Depressive screenwriter.

Chapter 75 Turning Point

Sakura online.

"So what does the rabbit mean?"

“Is this yellow and blue rabbit any different from other paper rabbits?”

"The name of this drama is To the Moon. The main plot is to explore why the hero and heroine want to go to the moon. Before Xiaoxi died, she was most concerned about whether Xu Han could take good care of Anya and asked Xu Han what he saw from the paper rabbit. From this point of view, the paper rabbit may be the answer to the mystery."

"It's really a very strange drama. Even in the second episode, I'm still confused about how the plot will develop, but there's nothing I can do. As long as Kayono Takezawa is there, I can keep watching."

"In fact, I was inexplicably moved. When Xiaoxi asked Xu Han what the rabbit represented, the expectation in his eyes, and the sadness when Xu Han finally answered that it was just a rabbit. The true meaning of this rabbit must be very important to Xiaoxi, right?"

"In fact, I feel that the story structure of this work is similar to that of Ancient Love Song! Ancient Love Song is about traveling back in time, while going to the moon is about using instruments to fly through Xu Han's memory world to his youth, or even childhood, to find out the true inner desire of the wish to go to the moon."

"What else? To be honest, if I hadn't just watched Ancient Love Song and had confidence in Su Yan's ability to control the entire script, I definitely wouldn't have been able to stick with the Riddler plot in the first two episodes of Going to the Moon every week."

"Yes, I also felt the similarities between To the Moon and Ancient Love Song in this structure, which made me continue to watch it. But in fact, it looks surprisingly good. Although I still have a vague understanding of the plot, the performances of Qiu Junlin and Takezawa Kayono really made me fascinated."

"So the script is the soul of a work, but the director and actors are the flesh and blood of a work! An interesting soul must be paired with a beautiful appearance to be perfect. An interesting soul paired with a pig-like appearance will make it difficult for you to stick to it. The two actors that Su Yan hired were really good."

"But anyway, no matter how good the acting skills of Qiu Junlin and his wife are, they can only help To the Moon maintain its ratings in the first few weeks. If this kind of Riddler plot continues, I think many viewers will lose their patience."

"That's true."

"There has to be a limit to being slow and warm, and it can't be too much."

The next day, the ratings for the second episode of To the Moon were released.

3.41%, which is not much different from last week, and the ratings ranking is still eighth.

But the news media in Xia country could no longer hold back.

Last week they saw that the first episode of Going to the Moon performed well, and it was only the first episode that showed anything good, so these media did not make any random comments.

But it’s the second week, and the plot rhythm of Going to the Moon is still the same.

The plots of other dramas aired at the same time are quite standard, old-fashioned, but stable.

You were so innovative in going to the moon, but in the second episode you're still playing the Riddler.

Then you can't blame us.

After all, you, Su Yan, are such a prominent and talented new screenwriter in the market.

Who made you so high-profile when you commented on Kiyota Sanji a few days ago?

Moreover, the drama stars two top stars of the previous generation, Qiu Junlin and Takezawa Kayo, and is bound to attract the attention of the older generation of audiences. As long as the two are mentioned in the drama review article, the traffic and popularity will definitely be maximized.

During the day on Sunday, all major media outlets and drama critics began to criticize Going to the Moon.

[Two weeks after the broadcast of To the Moon, the plot is in chaos. I wonder what story the screenwriter is going to tell? ]

[On the surface, the ratings of "Moon" can still maintain the eighth place in the quarter, but in fact, this rating is all supported by the two stars Qiu Junlin and Takezawa Kayono. But how long can this situation last? ] [The genius screenwriter Su Yan is no longer talented, and the ratings of the new drama are all supported by old fans. ]

[Two weeks after its premiere, "Going to the Moon" tells a confusing story, and the riddlers throughout the show leave viewers completely confused.]

[It is foreseeable that when the audience's novelty of the two veteran movie stars, Qiu Junlin and Takezawa Kayono, fades, the ratings of To the Moon may experience a huge decline. ]

[The most boring drama in the winter season! Screenwriter Su Yan, please work harder on the script instead of using boring old movie star sentiments to consume the audience! ]

[From the first two episodes of Going to the Moon, we can see that the popularity of Su Yan Gu Xiang Si Qu and Rurouni Kenshin is purely luck. This drama may become the first tragedy in Xiaguo this year. The abuse it will receive after its completion will definitely exceed that of Shinozaki Yumi's Sakurajima Love Story! ]

[Qiu Junlin and Takezawa Kayo are a couple whose reputation has fallen apart in their later years. Their new work after 15 years will become a joke in the winter season! ]

News media and film critics write articles in any exaggerated way possible.

The real audience for going to the moon still has patience, but these media have already started.

Although Shinozaki Ikumi believed in Su Yan's script, she couldn't help but feel anxious when she saw this situation.

After all, many excellent dramas ended up with unsatisfactory results because of the media's distorted reputation and rhythm.

"These media outlets have given up all their reputation just for traffic. The first two episodes of To the Moon were just a slow burn, it's nothing like what they said." Shinozaki Ikumi turned off her laptop and simply stopped reading online comments.

Su Yan retrieved the file from the USB drive inserted into the crew's computer and started printing.

"Don't worry about what the media says. In fact, their current comments are, in a sense, advertising for going to the moon."

As Su Yan spoke, he handed a stack of documents he had just printed to Shinozaki Yumi.

"Here, here you go. Pretty punctual, right?"

"Is this the script for the seventh episode?" Shinozaki Ikumi took the document with both hands and asked curiously.

"Well, the script for this episode is very important, and you should allocate more budget to this episode. The real turning point of the drama "To the Moon" is in the seventh episode. But in fact, starting from the fourth and fifth episodes, the plot gradually began to become sensational and touching." Su Yan sat down.

"The most difficult period was actually the first three episodes, because the plot was too flat and kept digging holes. But we were lucky to have relied on the popularity and popularity of two veteran stars, Qiu Junlin and Takezawa Kayono, to get through this period..."

Su Yan said this from the side, trying to comfort Shinozaki Yumi, but when he raised his eyes.

But he saw that Shinozaki Ikumi was already concentrating on the script for the seventh episode of To the Moon and didn't hear what he was saying at all.

Su Yan smiled lightly and did not disturb her. Instead, he observed Shinozaki Yumi with interest.

Time passed by minute by minute. At first, Shinozaki Ikumi didn't take it seriously, thinking that Su Yan was setting a trap for her again in this episode.

In the seventh episode, Dr. Cheng Li and Dr. Shen Yi finally explored Xu Han's memory to the other side of the horrible fault in his childhood.
Before Xu Han's miserable childhood began.

Xiaoxi and he actually knew each other for a long time.
Shinozaki Ikumi's eyes widened.

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(End of this chapter)