[Martial Arts] Infinite Chamber Game
Chapter 12: Brilliant Writing
What did you write? This is a good question. The system machine clattered and clattered, and the manuscript was ejected, with bright red comments and scores written on the white paper.
Honestly speaking, the three people present had never met each other before and had different personalities. They were suddenly brought together by the game and forced to write a story. It would be a miracle if they would delve into the plot carefully. They just wrote about things that happened around them - people like them would always experience some strange things that others would never encounter in their entire lives.
It was true that I wrote it casually, but it took me three days after all. There was a pile of scrap paper on the floor. I wrote tens of thousands of words and fed them into the system according to the prompts. But the broken system took less than five minutes to read it and it printed out an unqualified result?
Even someone as good-tempered as Hua Manlou couldn't help feeling a little annoyed. She twisted her fingers into a knot in her sleeves and felt aggrieved.
Li Mochou's mood became much better, especially when she found that the points she got could actually increase various values of her body, such as internal strength, power, agility and so on. She tried to add all the 100 points she had just obtained to internal strength. The moment she added them, she felt a burst of warm heat flowing into her limbs and finally into her dantian. The fatigue from three days of working at the desk was immediately swept away, and she felt as if she had been reborn.
She felt this power with surprise. She saw the green grass, the fragrance of the flowers, and even the little man jumping on the screen. Li Mochou originally wanted to stab it to death with a knife, but now she felt that the tiny paper man jumping up and down was quite cute, so she brushed it with the whisk to sweep away the dust.
You know what, if you can gain inner strength just by writing stories, it would be much faster than practicing hard on your own!
Li Mochou felt that she could write another two million!
The Red Snake Fairy was in a good mood and did not forget to take care of her teammates. After all, the game said when they came in that three people had to pass the level together to get out.
She was also curious. How bad a story would a handsome and well-mannered boy have to write to get six points?
Li Mochou picked up the article "The Decisive Battle at the Forbidden City". Just by looking at the title, she imagined a bloody story in her mind.
"Is this a story about two people who have a deep blood feud and still feel unsatisfied after killing each other's entire family, so they make an appointment to fight each other?
When one defeated the other and was about to kill him, someone jumped out and shouted, "You can't kill him, he is actually your father!"
With such expectation, she continued reading.
"In the Mid-Autumn Festival in August, the roses and osmanthus trees are in full bloom, and the banks of the Yangtze River are crowded with tourists, drinking tea and performing acrobatics, and naughty children are busy chasing butterflies..."
The beginning is quite standard, but at a glance, more than 800 words describe the scenery of Jiangnan, more than 500 words describe seasonal flowers, and then the style changes, more than 1,800 words solemnly introduce the major families and gangs in the entire Jianghu, with names such as so-and-so, so-and-so...
Li Mochou frowned and quickly flipped through three or four pages, but she couldn't find the names of the two men who had the decisive battle, or what the feud was about. However, she did know that the so-called "Top of the Forbidden City" was the highest roof in the imperial palace.
On the roof... If he hadn't mentioned it, Li Mochou would have been wondering which famous mountain or river it was. But why would the duel have to be on the roof of the imperial palace?
She flipped back three or four pages and didn't mention it.
It wasn't until five or six pages later that, thank God, the names of the two protagonists who were going to duel finally came out! As for why they were dueling? I flipped through another seven or eight pages and found:
"Both of them are masters of swordsmanship. There is no hatred between them. However, they know in their hearts that this duel has to take place! No one and nothing can stop it."
No, Li Mochou couldn't understand why the duel was inevitable? Why couldn't it be stopped? You should write this clearly!
She read to the end in one breath and was so angry at the ending that her eyes went dark!
A 40,000-50,000-word storybook! The two people in the duel should be the protagonists, right? The duel should be the highlight, right? In the end, she knew all the delicious cakes in Jiangnan, and she was quite greedy after reading them, but she didn't remember the names of the two protagonists until the last page!
What’s even more infuriating is that after all the nonsense, we finally saw the decisive battle coming. From the two swordsmen drawing their swords to one of them falling down, it only took twenty! Ten! Words!
That’s right, Li Mochou counted every word, and he wrote the so-called decisive battle on the top of the Forbidden City with just twenty words! Finished!
She read the twenty words three or four times before she figured out who the winner was. The ending was horribly scribbled:
"He held the body of his enemy and disappeared into the morning mist."
Li Mochou: "..."
It's what he deserves. Six points is too much!
She took two deep breaths, put down "The Final Battle on the Forbidden City", turned around and picked up "Golden Wind and Drizzle". As soon as she put it down, the other end was picked up by Lei Chun. She had already finished reading her own book "The Whole Family Died in Games", and knowing that Hua Manlou's eyes were not in good condition, she still read it to him softly.
Li Mochou didn't hesitate to let her read. When Lei Chun was about to look at the Forbidden City, she reminded him kindly, "The first three pages are all nonsense. Just read the last three pages."
Lei Chun smiled at her, but her cheeks turned slightly red when she picked up the "Golden Wind and Drizzle" she had written.
Li Mochou didn't understand and read ten lines at a glance.
The plot is simple and ordinary. It tells the story of a young man who inherited a gang organization from his father and gradually developed it into a powerful one.
The young man had been engaged since childhood and had been childhood sweethearts with his fiancée, but at this time something happened that broke the reader's heart.
The young man's fiancée was blocked in the alley and raped!
"The cold moonlight seemed to cover the ground with a layer of white frost. The moment her clothes were torn to pieces, the girl felt like she was falling into ice and snow..."
The story ends here, without an ending, and the ink at the end is the thickest, almost protruding from the paper, which shows that the person who wrote this story hesitated a lot. Li Mochou suddenly remembered that Lei Chun seemed to have announced that he had finished writing long ago.
She did it on purpose and didn't want to write that ending.
Li Mochou's face was livid. She glanced at the manuscript and then at Lei Chun, a girl in her early twenties, stunningly beautiful, with a cold and aloof temperament. This "coldness" was not reflected on her face. She always smiled when she spoke, but she was cold in her bones, as if it was difficult for her to experience many emotions in this world. This reminded Li Mochou of her junior sister who had lived in the ancient tomb for a long time. She was also cold and aloof, but she didn't like to laugh as much as she did.
"Why don't you continue writing? You wrote this story very well. If you had finished it, you wouldn't have gotten more than 30 points." Li Mochou sighed, her voice softened, and she sounded a little sad. "In fact, even if you didn't write it, I know what the ending will be. The girl lost her virginity, and her fiancé is a rare talent. How could he still want her?"
Lei Chun shook his head: "That's not the case."
She took back the stack of manuscripts, crumpled the last two pages into a ball, and crushed them in her palms, then said slowly, "Whether that night happened or not, they will never be together."
"Oh?"
Lei Chun smiled faintly: "The ending is that he killed his fiancée's father, so of course he can't marry her again."
Li Mochou also laughed: "So it's just the death of his father. That's not a big deal. As long as two people truly love each other, what does it matter if their father dies?"
Lei Chun: “…”
That’s a big deal!
As if mocking himself, Lei Chun's smile became somewhat desolate: "How could he really want to marry her, and how could the woman really want to marry him? It's just a game between these two forces. The Jianghu is originally a place where men fight for power and profit, how can there be room for true love?"
Li Mochou rolled her eyes at her and said, "Listen to your fart."
Hua Manlou sighed: "Girls really shouldn't be involved in such dangerous places. They should be in a small courtyard full of flowers, with a confidant and caring husband, and..." Before he finished his sentence, he keenly felt two cold glances scraping at him.
He shut his mouth tactfully.
……
The venue where the Miaobishenghua trio cleared the level was probably one of the most comfortable environments among all the teams.
They lived in a completely modern house with three bedrooms, two living rooms, a kitchen and three bathrooms. Everything they needed for daily life could be found in the house. Not only did they have three meals a day on time in the kitchen, but they also occasionally found some snacks in the workroom, such as sweet fruit tea, various candied fruits, and colorful candies... Not only was there everything they needed for food and drink, but they could also see the vast ocean when they opened the window. Apart from not being able to go out, there was really nothing to complain about here.
After a quick meal, the game quickly released new tasks.
"Write a story on the theme of love and hate. The word count requirement is over 600,000. The time requirement is 30 days. The reward for completing the task is 1,000 points, and you can draw a skill once."
As soon as the task was released, Hua Manlou let out a long sigh, Lei Chun looked into the distance, no one knew what he was thinking, only Li Mochou rubbed his hands together, his fingers crackling.
She straightened the manuscript and suddenly said, "I have an idea. Since this story is 600,000 words long, it will be difficult to finish it in 30 days if we each write our own. How about we work together?"
Lei Chun said: "How to cooperate?"
Li Mochou said, "I'll give you the general story, Miss Lei, you'll organize the context, and Mr. Hua, you'll be the one who touches up the story, okay?"
There's nothing wrong with nature.
Hua Manlou was already grinding ink and spreading paper. He smiled and said in a gentle voice, "I think Miss Li has a plan in mind. I am all ears."
Li Mochou said, "Isn't this easy? I think it would be great if we put together the stories you two wrote before."
"The names are all ready-made. It's about Ximen Chuxue's victory at the top of the Forbidden City. He unexpectedly discovered that his wife had cheated on him with Su Mengzhen and that their child was Su Mengzhen's. Ximen Chuxue was deeply ashamed and was about to kill the adulterous couple with a sword, but he fell in love with them on the way..."
She glanced at "Golden Wind and Drizzle" and found that the poor fiancée didn't even leave a name, so she had to go back to "The Final Battle of the Forbidden City" to look for it. After searching for a long time, Li Mochou's eyes lit up: "Fell in love with Lu Xiaofeng! He didn't know that although Lu Xiaofeng was Su Mengzhen's fiancée, she had been in love with Ye Gucheng for a long time. She hooked up with Ximen Chuxue in order to avenge Ye Gucheng!"
"As they were arguing over their grievances, Lu Xiaofeng suddenly discovered that she was pregnant. At this moment, Bai Choufei suddenly stood up and told everyone that the child was his!"
"What do you think?"
(End of this chapter)
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