absolute control over the game at that time.

"However, I feel there are still many aspects of the game that can be improved. Would you mind listening to them?"

Tang Yao then said, "It's basically my personal suggestion."

"Forehead……"

Wei Chi glanced at Tang Yao somewhat nervously: "Please speak."

"First, there's the visual style."

Tang Yao didn't stand on ceremony and pushed the notebook back to him. Then she picked up her phone and said softly, "I took a quick look. Your goal is to create a sense of tranquil philosophical contemplation, so the game's main color is off-white, and the architectural structure uses only basic geometric shapes like cubes and pyramids."

However, you've used too many detailed textures in the game's current textures, such as cracks in the walls. This clashes with the game's 'blocky' style. Could you change it to solid color materials, using only color brightness to distinguish layers?

For example, could the bottom of this floating platform be changed to a semi-transparent light blue to create a texture similar to optical glass? Of course, if you're worried that a solid color is too monotonous, you can use a shader to add a subtle noise texture to the wall, with an intensity of around 0.3. This way, you can achieve both texture and maintain a clean look.

I made a diagram, you can take a look.

Tang Yao picked up her phone and showed him the level design diagrams created by Avalon.

"...?"

With a worried look on his face, Wei Chi, who thought Tang Yao was going to bring up some profit-making points, slowly put a question mark on his face.

He subconsciously reached out and took the phone to look at it, then his eyes widened slightly.

The effect... seems to be much better.

"in addition."

Tang Yao picked up the diagram she had drawn herself and continued, "I think there are some problems with certain levels. For example, the design of the fourth level, the 'Infinite Stairs,' is such that the angle of the stairs is 45 degrees, but it doesn't create a visual illusion after rotating. Could you adjust it to 60 degrees and lengthen the steps? For example, you could refer to the Penrose triangle so that players suddenly realize, 'This path is actually passable,' when they rotate their view."

"...?"

Wei Chi hadn't quite recovered yet, and subconsciously typed a question mark. Then, looking at the diagram in Tang Yao's hand, he replied, "If it's changed to 60 degrees, the character might clip through the screen when walking, right?"

"This can be solved by using a custom collider. As long as the visible model is covered and the logical path is correct, slight clipping is difficult to detect visually."

Tang Yao explained softly, "In addition, if dynamic lighting and shadow changes could be added to this level, such as the light gradually changing from warm yellow to cool blue when the spiral staircase is in motion, it would definitely become a highlight of the game and make it even more amazing."

"...?"

"Also, there's a problem with the music. The background music feels too monotonous and dense. Given the current game style, wouldn't it be better to have some pauses? For example, in the demo levels you sent, wouldn't it be better if each melody was paused for 3 seconds, and when the character was still, subtle ambient sounds, such as distant wind or water droplets, were added?"

"Also, I don't know if you are the programmer of this game, but I'll still remind you that too many polygons in the model will affect performance, especially on mobile devices. The demo you sent has this problem."

"And then there's the narrative pacing..."

Tang Yao shared all the revision suggestions she had gathered over the past few days with Wei Chi without reservation.

From art design, modeling and color matching, to level design, visual illusions, dynamic scene interaction, puzzle difficulty curves, and music and sound effects.

They even provided suggestions on how to implement the technology.

The main focus is on handling every detail.

"..."

Wei Chi was greatly impressed... no, he was deeply shocked.

He had thought about many of the things Tang Yao mentioned, but he didn't have a good solution for them at the moment, and some he simply hadn't thought about at all.

It wasn't until Tang Yao reminded him that he suddenly understood.

Yes.

You can do that!

slowly.

He even felt like he was in class.

And this moment.

He finally felt... that the girl in front of him was truly the owner of Avalon.

Because it's just too strong...

But this was a blow to him.

No.

What am I supposed to do?
Avalon could easily make a similar game themselves...

"You can refer to these things."

After Tang Yao finished speaking, she thought for a moment and, finding nothing missing, handed Wei Chi her draft of revision suggestions: "Of course, you can come to me if you have any questions later. I look forward to the moment your game is officially completed... Also, welcome to Avalon."

"..."

Wei Chi blankly reached out and took the documents, then subconsciously asked, "What about the commercialization design of the game?"

"Your game is not suitable for adding ads or in-app purchases, as this would greatly ruin the game's atmosphere."

Tang Yao gently shook her head: "I plan to adopt a buyout system, what do you think?"

"……what?"

Wei Chi looked at Tang Yao with some confusion.

(End of this chapter)