Tokyo, everyone is drawing comics, who still wants to fall in love?.

Chapter 569 The serialized version of "Dragon Ball" seems different?
Finally, some haters on the Internet couldn't stand it anymore.

[Oda Shingo's new work "Dragon Ball" is just average. 】

[I really want to ask, Mr. Oda, do you want me to teach you how to draw funny comics? ]

[You clearly want to be funny but don't know how to start. You clearly have a lecherous bald turtle hermit, but you don't let him do anything. ]

[Is it because you want to show it to your children that you can't even draw comics? At least your level in Dragon Ball is not worthy of the title of Great Demon King! ]

Soon, comic fans started posting comments, some fighting back and some agreeing, and many people felt that it seemed to make some sense.

It seems that "Dragon Ball" really has some shortcomings, and this up's analysis is correct.

Is it true that Mr. Oda was a little too confident? Is Dragon Ball a work that has fallen short of its standards after being overconfident?

After someone came out to publicly criticize the series, many up-stars soon began to criticize the series.

[The plot is not intense enough, and it is just funny but lacks highlights. ]

[This is just the simplest funny comic for children, everyone go away! ]

[Don't blame Mr. Oda, he just wants to improve too much. ]

[After all, the official food at the Ministry of Culture must be delicious. If you follow the official, you will have everything you dream of. ]

In response to these cyber attacks, Shingo Oda made a rare reply in his YouTube profile:
"You're talking about Dragon Ball? Haha!"

He took the initiative to come out just to stir up more heated discussions.

As expected, his appearance was like a clarion call for counterattack, and immediately a large number of die-hard fans began to debate.

Major forums have started a heated discussion about "Dragon Ball", and many people have even launched a vote to let everyone vote on whether they think this comic is good.

Most of the passers-by were just there to watch the fun. Many people knew that this was only one episode in the series and the situation was still unclear.

"Are you really not in a hurry?" Fujido Kaoru looked at Oda Shingo's steady look and couldn't help but remind him, "The reputation of your film is the lowest ever."

Her white finger pointed at the computer screen, which was a report sent by her female assistant Lingzi.

In the popularity comparison table, the historical performance of "Dragon Ball" compared with "Cells at Work!" during the same period showed that although there were more people online at the beginning, the subsequent downward trend in the number of people was obviously weaker than the latter.

The number of people reading comics online is definitely decreasing gradually, but it’s decreasing faster than before, which clearly shows a lack of sustained appeal.

"Xiangcheng is right, don't be careless." Namikaze Youhe also reminded him to be careful.

"That makes sense. I'll keep an eye on it." Oda Shingo carefully considered the differences between the two eras and reviewed the story outline of Dragon Ball again.

The plot of the Black Silk Army is retained, and the plot of the Rabbit Demon King can be completely deleted. The plot of the Bull Demon King is retained, after all, Qiqi's appearance needs a backup. There are also many branch plots that can be considered for deletion.

Then, enter the First Martial Arts Tournament as soon as possible! The Black Silk Army plot is triggered, Tao Baibai appears, and then the Piccolo Demon King! Oda Shingo made up his mind.

He reorganized the story and planned a new serialization plan.

The story content of the second serial will be more compact than the original on Earth, after all, it has to adapt to the changes of the times.

"This guy is quite receptive to advice." Fujido Kacheng and Namikaze Youhe whispered.

Namikaze Youhe just said softly: "It's good to believe in me."

"When someone stops listening to our advice, it probably means they're tired of having fun," Fujido Kaoru is very realistic.

Although it sounds harsh, it makes sense. Namikaze Youhe rolled his eyes at her and said, "So we have to control it. It should be once a month. He has already done it this month, so before the end of the month, both of you should stop indulging him."

Fujido Kaoru nodded and looked at Oda Shingo unhappily: "The key is that he can't help himself."

"I'll pay attention." Yuko Mikami came over and agreed, and subconsciously moved her butt on the chair.

Namikaze Youhe was firm: "Keep an eye on him. The defense outside is impenetrable, and the fire control inside is unified."

"Mrs. Yukino hasn't come here recently, which saves me a lot of worry." Fujido Kaoru suddenly said.

Yuko Mikami wondered: "Yeah, why doesn't she come over?"

In her opinion, Oda Shingo is definitely greedy for Mrs. Yukino. Of course, she has the capital, and if she were a man, she would definitely covet her beauty.

Fujido Kaoru suddenly made a strange judgment: "That night when it snowed, Mrs. Yukino had succeeded, so she was tired of Shingo? Or was she not very satisfied?" "That shouldn't be the case. Teacher Oda is so powerful... uh..." Mikami Yuko said halfway and realized that she had said something wrong, so she quickly retracted her words.

The two women looked at her with contempt.

"What are you mumbling about? Get to work!" Oda Shingo acted like a black-hearted boss.

He specifically walked up to Yuko Mikami and pointed out several places in the painting where the styles were not integrated enough.

Feeling guilty, Yuko Mikami quickly kept silent and began to write down and correct the mistakes.

I wonder what readers will think of the two versions of Dragon Ball. Maybe it will be very interesting. Oda Shingo smiled and planned to watch the fun.

However, many people in the industry have noticed that the initial weakness of "Dragon Ball" is undeniable.

Even editors inside Springfield Books were cautiously muttering:
"Will Mr. Oda Shingo really fail this time?"

"Don't talk nonsense. When has Mr. Oda ever disappointed us?"

"But this time, it's the worst opening result ever, right?"

"Our 'Champion' will be released tomorrow. Haven't you seen the manuscript?"

"Eh? I really didn't see it. Could it be that..."

"Hey, let's go and take a look, things are not simple."

The skeptical editor immediately logged into the system and saw the upcoming publication.

"Actually..."

The next day, a new issue of "Champion" was published.

"The new episode of Naruto is finally here!"

“I’m dying of waiting!”

"How did the game go?"

"It's rare to see a work that attracts me so much in these years."

The queue outside the bookstore was quite spectacular, with many UP hosts live-streaming the sales, it was almost like the queue for the hottest game launch.

Now "Naruto" has become the leading manga of "Champion", there is no dispute about this, and everyone comes for it.

As expected, the plot lived up to expectations. Naruto's battles were fun and full of passion and enthusiasm.

There comes a big plot twist, as Orochimaru appears in the examination room in an undisguised identity to implement a plan to collapse Konoha.

Fans read all five episodes in one go and were fascinated by the increasingly fascinating plot and the exceptionally outstanding battles.

"The next one is Dragon Ball. I've already seen it on the web version. It's not that big..."

"Hey?"

“It seems the content is not exactly the same.”

"Wow, Goku-chan doesn't even recognize a girl's body?"

"Hahaha, Bulma is in big trouble!"

"Little Goku actually uses Bulma as a pillow? I'm so envious! I also hope to have such good fortune!"

"Yamcha saw Bulma taking a bath?"

"He made a fortune! We made a fortune too! It turns out that the serialized version of "Dragon Ball" in "Champion" is different from the version published by the Ministry of Culture!"

Comic fans quickly discovered the highlights.

The serialized version of "Dragon Ball" seems to be really interesting?!

(End of this chapter)