Douluo: The narration was modified and the plot began to collapse.

Chapter 1: Modified narration, Brother 3 starts cooking history

Chapter 1: Modified narration, Brother San starts cooking history
Holy Soul Village, Bai Yu traveled through time.

The standard configuration for time travel: both parents are dead, the family is penniless.

But fortunately the system has arrived.

[Ding, congratulations on binding to the text modification system. You can modify the narration to affect the plot. Current modification opportunities: three basic modifications, one low-level modification]

"Can the narration be modified to affect the plot?!"

Bai Yu was so happy, this is such a great concept!
But then he calmed down and asked:
"System, you are so strong, there must be a limit, right?"

System: [Yes, I will remind you when the specific situation occurs.]

After listening to this, Bai Yu rubbed his hands and said impatiently:

"Quick, give me a plot!"

[Current plot: Six-year-old Bai Yu stands at home, penniless. ]

[Hint: You can change "six" to "eight" and "stand" to "sit"]

[Tip: Currently, the basic modification opportunity can change one word, and the low-level modification opportunity can change two words. And it can only be modified, and the functions of adding and replacing have not been unlocked yet.]

Bai Yu chuckled and said that the basic modification opportunities were enough.

He simply changed "poor" to "rich"!
The system went silent.

Niema, what does it mean to be rich as a beggar?
Bai Yu asked anxiously:
"System, system, please don't go offline!"

At Bai Yu's urging, there was a burst of ping-pong sounds coming from the bathroom. Bai Yu rushed over and saw that the bath water in the bathtub suddenly turned into gold soul coins, almost blinding his eyes.

A pot of gold soul coins!

Bai Yu was stunned. If he took a bath with gold soul coins, wouldn't that mean he would be rich?

At this time, the system said:
【Congratulations on your successful modification, and you get 1 point. 】

【你每次修改都会获得1点积分,每1点积分可以兑换一次基础修改机会,10点兑换低级修改机会。100点兑换中级修改机会。1000点兑换高级修改机会。积分也可以兑换盲盒。】

[Three free basic modification opportunities will be refreshed at 0: every day. 】

Bai Yu asked quickly:

“What is the difference between low-level, mid-level, and high-level revision opportunities?”

[The difference in the extent of modification. The extent of modification for basic is the smallest and cannot directly modify the strength. The extent of modification for low-level, intermediate-level, and advanced-level is larger in turn.]

[In addition, if you want to unlock more features, I need to upgrade. Every time you make a change, I will gain experience points. The greater the difference between your modified plot and the original, the more experience points I will gain.]

Bai Yu touched his chin. In other words, the more outrageous the modifications I make, the more experience points the system will gain?
Thousands of outrageous thoughts suddenly flashed through his mind, but were interrupted by a knock on the door.

Bai Yu covered the bathtub with a cloth, then walked over and opened the door, only to find that it was the village elder, Old Jack.

Old Jack said with a smile:
"Xiao Yu, today is the day for your martial soul to awaken. Come on, I'll take you to awaken."

Bai Yu showed a sunny and cheerful smile:

"Thanks, Grandpa Jack!"

At this time, Tang San popped up from behind Old Jack, and Bai Yu greeted him:
"Hello, Xiaosan!"

The original owner was a sunny and cheerful boy who had a good relationship with the villagers.

Tang San nodded in response, and the two of them followed Old Jack to call the other children to awaken their martial spirits together.

At this time, Bai Yu checked the system's plot:

[Tang San prepared a bowl of porridge for Tang Hao, and then followed Old Jack to awaken his martial spirit.]

The system will give the plot at every moment, and Bai Yu can check it anytime and anywhere, and then decide whether to change it or not.

Old Jack called all the children of school age in the village to prepare to awaken their martial spirits. At this moment, Tang Hao rushed over from a distance, cursing wildly:
"Rebellious son! Rebellious son! I will beat you to death!"

Tang San was horrified and didn't understand why his father suddenly went crazy, so he quickly hid behind Old Jack.

Old Jack was also horrified, and hurriedly protected Tang San, questioning Tang Hao:
"Tang Hao, what's wrong with you?" Tang Hao held up the hammer he usually used for blacksmithing and glared at Old Jack angrily, his tongue trembling with anger:
"Tang San, this rebellious son, cooked me a bowl of rice, a bowl of rice."

Old Jack frowned:
"A bowl of porridge is too little for you? Xiao San is only six years old. He not only has to take care of himself every day, but also has to take care of you. Don't you think about what you, as a father, have given Xiao San besides adding burden to him?"

"You know nothing!"

Tang Hao finally straightened his tongue and roared:

"Tang San, this rebellious son, cooked me a bowl of Shi!"

Old Jack tickled his ears, looking confused.

The children froze in their places, wondering if they had heard it wrong.

Even Tang San was confused and wondered if his father had gone crazy.

Tang Hao gritted his teeth and said:
"Don't believe it? If you don't believe it, come and see!"

Everyone followed Tang Hao to his house, and saw a bowl on the stove, with...
"vomit!"

Old Jack's stomach churned, he looked at Tang San and questioned:

"Xiao San, what do you mean by this? No matter how useless Tang Hao is, he is still your father. How dare you, how dare you..."

He couldn't speak anymore.

You can't help it, not only made a bowl of Shi, but also cooked it with your nose pinched, and served it in a bowl considerately
When Old Jack thought of the way Tang San stood in front of the stove, he felt sick!
Tang San's face turned pale. He didn't know that Tang Hao was a Titled Douluo, but he felt the murderous aura, so he knelt on the ground with a thud.

"Father, I cooked porridge. I don't know why it turned out like this!"

Tang Hao was so angry that his beard trembled and he cursed:
"Bullshit! Do you mean to insult my intelligence?!"

Tang San wailed:

"No, father, that's not what I meant, but I really don't know what's going on!"

Old Jack looked at Tang San's pitiful appearance and couldn't help but soften his heart. He said to Tang Hao:

"Tang Hao, Xiao San shouldn't be that kind of person. He probably didn't do this."

Tang Hao suppressed his anger and said:
"If it wasn't him, could it be me?"

At this time, Bai Yu said beside him:

"Uncle Tang Hao, it's possible that a small animal sneaked into your house, drank up all the porridge, and even pooped a big pile of shit inside."

Old Jack slapped his thigh:
"Xiao Yu, what you said makes sense! Anyway, Tang Hao, you were sleeping too at that time. You were sleeping so soundly that you didn't even know a small animal had sneaked in!"

Tang San was like grabbing a life-saving straw, and was extremely grateful to Bai Yu. He followed Bai Yu's words and explained:
"Yes, yes, father, that must be the case!"

After hearing what they said, Tang Hao barely calmed down his anger.

Although he was a Titled Douluo, he was indeed sleeping just now and did not release his soul power, so he knew nothing.

Tang Hao looked at Tang San:

"Okay, clean this place up for me."

Old Jack said:
"Tang Hao, today is the day of your martial spirit awakening"

"Humph, isn't it the same whether he goes earlier or later? If he goes a few minutes earlier, will his martial arts spirit be better?"

Tang Hao waved his hand and said:
"I'm upset. I'm going to take a nap. Xiaosan, clean up the house before you go."

"Yes, father."

Tang San sighed, walked over and picked up the bowl, but when he looked at the contents of the bowl, he vomited.

Old Jack had a strange expression on his face, pinching his nose and saying:
"Children, let's go and awaken our martial spirits first."

When the children around him heard this, they ran away one by one!
It stinks!
(End of this chapter)

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